MEMBER'S CHOICE TOP NOMINEE - Jim and Pam must interact in network sponsored live chats to promote their documentary. Angst (and maybe some smut) ensue.
Story now complete.
10 Wow, I just love your stories! I guess you'll need a little break after you wrap up this one with the epilogue but I hope the writing bug bites you again soon!
10 I DEFINITELY think you have more stories like this in you! I love your stories! Take a break, eat some turkey, get inspired and help us all through the WGA strike!
Thanks so much for writing this. It is one of my favorite MTT stories of all time. I really enjoy how you get into so many characters' heads and how interestingly you use the chat & mail formats. Really great stuff.
9 Oh, this chapter had me laughing out loud! Great prank.
Post-Benihana Christmas fic!
Remember when Jim and Pam convinced Dwight that a CIA helicopter would pick him up on the roof? Well, neither of them could resist showing up that night to see the prank to it's conclusion.
9 Loving it! I feel so excitd with them. Great job.
More chapters soon??
10 Great story! I hope you find time between classes to write the next chapter! Get to the sofa...
Author's Response: Thanks! Hehehe. I found time to update... 11 months later. But I did it! And we finally get to the sofa :)
10 Whew! MAN was that worth the wait!!!!! Such sweet tension ... es delicioso!
I'm thinking 5 - 6 more chapters, myself! C'mon, you have it in you!
I forgot ... congratuations on your new job!
What Jim will remember about their night at Schrute Farms.
Spoilers for "Money."
Beautiful! I love the ending.
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falulatonks requested a Pam/Kelly make-over fic based on the song Popular from Wicked. Kelly gives Pam some basic pointers on improving her image and the rest, as they say, is history. Spoilers up the The Job. Wow. This was just beautiful. I love how you show just little glimpses of a deeper side to Kelly and the ambivalence Pam feels about the developing friendship.
10 This is just OUTSTANDING. I think you did such a wonderful job explaining what thoughts were coursing through Pam's mind as she made this difficult decision.
10 Wow. These are really good. You are so sympathetic to all the characters. Are you SURE there are only three chapters to this story? There should be more!
9 What a great chapter! I really like how you handled the way Pam & Jim talked through their heartache.
Author's Response: Thank you, Vampiric Blood! I like to think Jim and Pam are very stop-and-go when it comes to arguing. Thanks for reading!
10 I really love how you handled the tension between Jim and Pam. I think your take on how Jim would've been so reticent about fully exposing himself again rings true. The dialog, descriptions ... it's all so good. I'm sorry it's complete!
Author's Response:
It's a relief to hear you say that his reticience rings true -- I hadn't really thought about it prior to "Money." But there seemed to be such a marked shift in him after that conversation with Dwight that it seemed as if maybe he'd turned a critical corner.
Thanks so much for reviewing!
8 This is very nice. So sympathetic to all the characters and really believable scenarios for their interactions. I like it a lot.
Author's Response: Thanks much. One of my favorite parts of this show is how much they manage keep any character from being completely unsympathetic (though I think they verge into that territory with Meredith, but that's another conversation). Thanks for reading and commenting.
8 I really like this.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Completed10 Great chapter! I especially like that Jim realizes the parallel between the level of effort in the two Christmas gifts. I hadn't even thought about that.
Next soon?
Yet another story inspired by a song by Ingrid Michaelson called Breakable. I really wanted to tell a story about people being just that -- breakable, and ultimately how grace helps keep us from falling apart. So yeah -- a nice fluffy holiday piece. ;-)10 Just reread this Lovefool. This is such an amazing piece of writing. You develop all the characters so well. The pacing and dialogue are perfect. You convey so much angst, ambivalence and love on the part of all the characters. This is just gorgeous.
With every choice we don't make, we create a universe...
WARNING: This is like, angst, to the tenth power, but I can promise a happy ending, if not exactly the one you might have in mind...
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
8 Really interesting story, Shassafrass. You should finish it!
MEMBER'S CHOICE - "She didn't analyze it. Not talking to him had been weird and hard and lonely; talking to him made her happy."It's been so long since I read this. And it's still just as fresh. I love your characterizations, and the dialogue, and the hesitating progress to the story (at the beginning) till we go, um, full throttle. Great stuff!
9 WHAT a great first effort! Good pacing, good dialog. You've really captured the urgency and nervousness of the first date very nicely. I liike it a lot.
8 Wow! Great plot development. Perfectly rational decision to quit D-M. But we know he won't quit Pam, right?
I'm glad you got over the writer's block. I absolutely love your stories and I've been waiting for an update!
10 Oh wow. I've been waiting for the next chapter. This is just great. Very much looking forward to the phone call and its aftermath!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are liking this. I hope you like what happened (will happen) with the phone call. I appreciate your review.
8 I like this a lot. Especially the ending. Very nice.
Go for it – more chapters!
Author's Response: I'm definitely thinking about it :) Thanks so much for reading!
A story of loss, love, and inspiration.10 This is just great!! You made everything come alive in this chapter. Your hard work really paid off handsomely!