Reviewer: Team JAM Signed
Date: July 11, 2007
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I just wanted to say, b/c I said it on the TwoP Fanfic page and was told to post here, that I really enjoyed your story. It was great, and sooooo well written! IMO, I can't really see Jim snapping like that on Pam, esp. on their first date. The poor guy has to put up with Michael and Dwight and has never even snapped on them. But whether or not I found it realistic, I enjoyed it and look forward to reading more of your stuff. Thanks and keep up the great work!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's interesting to get a "dissenting opinion" because it makes me consider why I made that choice. Honestly, I relate to Jim a LOT- we have very similar personalities, and when I get very stressed I tend to take it out on my husband or my best friend, and not neccessarily the person who has upset me. There's a level of trust in those relationships, where I know they can "handle" my pissiness and still love me. So maybe this was out of character for Jim, but it was very much what I would have done, so I guess I would argue that it was realistic, but maybe not for Jim.
I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway! I have 50 other stories on this site; I'd love to see what you think of how I portray our two heroes in some other situations. Thanks for the comment!