Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: April 03, 2019
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
So this has been quite the ride. Teenage Jim and Pam are great to see. They're very sweet and cute together. After so much fluff, good fluff, the big fight and break up between them was almost a welcome break. Not that I'm happy to see Jim and Pam break up mind you, it's just that adding that in added a lot more realism to this story. And now it looks like things are on the mend.
The thing about the whole fight and it's aftermath was that I felt it was in character to the Jim and Pam from the show. To scared to actually talk about what was really bothering them so they just ignored each other. That is until something broke. Literally Pam's hand this time around.
Welcome back to writing. Not sure what it was like around here 10 years ago. However I assure you the merry band of miscreants in this corner of the interwebs are always glad to see new or returning writers.
Author's Response: I always felt that had Pam met Jim in high school, they would have fallen in love and stayed that way, similar to she and Roy from the show. This has been lots of fun to write most of time. With the angst and other more adult things were weird to write at the time but I had a lot of help with a few chapters from Elly and ItalianFood, I don't know if they're still around or not. Those good old days were great fun, Season 4 had just started and I discovered fic, googling Jim and Pam stuff. I stayed up devouring stories for ages, then I felt inspired to start this after too many similar stories went unfinished... the irony in my 10 year break. :p it's not as easy as it looks! Thank you for reading :).