Penname: Cheeb Real name: Olivia
Member Since: November 25, 2007

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Summary: Takes place during 'Christmas Party'. What if Pam had actually read Jim's card?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Holiday, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10096 Read Count: 7244 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: December 17, 2008
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: December 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Billy Squier and Bonus Gifts

Glad that Pam got a clue about both her men and that she showed some strength here.  Revisiting S2 episodes sometimes make me mad at Pam for what she put poor Jim through.  I really enjoyed this.  I have to admit I almost passed this up because of the title.  Not a Billy Squier fan.  Glad I got past the title.  :)  Great job here.

Summary: Holly reaches out to Michael on Christmas
Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Holly, Michael, Michael/Holly
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Humor, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Holly-Days
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1156 Read Count: 1637 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2008 Updated: December 19, 2008
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: December 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The thought that Michael would be spending Christmas alone never entered my mind but you're right, who would he spend it with?  Too sad.  You've done a great job writing Holly.  Even though she was only in a handful of episodes I can imagine her having a hard time getting over Michael.  They are perfect for eachother.  This phone conversation made me happy for them. 



Author's Response: Thanks a lot! It's good to have validation that I didn't toally botch Holly's character. lol.

Summary: Past Featured StoryA saga post-season two.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15385 Read Count: 4771 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2009 Updated: January 05, 2009
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: January 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was recommended to me by someone on the MTT forum so I thought I'd give it a quick read on my lunch hour.  Well, my lunch hour turned into 1 1/2 hours because I could not stop reading.  I was so late getting back to work, but it was totally worth it.  While reading I was so angry with Pam and my heart just ached for Jim.  Then I had to remind myself that these are fictional characters and Pam never married Roy and Jam is happy on the show.  The ending surprised me.  This was so very good.  Thanks for posting it.

Author's Response: It was almost hard to have Pam hold out for that long, I didn\'t know if it seemed realistic. But I guess if the real Pam stayed with him for ten years she could have easily married him and taken a long time to get out of it, really. And, yeah, I agree -- very happy with the way things are on the show! Thanks for the review. =)

Summary: An AU in which Jim takes the promotion at corporate. This will follow the canon of the show as closely as possible, so spoilers up through what's aired of season 5 applies.
Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15845 Read Count: 12620 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2009
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Waiting in the Ether to Form

I was just thinking about this story today, hoping for an update soon.  No garbage throwing from me.  I love the pace that you've got here.  Go Corporate Jim for handling Michael.  I also love your spin on Season 4 and anxiously await the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! It\'s really encouraging to hear that you think I don\'t need to hurry up and get them together already. (Because really, where\'s the fun in that? ;) ) I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying all the changes to the canon as well. Thank you again for the lovely review, and look for more soon!!

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: April 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Eyeless in the Mornin Sun

Interesting.  Jim got the job and left Pam behind.  Glad that he left Karen behind too.  I'm looking forward to the rest, especially Jim seeing Pam again.  You've got me hooked.

Author's Response: Thank you!! Yeah I\'ll explain it more in the coming chapters, but I really just wanted him to start fresh and build off of that. And he\'ll definitely get to see Pam in the next chapter. Glad you liked it!!

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: April 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Taken With Thought, Still Prone To Care

Ooh, so Jim didn't see the yogurt lid/note until months later.  Glad you explained that because I was wondering if Jim was really that heartless at that point to just dismiss it.  I'm liking Corporate Jim.  LiveChat?  Excellent idea!  Can't wait to see these two live chatting! And this chapter was much more than 56% decent. : )  Looking forward to the rest.


Author's Response: Thank you!! I know, I wanted to address the note in the first chapter, but there was just no good place for it then, so I\'m glad it worked here. And yes, there will definitely be some LiveChatting going on between those two... That sounded dirty. It was not meant to be dirty. This ain\'t that kind of story. ;) Anyway, so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you again for the review!!!

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 9
Date: April 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Bearers of All Good Things Arrive

I completely forgot that there would have to be a launch party for LiveChat.  I like David Wallace and am glad he and Jim have a great relationship, unlike what's going on with the show right now with Charles.  Glad to see that Karen's moved on and won't be a thorn in Jim's side.  Gah!  I have to know how the night ended.  You'll let us know in the next chapter right?  I'm really enjoying this.  Thanks for updating so quickly. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m so glad you like the Jim/David relationship. I always thought they had great potential for a mentor/student thing, so it\'s fun to flush that out. and no worries, I will definitely clue you in on how the night ended. Thanks for being such a dedicated reviewer!! It\'s reviews like yours that get my motivation up to write!! :)

Summary: "He flipped onto his back, wondering if there was a worse scenario than Pam coming on to him, drunk and fresh from an argument with her fiancée." Takes place between Email Surveillance and Christmas Party. Rated: M

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2431 Read Count: 3586 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2009 Updated: April 09, 2009
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: April 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A heart something.

This was so good.  I am so angry at Pam for lying to Jim about what happened that made her wind up at his front door.  You made me believe she slept with Jim only as revenge against what Roy did.  I can see her going home and admitting as much to Roy.  I'm not as hopeful as Jim that Pam will come back to him.  Not season 2 Pam anyway.

Loved this:  “What was your longest relationship?” You, he thought, but this wasn’t a relationship. Not the kind she meant and not the kind he wanted.  This really tugged at my heart for poor Jim.

Another Emilys List fic to add to my favorites!  Happy to see new stories from you. :)



Author's Response: thanks for writing! first of all - i don\'t think pam slept with jim out of revenge. maybe the thought occurred to her, but i think she was more overall charged from spending time with him at night, drunk, while thoughts of what happened earlier danced in her head. i don\'t think s2 pam would go back to jim, i think you are right. but i\'m not sure! yeah, poor jim. he does take a lot of abuse in this story.... thanks again for the feedback!!

Summary: Buying an engagement ring the week after you start dating someone. All context aside – that must have been some week. Rated: MA

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 475 Read Count: 5923 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: April 19, 2009 Updated: April 19, 2009
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: April 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: I like your toothpaste. It's great.

This just makes me smile every time I read it, and I've read it quite a few times.  I adore this.

I am a West Wing fan but never bothered to look for WW fanfic.  It is indeed some quality fic you've linked, so thanks so much for that!



Author's Response: oh man what a compliment! thank you for reading, re-reading, and posting!\r\n\r\nyou have got to check out ww fic. there was some really beautiful stuff out there... i recommended \'exit strategy\' already but i\'ll do it again. what a great fic. the nice thing is that that audience/fandom was quite fancy and erudite, so there was a lot of really wonderful work to read.

Summary: Here Comes Treble in the West Wing. Rated K+
Categories: Other, Past, Crossover, Alternate Universe
Characters: Andy
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 370 Read Count: 1119 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: August 12, 2009
Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: You should come, it’s gonna be cray-cray. Crazy.

"How dare he compare us to the Poofs!"  Ha!  I love this.  I can just picture Andy's behavior here and I can see Josh glaring at Andy while yelling for Donna.  And Toby!  So funny.  I forgot how much I loved The West Wing until you provided a link to a WW fanfic author in one of your other stories.  Thanks to you I've spent my summer pouring over the internet for TWW fanfic.  There's a lot to read!  Thanks so much for this cute little fic and for reigniting my love for TWW!  All I want for Christmas is the boxed set of the series. :)

Author's Response: yes! for bramble. bramble is amazing. i must also throw some love to dianora and jo & ryo. some really great work. also skywaterlove (AKA tori). there is SO much ww fic out there -- including my own! i wrote under emilyslist in the ww fandom, so i\'ll just toot my own horn. (and in fact, there is at least one fic sitting on my hard drive, should you be interested in taking a read through...) write a thoughtful letter to santa and perhaps you\'ll be so lucky to receive such a gift of multimedia :)