Penname: susanita Real name: Uh, Susan. Yeah, just Susan, but over at the forum, I'm susanita.
Member Since: February 11, 2007

Bio:
Fanfic saved me from jumping off the ledge during the long lonely walk of loneliness that was most of season three. Thank you wonderful fic writers!

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Summary:

The little things were threatening to drive him insane.... a few 55-word chapters on learning to live with the one you love.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 285 Read Count: 14185 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2007 Updated: July 14, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: And so it goes...

It was getting a little angsty, and then...awww...  Moxie is just a big ole softy.  Yay.  Great stuff, as usual. 

PS - I prefer sitting in the back at the theater too. :-) 

 



Author's Response: Yeah...and can't you imagine how Pam would probably be expecting him to be mad about the accident and find out he's totally not?  Still recovering from Roy's usual reactions I'd guess....  Thanks for reviewing!

Summary:

A pool party and a shirtless Jim. Need I say more?

Another story in the series - Jim Halpert: More Than the Sum of His Parts


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Bob Vance, Jim/Pam, Phyllis
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: Jim Halpert: More Than The Sum of His Parts
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2972 Read Count: 7350 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2007 Updated: July 15, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Splish Splash

Oh, yay for Phyllis!  Not even a closet hussy. :-)  

What a fun summer story, Moxie.  I was smiling from beginning to end.  Awesome stuff as usual. 



Author's Response: Thanks for such a sweet review - I have no doubt that Phyllis is a hard-core hussy!!

Talk by Annabel Winslow Rated: M [Reviews - 171] 72
Summary: Past Featured StoryJim and Pam and two telephones, post-Season 3.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8370 Read Count: 59136 ePub Downloads: 14
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2007 Updated: August 02, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: New Territory

Chapter one - Jim with no pants.  Um, yeah this has my full attention.   This made me laugh out loud (probably too loud):

“Well, in a bizarre coincidence, I’m wearing an oversized pink robe too.”

Awesome.  Can't wait for the rest.  



Author's Response: Thanks, Susan!  Yeah, pants are overrated.

Summary:

A few fuzzy, fluffy one-shots that form a loosely connected story. Based around the idea of this quote by Germaine Greer:

"The essence of pleasure is spontaneity."

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5506 Read Count: 27225 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2007 Updated: July 24, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: More Satisfying Than Snickers

"My underpants."

Uh, *pfft* Goodbye, brain computer.

Daaaamn, Moxie.  Short and sweet (or would that be smut? Hee!)  



Author's Response: I work best on fried brain computer mode.  I'm pretty sure you do, too.  :-)

Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Fear and Loathing in Scranton

Oooh, I can't wait to see where this is going.  :-)!  

Author's Response: Me, either! ;-)  Thanks for reviewing, Susan!

Summary: What if that great first date has to be put on hold for a day? Pam's about to find out.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6422 Read Count: 23300 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 20, 2007 Updated: August 01, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: August 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Interruption

Aw, what a sweet story.  I love how after all this time they can still be so shy toward each other, it's very endearing. I love happy JAM stories and this is a great one! 

The Real Deal by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 45] 30
Summary: Past Featured Story

A first fight and a bowl of make-up spaghetti. (No spoilers.)

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Oneshot, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2405 Read Count: 7577 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2007 Updated: July 26, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: July 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh? Are we gonna do this?

‘Seriously, Jim…maybe I’m just not awesome enough…’
‘I didn’t love her,’


Oh hell, yeah we're gonna do this!  I just wished I had something more intelligent to say than wow, but WOW!  The voices are just perfect; angsty, intense and sexy as hell.

And then...

‘Can I kiss you for a little bit?’

Yeah. I'm dead. I want this on my teevee in September! :-)!

Author's Response: Yup. Did it. And, okay, I'll admit (but, ssshhh...just between you and me) 'Can I kiss you for a little bit' is the line that gets to me too. Thanks, as always, for reading and commenting, Susan M.

Spoiler Alert by larrymcg Rated: K+ [Reviews - 13] 5
Summary: Jim must deal with his newfound fame in the wake of the documentary's surprising success.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Oneshot
Warnings: None
Challenges: Reality TV Hit
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1436 Read Count: 2548 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: July 27, 2007 Updated: July 27, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: September 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ha! So sweet and fun.  What's the matter with you, larry? Nobody's dead. :-P

Summary: Past Featured StoryPost season three finale. Pam, Jim, a train.

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 745 Read Count: 5995 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2007 Updated: August 04, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: August 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love stories that make you feel transported.  This is just so elegantly written.  Amazing.  

Hard Kandy by larrymcg Rated: M [Reviews - 12] 2
Summary:

One of Andy's favorite phrases takes on a whole new meaning.

Mose thinks his was "so wrong". He's a wuss.


Categories: Other
Characters: Andy, Kelly
Genres: None
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Challenges: 55: The Kandy Edition
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 1191 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2007 Updated: August 05, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: August 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Brain broken *pfft*

Well done, sir.  

Summary:

WYDM is Scranton's local radio station, with our favorite paper-pushers as DJs. Kelly gossips, Angela gives advice, Toby does traffic, and there's a new guy doing the morning show that's causing quite a stir...


Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Humor
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11802 Read Count: 25107 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2007 Updated: September 14, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: August 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Concentration

This is so great.  What a fun idea.  Can't wait to see what happens next. 

Author's Response: Thanks for reading Susan! :)

Summary: Past Featured StoryDinner, and what happened later. Post-Season 3.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jan, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Michael
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8226 Read Count: 56264 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2007 Updated: August 26, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: August 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Changes

No bodyswap? Boo! :D  

Aw, pretty Pam.  Yes, I imagine she looks very much like she's having a good day.  Such sweetness, and then...

‘I think my foot is on a copy of Karen’s CV.’

Ha! Loving this story so far.  Looking forward to more  slack-jawed and drooling!Jim.  Yay.


Author's Response: Hee.  Crunch.  In a perfect world, she'd be wearing boots to do it, too.  Thank you, Susan M!

Bullseye by supergirlsudz Rated: T [Reviews - 23] 7
Summary: Past Featured StoryPam takes a trip to Target, buys a swimsuit, and gets some inspiration from an unlikely source.
Categories: Other, Episode Related
Characters: Karen, Pam
Genres: Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2370 Read Count: 2892 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2007 Updated: August 13, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: August 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sudsy, what a dawesome debut!  

First I love how the title refers to Target, but also made me think of Pam drilling down on what she wants.  Good stuff.  

Pam's thought process on why she can't be friends with Karen, and the conclusion that Jim ruins everything.  Gold.  Pure gold.  

And then the sun comes out?  Perfection.

Awesome first fic. Can't wait to read more. 

 



Author's Response: Thanks, Susan! I'm glad you picked up on that double meaning of the title. It's so nice to know that it made sense to others and not just me! Thanks for the great feedback :-)

Time by time4moxie Rated: K+ [Reviews - 20] 6
Summary: Lunchtime together on the day of Jim and Pam's three month anniversary.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2779 Read Count: 4393 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2007 Updated: August 20, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: August 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Such sweetness.  Great story as usual, Moxie. But this part: 

“I think I'd rather be stripped naked and tied down with my own belt, necktie and shoelaces.”

Uh, sequel?  :-P  

 



Author's Response:

haha!  Hmm..... maybe.....  :-D

Thanks for reviewing, Susan!! 

And so it is... by Azlin Rated: K [Reviews - 8] 4
Summary: What if there was no Fancy New Beesly? A return to The Merger, complete with all the angsty-Jam trimmings.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1449 Read Count: 3468 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2007 Updated: August 22, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: August 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Just like you said it would be

Oh, man I knew this was going to be angsty, but wow.  That was angsty.

Pre-FNB makes me crazy.  Always waiting for something to happen.  Waiting for Jim to make a move (again...).  Always settling.  Her job, her fiance, her situation.  Bah. I can't stay mad at her. :-D

This fic brings to mind "It's a Wonderful Life." This is what Pam's life would have been like is she hadn't been brave enough to listen to the truth that had been in her face for three years.  Praise be to Gil. :-D 

Awesome stuff, Azlin!


Author's Response:

I know. I thought about adding some kind of warning that it was really, really angsty, but then I thought I might scare people away.

Yeah, I don't get pre-FNB either, but at the same time I can't help but love her. On the other hand, I'm so glad she came to her senses! And I'm also so glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for the review, Susan! 

Summary: Past Featured StoryA series of vignettes inspired by random song clips from the iPod.  No chronological order, so sit tight.  It might be a bumpy ride through time.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13152 Read Count: 79183 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2007 Updated: November 11, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: September 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Instant Karma

Aw, total sweetness.  Here's to much healing and smooching in S4!  Great job, Sweetpea.  

Author's Response: I'm all for lots of smooching and sweetness!  Thanks, Susan.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Written for both the Pam's Pregnancy and 55 Word challenges. Takes place before The Job.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Karen, Kelly
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: 55, Pam's Pregnancy
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55 Read Count: 5082 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2007 Updated: September 02, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: September 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wheeee...  Oh, poor Karen. NOT. :-P

You are the master of the 55 word challenge!   

Summary:

This is an idea I've had for a long time. It is inspired by the very end of the Six Feet Under series finale (hence the title), and it seems that the 55 word style would be perfect for it. Each chapter will focus on a different Office character. 20 chapters are planned.

I do not own these characters, and would not do this to them if I did. No copyright infringement intended.


Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: None
Warnings: Other Adult Theme, Violence/Injury
Challenges: 55 Words To Leave Scranton
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1154 Read Count: 66221 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2007 Updated: November 15, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed 10
Date: October 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Calm

I hate you, larry.   I need a tissue.  *blows nose*  

Author's Response:

Awww, you don't really hate me (I think).

I'd hand you a tissue but I'm late in responding so I hope you have one by now...

Summary: Squirrel returns! Jim's got the girl, but what's the price? Set at season 4 progresses, with episode overlaps. The IRC chatters are back, too. :-)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Other
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14883 Read Count: 22509 ePub Downloads: 9
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2007 Updated: November 04, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed 10
Date: October 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The face of all the world is changed, I think

Oh yay! Return of Squirrel, return of the fic archive, Jim's back at his desk, and our favorite sweethearts are dating.  All is right in the world. :D    

Author's Response:

Now it's time to get smutty.... wait, isn't that where you were going with that??  ;-)

Thanks for reviewing, Susanita

Summary: Pam's hands grew clammy and her mouth suddenly felt dry. She had to come up with something. There was no way that Jim was ever going to find out what she was really up to. There was just no way.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Michael
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4990 Read Count: 4616 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2007 Updated: November 02, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: November 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wheee... Yay for happy Jim and Pam.  What a sweet story, Sudsy.  I loved it. Smiles from start to finish.  :-) <--see. Hee!

Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much, Susan! I am so glad you liked it. :-D

Allentown by Sweetpea Rated: T [Reviews - 136] 60
Summary: Past Featured StoryA story of loss, love, and inspiration.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Humor, Married, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31217 Read Count: 64537 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2007 Updated: January 06, 2008
Reviewer: Susan M Signed 10
Date: January 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Beesly Guide to Trimming Your Tree

Okay, I'm tired and so this is going to be pretty blunt so send the kids out of the room for a second.

I fu*king hate babyfic.  Seriously.  No offense to those who write it, and from the amount of it that gets written people must really love it, so no offense to those folks either.  It's just not for me.

HOLD ON - this is a positive review.  Just stay with me a second.

I was chatting with someone when I started reading this, and I even said to them, "Oh damnit, Allentown is babyfic -- I'm not going to like this." Except Allentown isn't just babyfic -- and I'm glad that I stayed with it because usually I shut my browser the second the pee stick turns pink.

I just burned through all eleven chapters and I'm sitting here now all sniffly because it was just so incredible.  

In my opinion the best fics are those that are true to the characters, and true to canon (or fanon - hello, Jonathan), but build on both in a way that adds to our understanding of them.  This entire story is so spot on.  It takes the JAM storyline in a direction that is interesting and fresh, but also feels familiar.  I really have been missing our show lately, and this fic was as satisfying and enjoyable as the actual show, so kudos to you, sweetpea.  

I'm glad to see this story was awarded a ribbon.  It's well deserved.

And that video made me all schmoopy. :D 


Author's Response:

Okay, I love you so much it hurts.  When I first started posting this story, I was afraid it was going to be pegged as babyfic - and personally, I have nothing against it at all!  If it's done right (See:  LoveFool) it's wonderful.  But I knew this wasn't about the baby, really.  Poor little Natalie was really just a plot device (like Karen, only...smaller) for Pam's storyline.  I was worried that she seemed ambivalent about being pregnant in the beginning - I think that would be a real emotion she might have, but I know a lot of readers don't want to think JAMbabies wouldn't make her the happiest camper in the park.

Anyway...thank you so much for reading this and, what?  As satisfying as the show?  Good grief, that might be the best thing ever!  I've been missing J & P and the whole gang so much these days!  Stupid greedy studios!  The video was my first (obviously!) attempt and I'll admit that I was bawling like a baby while I was finishing it.  Couldn't have done that without all your hard work. 

Thank you so much, Susanita, for sticking with the story and for this awesome review.  :-*

Summary: Just a short little story of Jim being crafty...
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Angela, Jim, Pam
Genres: Holiday, Oneshot
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1135 Read Count: 2115 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2007 Updated: December 15, 2007
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: December 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awwww.... thanks, sora. Such sweetness! I smiled through the whole thing.  I love this story!   I miss my JAM. :(  

This helps. /pam

::huggles:: 

Australia by time4moxie Rated: T [Reviews - 19] 8
Summary:

Jim relives the dark days of early June 2006.

Australia was never about taking a vacation.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1808 Read Count: 3716 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2008 Updated: January 06, 2008
Reviewer: Susan M Signed
Date: January 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Your nightmares only need a year or two to unfold

Well then.  Looks like ole Jimpert got his hug after all. :D  

Summary: Past Featured StoryThey make it exactly one hundred and twenty-three hours.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3249 Read Count: 12316 ePub Downloads: 9
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2008 Updated: January 23, 2008
Reviewer: susanita Signed 10
Date: January 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

How sweet and funny and then, wow. Smokin'.   Excellent characterizations and great dialogue. 

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Summary: Past Featured StoryTwo days after the Booze Cruise...what might've happened if Jim had confessed sooner.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Mark
Genres: Angst, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88192 Read Count: 291341 ePub Downloads: 96
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2008 Updated: July 11, 2008
Reviewer: susanita Signed 10
Date: January 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's so embarrassing how happy I get to see the e-mail notification in my inbox.  :D   You're cloning Chuck and making another Halpert?!   Okay. I'm in!   Can't wait to see what happens next! 

And there better be some kissing. :-P   



Author's Response:

Eee -- so glad you're excited about another Halpert brother who's inspired by Chuck. :o) I just couldn't resist, because they seem so similar to me (JK & ZL).  I wrote the second chapter before the second to last episode aired (the one wherein Chuck spends the bulk of the episode trying to talk Casey into going after his ex-girlfriend) -- so that episode sort of doubly thrilled me, as Chuck was doing there what Josh does here, to a degree. 

I'm rambling.  :o) Thanks so much for reviewing -- and about the kissing?  ...Oh yes, there will be kissing.  :oP