Date: September 30, 2007 07:56 am Title: Chapter 3: Miscommunications
ooo i liked that!
i hope you end up writing another chapterrr! i want to see what will happen [:
Date: January 16, 2007 06:34 am Title: Chapter 3: Miscommunications
Bummer, I was hoping it was Karen not Kelly. Though Kelly was good for a laugh, as usual.
10 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2007 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 3: Miscommunications
I've been meaning to write you and tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. I really like your characterizations - I can't wait to read more!
Date: January 15, 2007 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 3: Miscommunications
I really liked this one. So many emotions! Poor Roy, poor Pam, poor Jim, poor Karen. I liked how the truth was forced out rather publicly. And I always love Kelly as a Cupid/plot device. Heh. Interesting that you left things quite unresolved at the end. How long before Jim remembers that he forgot the details again?
Date: January 15, 2007 12:14 am Title: Chapter 3: Miscommunications
lovely! can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: January 14, 2007 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 3: Miscommunications
He watched her walk away and he felt himself sliding back into his old skin.
I LOVE that line! Keep it coming!
Date: January 14, 2007 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 3: Miscommunications
Oooh, I can totally see this happening JUST this way. I like how Karen is annoyed, but not bitchy. She seems like the kind of gal that would keep her cool, but demand honesty. Looking forward to more of this!
Date: January 14, 2007 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 3: Miscommunications
Another great chapter. Well done! And this isn't a reflection of your story as much as it is with my fear of the show's direction. I read this and I can't help but feel that Jim's a bit of a jackass. I know he's trying to move on, but those of use able to hear his thoughts know he is still in love with Pam. Ugh, can't they just talk already (on the show and in fic)..LOL
9 [Report This]Date: January 14, 2007 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 3: Miscommunications
I think you write Karen really well! I hope that you give us a happy jim and pam ending though. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: January 14, 2007 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 3: Miscommunications
"Pam would never be this up front with him…this honest." I love that you pointed this out. It really is the crux of things. Pls continue!