Jim and Pam are a couple. He asks a question. She contemplates.
8 Really cute and sexy. *sigh* One can only hope this comes to pass.
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Yes! Let's keep hoping!! Thanks for reading:)
Well, the DVDs have given us all a wealth of new inspiration....so here's my being undisciplined and giving in. :o) Right now, I'm planning to cover Jim's talking head in "The Client," the Sasha story, Jim visiting the BB online from the Pochonos, and I'd also like to revisit "The Secret" in light of some of what JK said on the commentary. Squee!
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.9 Whoa. Angsty, sweet AND hot. Loved it.
Spoilerish for various S2 DVD deleted scenes. Their first date was a date that...wasn't. Eventually though they finally got the hang of it.
8 This was a really great envision of their first 'date'. Sweet, but I could feel my stomach turn with all the 'akward'. Can't wait for the rest!
What a great premise, and Jim is so cute(when is he not, really). Good story, really enjoyed it!
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Toby smiled. His daughter was clearly a genius.
8 Really creative! The parallels between the toys and people were dead on. Loved Raggedy Ann and Andy(of course) Hmm, wonder if that Jack-in-the-box will open up anytime soon :)
Jim leaves town, determined to get his mind off Pam and start over again. Meanwhile, Pam finds herself questioning her decision to get married.
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8 Awesome! I held my breath waiting for the happy ending...and then there it was. Really great job keeping the tension going through all the chapters. I loved the reference to Office Space(one of my favorites).
In the eternity between The Kiss and what comes next lay infinite possibilities.8 That was just perfect imagery. I just realized I really need to catch up on old stories! Damn this having to work for a living.
Author's Response: There's some amazing stuff waiting for you. Thank you!
8 Beautiful writing, even if it did make me a little sad. I like the little glimmer of hope at the end.
8 This was great. Wish I knew what the letter said, though. Good job!
8 I meant to say what it said exactly, but I just realized what was said in the letter was explained. I'm such a dolt. Ignore me :P
Author's Response: Well...I'm still trying to figure out how she ends the letter too, so you're not such a dolt. ;) But thanks for the review.
Jim, Pam...and a partridge in a pear tree. There are 12 days of Christmas - there will be 12 chapters of this story.
I get on here at least a couple times a day just to see if you've added a new chapter! Seriously great
Holy hotness! I concur with the reviewers before me, sexy Jim & Pam=good for body and soul :) After you recommended Esthero(luv her), I had to go and find that song. Here's the link if anyone is interested(Warning, explicit lyrics!)
http://anaisethenry.imeem.com/music/7-Cfc3BL/if_tha_mood/
Wow, thanks for the link! I'm gonna add it to the chapter notes, if that's okay with you. Also, thanks for reading!
Per nomadshan's planting the irresistible notion in my head of writing an Out of Control Jim story (along with encouragement from other posters at TWoP - you know who you are).... This is an exploration of what could happen if (when?) Jim and Pam were pushed to the point of losing all control.
9 Really, really good articulation of Jim's anger. Poor guy. He needs some relief, even if it comes in the form of Karen(I like her, but it's still haaard, man. oh, that sounded dirty)