This follows most of the episodes from a different standpoint, adding more Angst to already Angsty Pam and Jim love story. If that's even possible. Pam is obviously unhappy and she begins to see things different with each passing episode.
i really like this story.. its not often we get to see pams pov and i think you did a good job capturing it!
MEMBER'S CHOICE TOP NOMINEE - Jim and Pam must interact in network sponsored live chats to promote their documentary. Angst (and maybe some smut) ensue.
Story now complete.
Omg i love this story... everytime i hit most recent im so happy to see this story updated so please keep it up.... I know its always annoying when reviewers try to guide the story but i really think it would be awesome if jim found out who pam was but pam didnt know who jim was... it would add a great dynamic and some new story arcs! Keep up the great writing
I love this story... i always look forward to the new chapters this is really a great story so keep the updates coming please!!!
Author's Response: thanks! i just added a few more, i hope you enjoy them as much as the rest. i appreciate the great feedback, it was really nice :)
Is there life and love after Jam?holy crap. i just stayed up far longer than i should have, completely enraptured by this story.
1. you are an incredibly talented author.
2. as much as this kills me to say, i was a complete emilyshipper the entire story. not a jim/emily shipper. just emily. i rooted for her, i wanted her to be happy, i looked forward to reading her chapters. watching her experience the office was parallel to my own experience catching up on the first two seasons. i felt like i was reliving all of those emotions along with her... the pain, the angst. feeling terrible for jim.
3. honest to god, only reason i clicked on this story was because i saw new york pam in the most recent and felt i should read this one too... and now i dont know if i want to read the pam side. its like "something borrowed" by emily griffin. have you read that? jkras is staring in the movie.. but anyways, the bitch Darcy, who i HATED was the protagonist in the sequel "something blue" and i could not fathom reading about her because i just didnt like her. i literally have the same feelings now. even though their relationship just fell apart, im all over the jim side. even on the show i always have been.
this story has me torn. i want to root for emily, a completely made up, but extremely dynamic o/c. jim just breaks my heart. and i dont like pam. What have you done to me?
you did a fantastic job, i will definitely try to read the rest of your stories, i dont think i could be disappointed.
becky
ps. favorite part? when right before they had sex for the first time, jim stops and says "i wont change my mind". i'm such a romantic sap but i freaking loved that! haha
I have a theory... it's alex right?? cause he was close by? wow, im addicted!
Author's Response: Mwahahahahaha. <-- Evil laugh. You\'ll have to read and find out. (I don\'t have a long story planned)\r\n\r\nSeriously, thanks for the review Beaky22. \r\n
Had to follow up the "Money" call-back in "Secretary's Day," obviously. And don't think that "six weeks" comment in the deleted scene got by this girl!hey, i normally dont review on this site, i just kinda read...and creep on your favorites to find the best story. but holy crap. this chapter was well deserving of a review.
i think this chapter was possibly the most well written piece of fiction on this site... the entire time i was thinking i was actually reading a novel, not some fanfiction involving characters that someone else made up. the emotions were tangible and i was completely along for the ride with pam. you gave these characters so much life... they felt genuine to me.
you are unbelievably talented. this was seriously one of the best chapters i've ever read. at first i thought it was just because i read it early in the morning before i left for my first class... but nope, i just reread it and... phenomenal.
i knew you were a talented author (as i've said, i've been creeping around this site for about 3 years now haha) but this chapter just simply blew me away. you did an amazing job and this has definitely inspired me to keep writing and try to improve.. i loved it!
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