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I am new to the Office fandoms, but I can't get enough of Jim and Pam.
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Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Romance, Steamy, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Challenges: Road Trip
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25535 Read Count: 66422 ePub Downloads: 11
Date: August 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chicago
I like how you're building up the emotional intimacy before you take it farther. Good pacing.
Date: August 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: On The Road
I really like this. You can tell they want to say meaningful things, but the most important thing is that they are together. I like it when Pam takes a chance, too.
Date: August 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Call She Didn't Make
That's a great beginning. That moment, between acting and not-acting, is very tense, but you leave us with some hope that there will be more. So...off to read it!
Date: August 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Denver
Very hot and sweet; I'm glad she got the courage to act on her feelings...at least some of them!
Their first date gets derailed. Somehow, that's OK.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Challenges: Postponed But Not Forgotten
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 899 Read Count: 3530 ePub Downloads: 0
Date: August 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That was so funny, and so very true to character! ALL of it, but especially Michael!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love these characters, so it is a great compliment when you think I've captured some of their spirit!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Mark
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88192 Read Count: 291534 ePub Downloads: 96
Date: March 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Beautiful angst! Those moments were so intense, and I love how you've carried the intensity over.
--Strider
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm well aware that I can get carried away (like, seriously carried away - hah) with the angst, so it's always nice to hear someone say he/she enjoys it. :o) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: March 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Another excellent exploration of those moments on the boat; very nice!
--Strider
Author's Response:
Listen, I am obsessed with those moments on the boat. I'll never forget when that episode aired for the first time -- my husband watched the show from season 1, and while I was always in the room, oftentimes I was half paying attention, flipping through a magazine or something (I KNOW!). But I don't think I turned my eyes away from that screen once during BC (nor did I breathe throughout the whole 27 seconds scene). I felt almost haunted by it and was relieved to read an interview with JK & JF wherein they talked about how incredible and intense that scene turned out. I absolutely love it. :o)
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: March 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Beautiful job weaving in the Casino Night dialogue, just perfect! I get exasperated with Pam being so hesitant, but it's also really great to watch her find her courage.
--Strider
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! I love the confession scene (which cemented my belief that Steve Carell is brilliant), but I was disappointed by GWH -- I really expected to hear more from Pam, even if it was a continuation of her rejection. So what I tried to do here was take what I liked from CN, then write it from there as I think it might've also happened. (Did that make any sense at all?) :o)
Thanks so much for taking the time to review each chapter like this -- I know it's tedious to do that, and I so appreciate it. :o)
A sort of AU. Post Christmas Party. Starts a few days after New Years.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Fluff, Holiday, Horror, Humor, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Suspense, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13594 Read Count: 64139 ePub Downloads: 15
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
YES!!!! That's MUCH better!
--Strider
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad to hear that! Fluff always makes things better : )
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I love seeing them sleeping in each others' arms. That's so gentle and intimate.
--Strider
Author's Response: Thank you so much for ALL of your reviews on each chapter! When I saw that I freaked out (in a good way). THANK YOU!! Keep 'em comin'!
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
That's sweet...I love how JIm rescued her and stayed with her.
--Strider
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Ooh, I wonder what will happen. But still, Jim won't let that stop him from being there for her. Good cliffie!
--Strider
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Good job...very scary and intense. You might double check some of your spelling, or have someone read it over...
--Strider
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Uh oh. Scary. Good start!
--Strider
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Okay, now...she's got support, why does she feel like she's trapped with Roy? I guess I'll just have to read on...
--Strider
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13735 Read Count: 40148 ePub Downloads: 7
Date: March 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Postmark Utica
Poor Jim. I do not blame him for wanting to just cut the ties and move on, but how can he? You can't just stop loving someone. You really have a good grasp on these chracters.
--Strider
Date: March 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Message Received
Yay, a good heart-to-heart talk! Whoo! I love these two...
--Strider
Date: March 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Hand Delivered
YAY! Good lettter! This is a really fun, angsty story.
--Strider
Date: March 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Postmark Akron
Hmmm...this could be interesting.
--Strider
Date: March 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Postmark Albany
That's true about Jim; I think Biggest Fan is right on the money. That's why we all love him. I wonder what he'll do know, because I know he isn't really happy. I'm really enjoying this fic so far.
--Strider
Date: March 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: You Don't Know Me, But I'm Your Biggest Fan
Wow, it would be really hard to have your most intimate and embarrassing moments played on TV like that. I am wondering about this bigest fan...I have an idea, but I'm not going to say yet!
--Strider
Date: March 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Postmark Camden
I KNEW IT! I think this is a really good way for her to tell him some things that he might not be willing to listen to otherwise. Very creative!
--Strider
"She's going to prove to everyone that she's not this fragile little flower that's waiting on Jim Halpert to ride up on his white horse and rescue her."
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89299 Read Count: 116204 ePub Downloads: 42
Date: March 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: The one thing that I tried to hold on to.....
Umm...are there updates coming? I REALLY want some...
--Strider (who can now actually go to bed)
Author's Response: Updates soon! Thanks so much for your reviews!!!! We REALLY appreciate them!!
Date: March 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: The one thing that I tried to hold on to.....
I loved the brother-to-brother talk; I think it was really important for Jim to understand what he'd put Pam through (though I still want her to understand the same thing!). I lov ehow Pam's becoming more confident, learning more about herself, but still loves Jim.
--Strider
Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews!!!
Date: March 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: So lonely inside, so busy out there
I'm glad that Jim finally broke some of the ice between them. I can't wait to see what happens!
--Strider