Reviewer: JamLover101 Signed
Date: October 09, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: It Ended With a Phone Call
Wow. Welcome and congrats on your first story, and boy was it a story. You wrote it so well I really felt like I was Pam. I hope to hear more from you soon :)
I love these lines:
No question. No “would you mind?” No “Hey, can I talk to you for a second?” But that’s someone else’s line anyway.
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made some kind of joke like “Pam, what did I tell you about watching Eight Legged Freaks, I kn--” until she opened the door and he stopped short and looked her up and down with a look on his face she couldn’t place. Couldn't place back then, at least.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! You're too kind. I was very nervous about posting this, and I can't tell you what a relief it is to be accepted! I love those lines too, by the way.