Typical slow days at the office with the Ladies of Dunder Mifflin.
10 Great chapter. I love the Angela, Dwight, Roy moment. Can't wait to see what happens.
10 OMG, The Kelly dialog was perfect!
10 I was going to wait until the end of the story to leave a review, but this chapter was too funny. I cannot stop laughing over the "Michael's measurements" paragraph. Great writing!
Michael decides to take his sales dream team on a little trip and pulls Pam along for the ride. Spoilers through Cocktails.Loved this story. The best Office story I have ever read and it didn't even make JAM happen. Your writing is great and references to other shows/movies was amazing. I can't wait to read more by you.
10 Loved this story. The best Office story I have ever read and it didn't even make JAM happen. Your writing is great and references to other shows/movies was amazing. I can't wait to read more by you.
A response to the 55 challenge! (Don't own any of the characters...)
Oops! I added the next chapter of Cardiac Care to this story by accident. Sorry.
10 So sweet! I loved it.
10 Great twist in this chapter. I loved it. That seems very much like something Kevin would do. I'd like to hope Packer will learn from this experience, but I'm sure he won't.
10 I absolutely loved this story. You did such a good job with the "behind the scenes" of a hidden romance. I loved the dinner setting and the "never nude" shorts.
Poor Toby =) I liked how the girl looked similar to Pam.
10 One of my favorite stories from you. Can't have a good Andy story without some singing.
10 This story was so sweet and it was nice to see another side of Kelly. I think this is my favorite in the series so far.
Classic Creed! Great job!
9 So sweet and innocent. A new side of Michael and Jan that I loved. Great description of Michael's mother.
Title says it all.
10 I loved Chapters 1 and 3 of this story. Chapter 2 just wasn't what I expected. The twists in Ch. 1 were great and I'm glad Jim and Pam are finally together.
What would have happened if Jim had been a little later getting back to the office?
9 Great writing. I can't wait to see where this story goes.
Nooooooo. This is too sad.
10 You can't stop here. This story makes me want more. So sad, but I really want to know what is going to happen. When's the next chapter due?
Author's Response: Chapter 6 is being betaed as I type this, and Chpater 7 is in the works :)
10 The mother of all twists. Now I really can't wait for Chapter 7!
9 Wow. That is really a mix up. Can't wait to see how Roy got this wrong.
9 I'm loving it! I still can't believe that they only used Roy as a reference and didn't check dental records sooner. But I'm so intrigued that the correct details don't matter.
Author's Response: Sickeningly enough, I based this fic on a true story, where the doctors went on an identification by a distrought relative without double checking the dental records first. They say the truth is crazier than fiction, but in this case I think its just sadder, you know.
Someone is dead in The Office, and everyone is a suspect.
I'm still laughing over the Ryan comment!
10 Oh, what a great ending! The person with the alibi turned out to be the killer. I loved the discovery and the potato gun part with Dwight was hilarious. Excellent mystery. Keep writing!
That is classic Michael for you. Constantly complaining about corporate. I'm supposed he didn't blame Toby for something while he was being interrogated. Loved the Michael dumb "act".
Great job on all the character entires. I can't wait to finish the story.
10 Go Fancy New Beesly.