No matter how much this couple is perfect for each other, they are bound to have flaws. Jim and Pam head to marriage counseling, and learn to deal with their issues in a semi adult manner.
That was really wonderful. I've been quietly obsessed with this story since you began writing it. I loved the whole idea of this fic, it was so realistic and you did a wonderful job of giving Jim and Pam real complex issues. I also really liked that the story didn't end with a neat bow. You did a wonderful job writing two very interesting, complex people while still staying true to the characters of Jim and Pam. I can't wait to read whatever you write next!
After a fire destroys her apartment, Pam moves in with Jim and Karen. Everyone has to find out how they define "friendship". Not for those who prefer their Jim to be wholesome.
You should definitely continue. This fic is really good, sort of sad, but really good and now I'm all into it and I have to know how it ends...
A few people run into Jim Halpert at the Super Walmart.This is really wonderful. I'm not usually a fan of the running into the ex story, but you've managed to write such a great story I've overcome my prejudice. You're doing a great job of writing Jim and Pam and I can't wait to read more.
Yayy! You updated. I'm a really big fan of this fic. I love it, so well written and you've done a really good job of capturing all the character. This was such a good fight, very well written and so believable. I can't wait to read more!
I loved this! As a former photo lab technician (at CVS not WalMart) I know how truly disturbing the pictures that people drop off can be. Trust me I have seen some truly horrific stuff and its usually only ugly people that photograph themselves. But I digress... This was a really great update, I'm a huge fan of this fic and I always look forward to your updates. Your writing is great and you've done a wonderful job of capturing all the characters. I can't wait to read more, update soon!
Yayy! Another baby good for Jim and Pam. You did a great job with this update, particularly writing Creed. I can't wait to read more!
That was so good. These just keep getting better and better, which is a very good reason to continue... I loved Pam during labor making Jim fetch things and I love that Jim's the kind of guy who would follow such a totally insane request. I loved the Todd Packer/Jim confrontation, I really believed that in this situation Jim would totally snap. You've done a really wonderful job with this whole fic, I throughly enjoyed reading every update and I can't wait to read whatever you write next.
Pam gets a taste of what her life could be like. AUYayy! Another great update. You're doing a really wonderful job of capturing Pam's character in this really extreme situation. I totally believe everything that she's thinking and feeling. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. That really means a lot. More is on the way!
Yayy! I really love this story and I'm so glad that you updated... I love how naturally Pam is fitting into her new life. I can't wait to read more and find out what happens next!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you like it!
Yayy! I'm so glad that you updated. You're doing a really great job, I love how Pam still feels connected to this life even though she's totally confused. I can't wait to read more and see where you take it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. There is a new chapter coming soon!
Oooh. I really like this. I have to admit that Nicholas Cage movie is a total guilty pleasure of mine. I can't wait to read more and see where this fic goes. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Definitely a guilty pleasure of mine, too. I'm glad you like what I've got. More is on the way. Thanks for reviewing!
Yayy! I just love this story and I'm so glad to see that you updated. I love the whole fic, and Pam's reaction to everything going on is so believable. I can't wait to read more and see how this ends!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it!
“I need someplace to stay.” She said this so softly he had to strain to hear her in the stillness of the evening, leaning toward her slightly. Something inside of him suddenly wanted to protect her.
Wow. I really love this story. The whole idea is very original and you've done a wonderful job of writing it. I can fully believe that this fight with Roy was Pam's breaking point and that she would turn to Jim when she really needed a friend. I can't wait to find out what happens next, especially now that Pam knows she's the "holy grail". Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: thank you! I'll try to post soon
Yayy! An update. Poor Jim, that guy just needs to get better timing. I really liked the quiet simplicity of this chapter and how Jim and Pam managed to say so much to each other with out actually saying that much. This was another great update, I am on the edge of my seat, I can't wait to read more!
Wow. That was really great. I loved Pam's scenes with Mark, that was really well written and made so much sense. I could really see where all that awkwardness would come from. I love how honest Jim and Pam are trying to be with each other. And that ending was just, really, really great. Man, Jim is a total superhero for being able to pull away from that. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: ;-) Jim IS a superhero. thanks for the review!
I absolultely love this. Finally someone is writing a fic about how dangerous shower sex is! This so something that would happen to Jim and Pam. I can't wait to read more!!! You're doing a wonderful job, keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you! Honestly, every time I read adventurous type sex stories I think, oh someone would so get hurt that way! I can just say I think this kind of thing would be just my luck. I loved writing them together in this, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! I was nervous to post this one, so I'm really happy you liked it.
The road to perfection isn't paved in gold.I LOVED THIS. This was so good, so very, very good. I loved their first date, how it started off so sweetly and lovely then just went straight to hell. I can totally see something like that happen, and I really liked the way that whole scene was written. It felt so authentic and totally in character. I thought you did a brilliant job of capturing all the characters, and I really liked how you wrote Karen. This was a really wonderful, fresh take on the first date and I loved it. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your comments. I was really worried I wouldn't do Karen justice so I'm glad you were happy it.
Jim and Pam and two telephones, post-Season 3.This fic is really great. I love the banter, I keep laughing out loud. You're doing such a great job, I absolutely love this I can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thanks, redziggy!
I. LOVE. THIS. I'll admit, I was reluctant when I read the synopsis, but you've completely won me over. Future fic, especially this far into the future isn't usually my thing, but you're writing and characterization are so good I'm already addicted. I love both the boys and the relationship that Jim and Pam still have. I can't wait to read more and see Jim's reaction to Roy! Please update soon, summer is so boring without new t.v. I need good fic to get me through!
Dinner, and what happened later. Post-Season 3.Good Lord that was good. I'm becoming obsessed with this fic in a very unhealthy way. You're doing a wonderful job and this is literally how I would imagine their first date. You've done a great job of writing the characters well and capturing who they are. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you, redziggy. And I apologize for contributing to your unhealthy fanfic obsessions! ;)
What if Pam confronted Jim a little sooner than on Beach Day? A S3 AU angst-fest, complete with uneaten pizza. Spoilers up to/around Business School....Holy Crap!!! I just started reading this fic and I really love it. Its a great twist and I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for updates! I can't wait to read more!!!
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