Five different stories about the sign on Jim's desk.
10 loved these. each of the 5 was so great...and they were just perfect all together.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
10 haha. hot & fun :) yay for elevator make-outs.
They say there are 5 stages of grief - Denial, Anger, Bargaining, Depression, Acceptance. You'll see Pam go through them - with some future fluff every other chapter to keep you from pulling your hair out. There will be 10 chapters in all. :)
10 yay for jan! love the role you created here for her...i always felt she had a secret soft spot for jim & pam :)
Author's Response:
Hee! Yay for Jan indeed.
10 i really have nothing else to say about your writing except that i love you :) especially liked how you made this a bit difficult for pam. and the ending...i have no words.
Author's Response: Aww yipee that's too sweet! I'm so glad you liked it!
10 soo wonderful. i have no others thoughts...this just made me all sorts of happy :)
Author's Response:
Hee! Me too. I think the last chapter might make you happier.
Just a hunch. ;)
Hee! Me too. I think the last chapter might make you happier.
Just a hunch. ;)
10 so so good. it's just so real--so true to their characters and i think that what you have them feeling is spot-on. hopefully pam will come to her senses soon...in both before & after time :)
Author's Response:
hopefully pam will come to her senses soon...in both before & after time
I think you can pretty much count on it. ;)
I seriously held my breath throughout this entire chapter. So intense...so in character...pretty much a perfect JAM fight. I'm really proud of your Jim :)
Author's Response:
All you people with the breath holding. You're making me so nervous!!!
I'm sooooooooooo proud of him too.
10 i just realized what a bad reviewer i've been. i've read all your chapters...but just forgot to leave reviews. loved this chapter (of course!). the way you portray their relationship seems so real--a great mixture of chemistry & heat, but with this dynamic of jim pushing and pam resisting. sad, sweet & perfect :)
Author's Response: LOL! No worries!! I'm happy to have a review - no matter when! The way I've envisioned it, Jim would initally think that having her would solve everything - and it wouldn't be all sunlight and rainbows...at first. Eventually she'll get over it. That is...if I have anything to say about it. ;)
so so fantastic. feels so true to pam's character...as usual :) can't wait to see how you work through this scenario again!
Author's Response:
This might be because I have this secret desire to actually be Pam.
Ummm. Did I say that out loud? LOL!
YAY! This chapter just made me grin like an idiot.
Author's Response: HA! That makes two of us!
10 You are so good at this game. This chapter was just lovely & poingnant...you can always feel all of the emotion running just below the surface in all of your stories.
10 I was so excited to see that you had updated.
I always love the moments that you create because they feel so true to the characters and the show--like they really could have been moments that the camera just didn't catch.
This one was so gorgeously sad. Loved the way you wrote Jim's thoughts--and you shouldn't worry about the way you write Michael because I could definitely hear him saying the things you wrote in my head.
10 This is definitely one of my favorite moments from your story. It was sweet, sexy, tense, cute...all sort of wonderful things and fits in so well with a buildup to the confession & the kiss.
10 Loved this conversation--Jim's gentle pushing is exactly what Pam needs and you wrote it beautifully. Really liked the way you tied it back into the episode at the end in a way that made perfect sense.
This chapter made my skin tingle--loved the subtle sexual tension running throughout the whole conversation and loved the Dwight card.
As with all of your "unseen" moments--I can actually see this one playing out in my head. You stay so true to the show and to the characters but manage to show us an added layer of depth in the Jim & Pam relationship. Just wonderful :)
10 I could really see Pam going through this thought process...just wish she would wake up a bit! Great paragraph about her memory of Jim's house.
I really liked this--loved the way you wrote Pam's voice and the Ryan/cell phone interaction was hysterical. You're killing me with that ending though :)
10 Yay for a happy ending. I loved the email/voicemail messages and the ladies' reactions...hysterical!
Pam sees something she used to not like very much through new eyes.
Love the smutiness :) You have a great way of putting things in context...so it still feels like Jim & Pam...just really, really hot!
Pam and Michael have a beer. I really liked this. It was really sad & sweet...and it felt quite right. Love the moment you created :)
Pam and Jim from the beginning to the...It's been nice discovering this again :)
Author's Response: Would it be too narcissistic of me to admit that I've also enjoyed re-reading it? I had almost forgotten about a lot of the stuff in the beginning. Thanks for the review!
The thing is, Ryan really doesn’t want to make any connections.
Loved this! It's perfect Ryan fic...he's always trying to keep himself apart from everyone, yet always ends up in the middle of everything. Love the little details you added...just the thought of those Kelly emails cracks me up.
The five minutes immediately following Casino Night. And then beyond. Author is spoiler-free.
10 Loved loved loved this-you have their voices so well and I love that it was all awkwardness and uncertainty for a while. You captured what could really be Jim-Pam dialogue so well. Also love that you have her showing up at the airport in the end, it made me grin :)
Lovd this! Liked how you were really able to get a bit of their usual humor/banter in there while still keeping it intense