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Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2017 09:17 pm Title: Third Time's a Charm... Or not.

This is a great concept, and I think it's really well-executed. Wish it had hit the ten chapters suggested by the first introduction.

Reviewer: impish1 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2007 02:44 pm Title: Third Time's a Charm... Or not.

You did such a good job with this story. I hope you decide to finish it ;-)

Reviewer: jackbauerforpresident Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13, 2007 08:13 pm Title: Third Time's a Charm... Or not.

Hmmm...really enjoying this. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: bnbrice Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29, 2007 01:04 pm Title: Third Time's a Charm... Or not.

great story! please keep going!

Reviewer: Snoznoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 08:21 pm Title: Third Time's a Charm... Or not.

lol... Keep going I wanna see him get the girl already! You could always make him do the ridiculous stuff like completely defying Michael and doing whatever he wants like Groundhog day... But it might be a bit too serious for that... But update soon!

Reviewer: Julie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2007 10:18 pm Title: Third Time's a Charm... Or not.

Omgosh I'm so glad you wrote another chapter!!!  lol  ee keep writing  You're so good at the suspense stuff! it's killing me

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2007 01:54 pm Title: Third Time's a Charm... Or not.

I love the voicemail from Pam. Because even though she has "good news" - she would still rather talk about the stuff she would have shared with him, and the focus is still on him. Very astute.

Keep going, now!

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2007 08:29 am Title: Third Time's a Charm... Or not.

HA!  The song!  Loved it!

You've made an unbelievable situation believable.  Looking forward to what Mr. Halpert tries next! 

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2007 07:31 am Title: Third Time's a Charm... Or not.

Wow. Was not expecting that . Another great chapter - and so creative and well written! I can't wait for the next one :)

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2007 06:38 am Title: Third Time's a Charm... Or not.

Poor Jim!  "Why couldn't he have relived last year's Dundies?"  So true! 

And the Seth Green reference -- hee!  (I was thinking more 'Austin Powers'... 'You're the diet coke of evil, not quite evil enough....')  Cannot wait to see what else is in store for Jim.

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2007 06:31 am Title: Third Time's a Charm... Or not.

Soooooo good.  I can't wait to see what else Jim/You have up your sleeves!!

Reviewer: Sheppy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 29, 2007 12:18 am Title: Third Time's a Charm... Or not.

Ooh, I like this premise.  I almost made myself wait until it was complete to start reading it, but I couldn't help myself.  :)  More, more, more!

Reviewer: Beth Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 11:05 pm Title: Third Time's a Charm... Or not.

I love how you wrote Mark!  Good chapter....I am looking forward to seeing what finally lets Jim move on tho friday.  Great story!!

Reviewer: shan21 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 11:03 pm Title: Third Time's a Charm... Or not.

My excitement over this fic has reached ridiculous proportions. When I saw the update I had a mini party in my head. There were streamers, but they weren't green so it's okay.

Please continue quickly! 

Reviewer: Lucy Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2007 10:19 pm Title: Third Time's a Charm... Or not.

Loving this!

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