Penname: Desslok Real name: Jim
Member Since: September 03, 2008

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Instead by elliehalpert Rated: M [Reviews - 5] 3
Summary: Jim rebels. Pam reflects. A lighter than I wanted dark!jam attempt. Post S2, pre S3.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim, Jim/Other, Pam
Genres: Angst, In Stamford
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1133 Read Count: 3022 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: October 14, 2008 Updated: October 15, 2008
Reviewer: Desslok Signed 10
Date: October 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Stationary

Really outstanding, esp. for a first effort. I think this Jim is just dark enough, without being over the top and thus unrecognizable as Jim. You write very well and I hope you'll do more. Fluff is always good too. :)

Author's Response: Oohhh thank you very much~ I\'ll try to do some fluff :D

Summary: Jim tries to deal with Pam being away in New York. Snippets of scenes and discussions from Season 5! Spoilers for anyone who hasn't watched Weight Loss a million times, Business Ethics, Baby Shower, Crime Aid, Employee Transfer, or Customer Survey.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12525 Read Count: 27248 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: October 17, 2008 Updated: December 13, 2008
Reviewer: Desslok Signed 10
Date: October 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: All the Pretty Girls Go to the City

I'm really enjoying this story. You write very well and your characterizations are dead on. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Summary: Jim and Pam, a crazy guy and the Laundromat.  The dryer's not the only thing that can fluff here.  Spoilers for Baby Shower.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1870 Read Count: 4470 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: October 17, 2008 Updated: October 17, 2008
Reviewer: Desslok Signed 10
Date: October 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Fluff and Fold (redux)

Very nice. I loved this in particular: "At that moment it occurred to Jim he was acting very much like the one person he prided himself on being the exact opposite of."

Great way to fill in that gap from Baby Shower.

Author's Response: Thanks Desslok.  I'm so happy you enjoyed it - esp. Protective!Jim. :)

Summary: Jim's (and sometimes Pam's) thoughts on jam!tastic episodes from The Dundies through Casino Night. Spoilers for S2, obviously.

"He's never kissed his brothers like that."
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Other, Jim/Pam, Katy, Mark, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1349 Read Count: 5071 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: November 07, 2008
Reviewer: Desslok Signed 9
Date: October 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: 201 - It Was Only a Kiss

Very nice. I love stories that go back and add to older episodes, so I'm looking forward to the rest of this one! Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks to you as well :D I love them too, seeing what happens after the episode and really feeling the characters. I\'m looking forward to the rest too x]

Reviewer: Desslok Signed 10
Date: October 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: 203 - Like She'll Always Be

I think you've got a good handle on S2 Pam here. When my wife and I watch S2, we argue about which exact moment is the one when Pam realizes that she feels more than friendship. It's not that easy to pick out. You've done a great job capturing that S2 feel here. I can't wait till you next one!

Author's Response: I kind of think that Pam always knew she wanted more with Jim, but blew it off as close friendship (shown here), lust, or downright craziness. Or she just repressed it completely. The Fire is next! I\'m so excited.

Author's Response: I kind of think that Pam always knew she wanted more with Jim, but blew it off as close friendship (shown here), lust, or downright craziness. Or she just repressed it completely. The Fire is next! I\'m so excited.