Penname: Strider Real name: Strider
Member Since: March 04, 2008

Bio:
I am new to the Office fandoms, but I can't get enough of Jim and Pam.
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Reviews by Strider
Summary: Pam gets the nerve to call Jim after she breaks off the wedding, and gets invited along on an impromptu road trip across the country.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Romance, Steamy, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Challenges: Road Trip
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25535 Read Count: 66422 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: December 20, 2007 Updated: February 25, 2008
Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: August 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chicago

I like how you're building up the emotional intimacy before you take it farther. Good pacing.

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: August 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: On The Road

I really like this. You can tell they want to say meaningful things, but the most important thing is that they are together. I like it when Pam takes a chance, too.

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: August 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Call She Didn't Make

That's a great beginning. That moment, between acting and not-acting, is very tense, but you leave us with some hope that there will be more. So...off to read it!

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: August 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Denver

Very hot and sweet; I'm glad she got the courage to act on her feelings...at least some of them!

Mercy by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 16] 5
Summary:

Their first date gets derailed. Somehow, that's OK.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Challenges: Postponed But Not Forgotten
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 899 Read Count: 3530 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2008 Updated: January 21, 2008
Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: August 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was so funny, and so very true to character! ALL of it, but especially Michael!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love these characters, so it is a great compliment when you think I've captured some of their spirit!

Summary: Past Featured StoryTwo days after the Booze Cruise...what might've happened if Jim had confessed sooner.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Mark
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88192 Read Count: 291534 ePub Downloads: 96
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2008
Reviewer: Strider Signed 10
Date: March 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautiful angst! Those moments were so intense, and I love how you've carried the intensity over.

--Strider

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm well aware that I can get carried away (like, seriously carried away - hah) with the angst, so it's always nice to hear someone say he/she enjoys it.  :o) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Strider Signed 10
Date: March 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Another excellent exploration of those moments on the boat; very nice!

--Strider

Author's Response:

Listen, I am obsessed with those moments on the boat.  I'll never forget when that episode aired for the first time -- my husband watched the show from season 1, and while I was always in the room, oftentimes I was half paying attention, flipping through a magazine or something (I KNOW!).  But I don't think I turned my eyes away from that screen once during BC (nor did I breathe throughout the whole 27 seconds scene).  I felt almost haunted by it and was relieved to read an interview with JK & JF wherein they talked about how incredible and intense that scene turned out.  I absolutely love it.  :o)

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Strider Signed 10
Date: March 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Beautiful job weaving in the Casino Night dialogue, just perfect! I get exasperated with Pam being so hesitant, but it's also really great to watch her find her courage.

--Strider

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!  I love the confession scene (which cemented my belief that Steve Carell is brilliant), but I was disappointed by GWH -- I really expected to hear more from Pam, even if it was a continuation of her rejection.  So what I tried to do here was take what I liked from CN, then write it from there as I think it might've also happened.  (Did that make any sense at all?)  :o)

Thanks so much for taking the time to review each chapter like this -- I know it's tedious to do that, and I so appreciate it.  :o)

Summary: What happens if Roy becomes abusive towards Pam?
A sort of AU. Post Christmas Party. Starts a few days after New Years.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Fluff, Holiday, Horror, Humor, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Suspense, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13594 Read Count: 64139 ePub Downloads: 15
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2008 Updated: June 05, 2008
Reviewer: Strider Signed 5
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

YES!!!! That's MUCH better!

--Strider

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad to hear that! Fluff always makes things better : )

Reviewer: Strider Signed 5
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love seeing them sleeping in each others' arms. That's so gentle and intimate.

--Strider

Author's Response: Thank you so much for ALL of your reviews on each chapter! When I saw that I freaked out (in a good way). THANK YOU!! Keep 'em comin'!

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That's sweet...I love how JIm rescued her and stayed with her.

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed 6
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ooh, I wonder what will happen. But still, Jim won't let that stop him from being there for her. Good cliffie!

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed 6
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good job...very scary and intense. You might double check some of your spelling, or have someone read it over...

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed 7
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Uh oh. Scary. Good start!

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: March 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Okay, now...she's got support, why does she feel like she's trapped with Roy? I guess I'll just have to read on...

--Strider

Summary: Jim's biggest fan guides him through Season 3
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim
Genres: Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13735 Read Count: 40148 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2008 Updated: April 11, 2008
Reviewer: Strider Signed 8
Date: March 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Postmark Utica

Poor Jim. I do not blame him for wanting to just cut the ties and move on, but how can he? You can't just stop loving someone. You really have a good grasp on these chracters.

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed 8
Date: March 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Message Received

Yay, a good heart-to-heart talk! Whoo! I love these two...

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed 8
Date: March 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Hand Delivered

YAY! Good lettter! This is a really fun, angsty story.

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: March 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Postmark Akron

Hmmm...this could be interesting.

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed 8
Date: March 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Postmark Albany

That's true about Jim; I think Biggest Fan is right on the money. That's why we all love him. I wonder what he'll do know, because I know he isn't really happy. I'm really enjoying this fic so far.

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: March 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: You Don't Know Me, But I'm Your Biggest Fan

Wow, it would be really hard to have your most intimate and embarrassing moments played on TV like that. I am wondering about this bigest fan...I have an idea, but I'm not going to say yet!

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed 8
Date: March 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Postmark Camden

I KNEW IT! I think this is a really good way for her to tell him some things that he might not be willing to listen to otherwise. Very creative!

--Strider

Summary: What if Pam had taken that Dunder Mifflin internship during Season 3? What would Jim think? An AU season 3 fic that deals with a side of Pam that we didn't get to see

"She's going to prove to everyone that she's not this fragile little flower that's waiting on Jim Halpert to ride up on his white horse and rescue her."
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89299 Read Count: 116204 ePub Downloads: 42
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2008 Updated: July 10, 2008
Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: March 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: The one thing that I tried to hold on to.....

Umm...are there updates coming? I REALLY want some...

--Strider (who can now actually go to bed)

Author's Response: Updates soon! Thanks so much for your reviews!!!! We REALLY appreciate them!!

Reviewer: Strider Signed
Date: March 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: The one thing that I tried to hold on to.....

I loved the brother-to-brother talk; I think it was really important for Jim to understand what he'd put Pam through (though I still want her to understand the same thing!). I lov ehow Pam's becoming more confident, learning more about herself, but still loves Jim.

--Strider

Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews!!!

Reviewer: Strider Signed 8
Date: March 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: So lonely inside, so busy out there

I'm glad that Jim finally broke some of the ice between them. I can't wait to see what happens!
--Strider