Barrettes, bras, neck ties (things that open and close.)
Set sometime between The Job and Fun Run; no spoilers.
10 This was amazing, Colette. You have a very clear and visual writing style that I enjoy. This has made my day! Thank you so much!
Author's Response: Pleased to hear you found this 'clear and visual' - that's a great compliment! Thanks, elly!
A look at what might have happened between The Job and 'round about Money. Lots of steam in the beginning, then some angst for good measure.10 I was having such a great time reading this *hot* story and then you had to go and pull the rug out from under me!!! You need to update soon!
10 Please tell me you're going to update again today. I'll give you a million Schrute Bucks if you do. :)
Author's Response: You owe me a million Schrute bucks (or about .0003 cents)! Enjoy chapter two! (It\'s not nearly as enjoyable as chapter 1 . . . but every rose has its thorns).
10 ok..i just saw where you updated and I think you should help a sister out and post another chapter!!!
*showers you with Schrute bucks!*
She couldn't be sure exactly when he ceased to exist, but the first day she suspected something was the day after she canceled her wedding.
10 Please update soon! I'm so confused (but a good confused!) about this story and I want to know more! Great Job!
10 YOU NEED TO REVIEW SOON!!!!!! I MEAN IT!!!!! I'M DYING OVER HERE!!!!
Author's Response: Wow, no ones capitilized a review and begged me to update before. I'm flatered, thanks! :D
MEMBER'S CHOICE - Katy and Jim are still dating during Jim’s “Email Surveillance” BBQ. When Pam sees them together it lights a fire under her.7 I really like this premise! Too bad we didn't see Katy more and Pam's jealousy on the show! I hope you update soon!
Pam moved to New York instead of starting work at Dunder Mifflin. Years later she returns and she meets Jim, but they're at very different points in their lives.10 You know how I feel about this story. Cannot wait for the next chapters! I vote that you write 3 or 4 stories at a time because you are great!!
10 Little Mermaid sheets FTW! Love this story!
This chapter makes me feel like Kelly at a mall closeout sale. That's how happy this chapter made me. Let's go kidnap Krasinski.
Author's Response: No Elly, if we\'re kidnapping anyone it\'s going to be Buster! \"HEY, BROTHER!\" Could you imagine the awesomeness of that and the claw?!?! Buster is my new obsession.
Everyone else's reviews have praised this story so I'm going to be a rebel. THIS STORY STINKS! NEVER WRITE AGAIN!
(Just kidding...if you took that seriously, I'd publicly shun you and that's fun for no one. Seriously, update soon!)
Question: Do Jim and Pam need a toaster? Cause I have two at my house.
This makes me want to be a single parent so I can find a man who will love me and my bastard child.
I bought rope, bananas, never nudes, and some peanut butter for our upcoming vacation kidnapping of Krasinski!!
10 As I sit here thinking about Phyllis and Stanley's one night stand, I'm suddenly very hungry and I need your help choosing a suitable lunch. Before I forget, my koala is now the proud owner of a monocle!
This story? Ehh, it's okay. Just kidding
10 I'm glad this story is ending because now when can take hostage invite John Krasinski on our road trip....I'm still not giving up on this dream of mine and neither should you. I think I'm going to become a life coach after our expedition. It will help me deal with annoying people better and Jesus will be glad that I'm actually helping people instead of making fun of them. This story is so good, I give it 5 David Beckham Armani ads ( my new awards system). On to Mifflin, bitches!
Author's Response: I think I\'m going to get you a life coach before any road trip. And I have a new dream remember... the cleaning lady thing. Gosh! Do you even listen to me?!?! You\'re awesome and I give you 4 9/10 Franny cornhusk dolls (my new award system).
Jim and Pam are Jim and Pam, only...not really.10 I really like this concept, Stablergirl. I like that you painted "Jim Halpert" as kind of a prick and he's a real guy. I know I'm not making much sense but I can't wait to read what's coming next!
Author's Response: I know what you mean, i get annoyed sometimes with the whole "Jim is perfect" routine, which is probably why I even started writing this in the first place. ;-)
10 “Stay cool, ma babies,” Michael croons, sitting down next to Toby who hands him a beer. Loved the Conan reference! This story has me hooked and I'm anxiously awaiting your updates!
Author's Response: lol yes i'm so glad you got the conan there!! I had it explained in my original version of this chapter and took it down because I wanted to see if anybody would figure it out and mention it! That's you!! lol thanks.
10 Please tell me you are updating again tonight! This is getting so good and I'm checking the most recent page like an addict just to see this story pop up!
10 Please tell me you are home now and can update this faster! I need to know what's going on with these two!
5 I'll be your beta! Just IM me at MissElly1988 (AIM) I'd love to give you suggestions!
Author's Response: Thanks so much I will after I get finished with the second chapter.
10 I wish the episode had really ending this way. The end of the conversation between the two lovebirds was very realistic and when Jim listed off the things that made their interaction a date, I could actually see Jim saying that on the show! I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: I'm working on it elly! I wanted the conversation to clear things up enough that he'd be amenable to her driving to meet him - but not a full on "I'm in love with you too" type deal. It was really tough - but I'm glad it rang true to you.
Imagine Jim’s confession on Casino Night never happened and Pam actually made it down the aisle on June 10th . . . only to say “I don’t”.10 Hells Yes! Another Wendolf story! Sorry this wasn't constructive or praising at all. Just needed to get that off my chest!
Author's Response: Hey, always glad to see someone excited about one of my stories! Thanks!
10 I love that Jim didn't tell her his feelings! And this interaction DOES work!! Hopefully you can get the kids to watch TV and get another chapter written and posted soon!
10 I'm a hardcore JAMmer but I really like this idea and if told right, I think this story has the potential to be great. I hope you update soon! I can't wait to see where you take this story!
Author's Response: I hope I can do it justice. Thanks so much for reading, Elly.
10 I loved the ending of this but I would love to see an epilogue. Whether it be with them together or not, I really really really want an epilogue
Author's Response: ha! bold type - that's pretty serious. ok. one more vote for an epilogue... we'll see. keep your eyes out for it!
I like this premise! Are you going to explain why they broke up in the next chapter? Update soon!
Author's Response: all will be explained... i'm glad you like it! more to come.