For the Caught Red Handed and "Nobody knows" Challenges. Sometimes you're so distracted that you get careless and what you think is a big secret isn't such a secret at all. :)What an adorable fic!
Loved it :)
Author's Response: Mirielle - I'm a horrible person for not saying thank you for your review earlier. I'm so very glad you liked it.
Post-Merger. A little angsty, a little triangular, but fear not - it doesn't end there. lovely!
Author's Response: Thanks, Mirielle! I hadn't thought about this one in a long while.
Member's Choice - “My father died, so I’ll need a few days.” She explained in an unaffected sounding voice that surprised even herself. The three other parties in the room were stunned into silence. Jim spoke first. “Jesus, Pam…” She stood with her back to him and addressed Michael as if Jim had not made a sound…as if Jim did not exist. It was the only way.
10 Wow... just stumbled across this story last night and couldn't stop reading! Wonderfully well written with so much feeling...you truly captured an essence! Magnifique!
With every choice we don't make, we create a universe...
WARNING: This is like, angst, to the tenth power, but I can promise a happy ending, if not exactly the one you might have in mind...
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I love that this story so eloquently expresses the deep emotions running through the connection between Jim and Pam... it's like an addiction between them, which pulls them together no matter how harmful it may be.
Love love love that you updated! Keep the greatness coming!
M
I really like this fic.. what a great idea. I always wondered what Jim and especially Pam would say if confronted with what all the viewers see on the show.
Keep writing...can't wait to read more!!
M
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, Mirielle. I'd love to know what they would do as well. I really enjoyed the scene in Fun Run where they were confronted with video footage. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
What if Jim chose the other path?
It's angsty, but hold on until the end.
very well written... that poem never loses it's spark and you complemented it beautifully! Bravo
what a great fic... can't wait to read more. Very well written
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Mirielle. I was going to try to post a chapter a day, but it\'s going a bit faster than that, I guess. I hope you will keep reading. Thanks so much for reviewing, and for your encouraging words!
Beautiful... and I'm so happy that you've been updating so quickly. Can't wait to find out what happens at the art show if Jim has the courage to go. Loved it, loved it!!
Your loyal reader- M
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Mirielle. I so much appreciate you keeping with the story and reviewing, as well. It\'s just a matter of getting it posted; it\'s already complete. It will be done soon. I hear there\'s a holiday coming and I\'m barely ready, so...yeah! :) Thanks again!
I just loved this fic. It really captured the essence and uncertainty that's always surrounded the relationship of Jim and Pam. I truly heard their voices in your writing.
And I'm so glad you had Jim attend Pam's art show in your story. (I still haven't forgiven him for not going in the real canon episode)
Keep writing and I'll be sure to keep reading!
M
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Mirielle. I am so glad you heard their voices, wow, that is a great compliment! I really appreciate you reading and especially reviewing. Thanks again!
very intriquing story.... can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
What if Roy was lying when he said he'd never cheated on Pam? What if Pam was always a little less healthy than she let on? What if everything, everywhere, is only meant to fall apart?"But Jim’s problem was that he usually found himself unable to deny her anything, and this was no different..."
I loved this line... it's how I always felt about Jim, especially during season 2... it was like he was powerless to take control of his life and his emotions. And you captured that beautifully!
Loved it, Stablergirl...update soon!
~M
The suspense is going to strangle me!!!
Loved the update!!
M
Author's Response: Thanks!!!
Loved the feeling involved in that Jim/Pam dance.... can't wait for an update!
M
Jim and Pam are Jim and Pam, only...not really.E P I C!!!
Bravo, Stablergirl!
ahhhhh...that was quite lovely.
Beautiful imagery describing the fall into love!
yummy as usual!
Ok... you've spoiled us sooo much with all the fast updates but...keep 'em coming! I'm just loving this story...the tension, the internal struggle, the different look at Jim and Pam! Love love love!
M
Ok.... thank you Stablergirl! Jim said my name!!!! I'm Heather....ahhh that made my day. And the Jim images in this chapter were just too much for my senses... overload!
Loved it as usual!
Yeah... another fabulous Famous update! Beyond hot! And thank you for the link to the yummy scruffy!Jim picture...made my night :)
ummm.... yeah, that was amazing!
M
More, more, more!
:) M
So excited to get home from work today and see new updates to my new fav. story!!
Poor tortured Jim and Pam...whatever will they do with all that tension? :)
Waiting (semi)patiently for the next update!
M
I'm am truly enjoying this story more and more with each update!! Wow... Pam really is throwing Jim for a loop, huh!
Great job! Can't wait for the next update!
M
Love the idea... so different. Can't wait for an update!
M
Author's Response:
different is good! Thanks for reviewing!