Penname: warrior4 Real name: Eric
Member Since: May 31, 2018

Bio:

Author of the Month March 2020

I've been writing fanfiction for awhile now. Just recently discovered The Office and figured I'd try my hand at that as well.

At first I thought of having all my stories in the same universe, but then I had some AU ideas. So any stories that occur within a common universe will be in a given series.


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Reviews by warrior4
Summary: "Jim thinks they're good." AU from episode 1. Enjoy. 
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26622 Read Count: 7987 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2019 Updated: April 03, 2019
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: April 02, 2019 Title: Chapter 11: Pre-Merger

Good job Jim being the supportive boyfriend here. Nice to see that.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: April 02, 2019 Title: Chapter 12: The Merger

Good little chapter there. I do enjoy that there's more detail in this one than some previous chapters. Jim staring down Andy like that was a fun scene to picture.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wasn't sure how fast these would post but I'm glad you liked them. I was agonizing over Casino Night so it may have been a bit rushed, I agree. I was trying to force more plot but I think these slice of life short chapters fits what I was trying to do much better. Thank you for all the reviews :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: April 03, 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Phyllis' Wedding

D'awww, Jim's meeting the parents. Good times.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: April 03, 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Local Ad

Good for Jim for not backing down on a hard topic. It's fun to be silly and goofy, but there are times to have honest adult conversations and hit seems like Jim's learned that lesson.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: April 03, 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Engagement

Very cute scene here. If we're not going to get the proposal in the rain at the gas station, then having the proposal at the office is also fitting.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: April 03, 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Wedding

Short but sweet. Nice little scene to envision.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: April 03, 2019 Title: Chapter 17: Epilogue

Nice way to wrap it all up. Mostly following the plot, but your own AU twists along the way. Well done.

Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) 

Summary:

The only thought fixed in his mind is how easy he and Pam have landed into that comforting, exciting place of banter and pranks and how he never ever wants to leave it again.

Pam is jinxed and Jim knows he has to take this chance. 

Set during season 3. 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Challenges: Jinx, Buy Me Another Coke
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2339 Read Count: 2566 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2019 Updated: April 01, 2019
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: April 01, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a delight to read. The IM chat was a ton of fun and so very in character for her. Turnabout is fair play after all. Good on Pam for being such a good sport about it. Especially considering the reward at the end of the day. Great job.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! 

In my mind, part of the reasons while Pam went along with it is because this is the first time in many weeks that Jim really interacts with her like in the good old days. She has to pretend to be pissed, but she's really thrilled. 

Summary: Okay so she made a wish. It wasn't like she actually expected it to ever come true.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Karen, Kelly, Michael, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15535 Read Count: 7172 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2019 Updated: May 21, 2019
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: May 01, 2019 Title: Chapter 2: If I Could Turn Back Time

First off, I'm kind of ashamed at myself for literally needing you to spell it out for me what you were going with, with this whole thing. This Pam may not have grown up with Disney fairy tale movies, but I sure as hell did. (Lion King is still the best regardless of anything :P) Which is why I'm upset at myself that it took me so long to figure this out. All that time and energy spent sitting on the couch and I can't even figure out a new adaptation when it's staring me right in the face.

That being said, masterful job with how you've weaved this one together. The whole modern day fairy tale with a ton of classic Office craziness. I also liked how you brought Cecelia into the mix here. Great addition and if we look forward a bit it adds depth to future JAM-ness.

Looking forward to seeing what comes next. Will Prince Jim ride in and save the day? Will Princess Pam be woken from a cursed sleep by True Love's kiss? Will someone kick a giant rock on top of the Evil Queen? Will they break out in song and dance? Actually considering your chapter titles, that one might seem the most likely at this point. I digress. Anyway, still lots of fun. Can't wait to see how it all wraps up.

Author's Response:

And here I was stressing out that it was too obvious all the way through! I’m kinda glad Kelly had to spell it out not just to Pam, but to you too :)

I really think you’ll like what happens next. Although I hadn’t thought of a giant rock and that’s a fun idea to play around with! Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: April 02, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: If I Had a Million Dollars

So here I am, sitting in the parking lot of a gas station in my ambulance having just brought a guy to the ER because, and I wish I was kidding, he had a toothache. I hit refresh to see if I've got any new reviews on my story and...well no I didn't. However there was something just as good. A new story by one of my favorite authors. Hooray!

Okay now that I've got that out of my system. This story was actually a lot of fun. We start out feeling for Pam here in her season-of-angst blues and slowly we're seeing hope start to bloom. Great Jim and Pam banter to start things out. The addition of that song was a lot of fun. The images of Jim leaning in to have some classic Jim and Pam type moments was wonderful to imagine.

So far this isn't dumb at all. I'm really looking forward to seeing how it all pans out.

Author's Response: Thanks warrior! Hopefully the next chapter is just as fun :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: May 21, 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Ending Unplanned

I never doubted you for an instant that you'd wrap this one up. A little different that what I was expecting. No big rocks crushing evil step mothers (step girlfriends, is that a thing?) or anything like that.

However in the end Jim does show up, and wake the fair princess from her sleep which is sweet. I loved their honesty with each other there. I loved that, while the catalyst might have been a seemingly silly wish, it sparked enough in them to finally be honest with each other and in so doing, their wishes came true. Well done.

Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought about killing Karen with a rock, but I figured leaving her broken up with off-screen was wicked enough. Thanks for reading this one!

Morning After by Comfect Rated: T [Reviews - 17] 39
Summary: Pam leaves Roy the morning after Casino Night.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Larissa Halpert, Pam, Roy
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8801 Read Count: 8594 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2019 Updated: April 16, 2019
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: April 11, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: The Morning After

Aww, Comfect! Thank you! Yes, I'm very interested.

Great way to start out here too. During the packing scene all I could think of was, "is she still wearing her Casino Night dress?" And low and behold, yup she is. Nice touch.

Once again your ability to get into a character's head is on point. That Pam is able to come to all these realizations and fire back at Roy was wonderful to see. Eagerly looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're interested! This will be a shorter fic, but I figured something new needed to come out on your birthday...

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: April 13, 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Jim's Place

Very nice. I'm glad Jim's taking it so well. It would have been easy for him to lash out. I'm very glad you didn't go that route. It's very sweet to see.

Author's Response: Yeah, I feel like lashing-out Jim has definitely been done, and besides I think if she'd actually come the next day he'd have been more like this. So I decided to make him better about it. Glad you seem to be still enjoying!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: April 15, 2019 Title: Chapter 3: In the Driveway

This was so great. I loved the way Pam and Larissa instantly connected here. It's great to see that as the door to her old life is closed, the door to her new life with Jim and his friends and family is so warmly opened.

However I think the sweetest line was just before they kissed. Where Pam feels his stubble and "he was still wearing the face that kissed her last night." Very nice image there. That even though Larissa, Mark, and Gerry are standing right there, it all melts away. I loved that Pam realized she needed to be 100% clear this time around. No chance for misinterpretations or the like. She's direct and honest not only with Jim but with herself and the reward for her honesty is something brighter than she could imagine.

The prank planning was a lot of fun as well. Great chapter, not that I'd expect anything less. Looking forward to seeing how you wrap this up.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoyed the wrapup just as much. This is, after all, your present.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: April 16, 2019 Title: Chapter 4: The Office

Great birthday present. Thank you very much. I've very much enjoyed this tale. It's great to see Pam realize so quickly what she really wants and then to act on it so decisively. I loved how you wrote Larissa as well. I get the feeling that in this universe she's been on of Jim's go to people when he's needed to talk about Pam. Thus all her wonderful silliness here is her way of expressing her joy about everything as well.

I also really liked the do-over kiss at Jim's desk. I have to ask, what that little scene in any way inspired by "Reset and Restart?" If so great way to use that idea but make it your own. If not, same compliment still applies.

Lots of fun with this story. Thanks for writing it. I'll leave with my normal send off for a completed fic, but this time it seems to fit even more.

Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. That scene was not inspired by "Reset and Restart" but I do think great minds think alike (or run in the same gutters as my parents used to say) so I do recognize the overlap now that I've written it! It was just because I realized I had Pam literally in the office still wearing the dress...

 I fully agree about Larissa, and I'm glad that worked for you, because that's how I would have liked to see a fleshed-out sister on the show. God knows Jim could use some people to talk to (and maybe if he'd had them he wouldn't have been so angsty...but that way lies madness). 

 Fortune does indeed favor the bold, at least here. And in all my fics, actually, but this is probably the most explicit about that... 

The actress by Kuri333 Rated: M [Reviews - 48] 50
Summary: Past Featured Story

The documentary crew is about to start filming but they need an actress undercover, to make things a little interesting. Pam wants the long term job, only it'll prove much harder than she thought, especially in terms of not getting involved with the subjects.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26286 Read Count: 9780 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: April 12, 2019 Updated: August 25, 2021
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: May 29, 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Waking up, the letter, and a savior

On the bright side at least he's talking to her. Still all things considered I think he has a right to be angry. His trust has been betrayed. However Jim is also a decent person. Even if there's more than a few selfish bits in there, he also doesn't want Pam to go through anymore undue stress.

Feels like Pam is done with the struggling to stay afloat part of things and has a firm grip on something that is keeping her head above water. She's not quite striking off towards land yet, but if feels like some of the pressure is off at least.

Looking forward to seeing where we go from here.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Jim needed to let it out, this was just too much. And yet, he still worries about her because, well, he's still Jim. 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: August 30, 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

At long last we bring this one to a close. Pam quitting TV acting after everything she's gone through with this seems to fit. Feels like she finally got a handle on herself and what she really wants out of life. Really liked that she did continue acting just in a different way though. Nice to see that.

She and Jim look like they're in a great place too. once they finally got everything out in the open and were honest, they could build a relationship worth having with each other. Nice to see that.

A bit of a roller coaster for sure with this one. You did great in bringing it all together though.

Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: June 03, 2021 Title: Chapter 12: A message, confusion, and Q&A

So it seems like Jim is mostly over how upset he was at Pam. He's willing to giver her another chance at least so that's good. Feels like they need this to get back to a baseline with each other. Though it remains to be see if Pam will stay at Dunder-Mifflin or not. Pam sticking around his place though? I think I see some of their earlier sparks starting to fly. Great to see. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: May 30, 2021 Title: Chapter 11: Acting, frustration, and Casino Night

Feels like a lot of subtle things are going on here. Jim's keeping his distance, but then that email about jellybeans shows up. Pam's playing her role but if feels like something else is going on in her mind. Then we get to Casino Night and....nothing big happens. At least not yet. However now she's free of the cameras. I think Jim knows that too. He also knows her relationship with Roy is a sham. The next bit of this should be very interesting to say the least.

Author's Response:

I was considering skipping Casino Night all together, but it's a very cute chapter, even without the whole Jim/Pam situation. Also, it was fun writing it and then... nothing happens. But now the cameras are gone.

Thanks so much for your support! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: May 22, 2021 Title: Chapter 9: A ride, evidence, and all the things she said

So, big moment there to be sure. Pam confessing everything is huge! She's trying so hard to really be honest for once, but by being honest she has to reveal the truth of her role. I get why Jim would be so upset. It's a huge shock to his system to think that this woman who's he's been falling for might have feelings for him and now he can't help but doubt if those feelings were real. Granted she's telling him as such and has the evidence to prove it, but a shocked and suddenly hurt heart rarely sees reason.

So where do we go from here? Does Jim head off for a bit to cool down and really think about what's she's said? Does he spill the beans? Does she spill the beans? Really looking forward to finding out, that's for sure.

Author's Response:

Jim was just making a bold move, kissing a girl that was, supposedly, engaged. And then finding out she's not engaged. And then... well, everything else.

He needs some peace and quiet.  And maybe more beer.

THanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: May 20, 2021 Title: Chapter 8: An opinion, a party, and the thing that should not have happened

Glad to see you and this story back. Quite interesting to see Pam's head space here. She's clearly still uncomfortable in her role. Pretending to be someone she's not like this and all the while her feelings for Jim just keep growing.

I like that Jim turns to her for advice. Clearly he still wants to be involved with her even if she kind of shut him out. Nice to see their friendship is getting back on track there.

Really kind of fun there in the party. I 100% get that it would take a couple beers for her to relax and have fun. With everything she knows going on behind the scenes, yeah it would take a little booze for her to calm down. However her "losing" her coat was a lot of fun. And the extra beer just sent her over the edge. This is a big thing of course and I'm really looking forward to seeing how it all plays out. Is now the time for Pam to spill the beans? How will Jim react? This is getting good.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for keeping the faith in this story. I am glad I came back to it bc It's fun to write. 

Cheers! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: April 15, 2019 Title: Chapter 2: First impressions, an interview and a job

Good set up here. Now that Pam has the job I'm looking forward to seeing how you take this. Especially once she starts interacting with everyone.

Author's Response: Thanks very much, w4! It's fun to write from inside Pam's brain in this scenario :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1
Date: April 16, 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Introductions, sugar and the fiancé

I kinda figured that out of anyone, it would be Jim who would most likely cause Pam's facade to crack. It's almost as if I can already see the train of events leading up through some of their more important moments.

I do like how you're getting into Pam's head here. It's nice way to get her perspective on everything.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Yeah, Jim will make Pam consider a lot of things. As usual :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: June 30, 2020 Title: Chapter 6: The boom operator, drinks and a newcomer

Now that's a very interesting twist. Plausible in this universe to be sure. I've got a feeling there's going a be a lot more twists and turns as this all goes forward.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much! I am really glad you think it's plausible, because this idea - she having something with Brian - is what kept me blocked the last time around. She never does in the series, and I don't think she really was interested, but this is a whole new scenario in which she is NOT engaged and NOT really living her life so... Brian is kind of a hobby (ouch that was cruel).

I don't know about more twist and turns, but I hope you find the rest at least entertaining.

 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed
Date: April 13, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Questions, answers, and a contract

Interesting premise. Looking forward to seeing where you take it.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much!

This is the first time I have the whole thing outlined and more or less written, so I really know where this is going. Won't tell though :)