Penname: Aeoist Real name: Allison
Member Since: March 02, 2007

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Summary: He wants to ask her if they are doing this because she doesn't like to be alone. Pam/Toby; slight Pam/Jim
Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam, Toby
Genres: Angst, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1141 Read Count: 1648 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 27, 2006 Updated: December 27, 2006
Reviewer: Aeoist Signed
Date: March 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: I've been closing these doors for days

I thought this story was absolutely fabulous. I like how much it leaves up to the imagination. Very understated but in a good way. I adore Toby and the characterization of him here is spot on. Not a story I have read before, which is definitely hard to do here. Nice job.

Summary:

Basic plot: Karen and Jim break up and Jim thinks that he can find consolation in Pam.

A couple allusions to Beach Games, but no real spoilers...just fantasizing. :)


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Oneshot, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2614 Read Count: 10033 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: May 14, 2007 Updated: May 14, 2007
Reviewer: Aeoist Signed
Date: July 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So hot. You wrote both the emotions and the sex really well. Although, my one complaint is the idea of Pam giggling while Jim is totally into it seems awkward and disjointed with the emotions of the scene. Otherwise, very well done.