Summer picnics, maps, rain...things change year to year. (No spoilers.)Absolutely beautiful writing. I could almost fell Jim's arm brushing my thigh (if only!). Love the second person and I can't wait for next years picnic.
Author's Response: So happy that the second person worked for you...it made me a little nervous to write it that way. Much appreciate the generous review, Klankie. Another picnic coming up soon.
Sometimes you just have to try new things. A Pam/Ryan story that is more about Pam/Jim than you would think.
I really love this whole concept. Although I do feel sad about Jim being too late, I do enjoy Pam and Ryan together. I liked that one of the reasons she identified with Ryan was that he wasn't attached to Dunder Mifflin and she could just follow him out the door.
Loved the idea of them starting a tshirt business together. Great work!
After a fire destroys her apartment, Pam moves in with Jim and Karen. Everyone has to find out how they define "friendship". Not for those who prefer their Jim to be wholesome.
Poor Pam. Interesting premise, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Poor Pam. Interesting premise, I can't wait to see what happens next.
Love, love, loved this. So hot and sweet and just ...blurgh. Very nicely done!
I needed some cheering up, so in that vein, here is an incredibly un-angsty little piece of fluff. It's only three parts long and it's almost all done.
Pam and Jim reconnect in the most unlikely of all places...
Wow! Even though I usuaally avoid stories that take place in the future &/or with kids, this has made me almost giddy. I especially love this line:
Maybe with a pot belly and a toupee he wouldn’t look like he stepped off the front cover of a magazine called ‘Pam’s Regrets.’
Great job and I can't wait to see where this goes.
"So, Jim," she started, setting the empty can back down on the table as she returned his cup to him. "Have you ever done drugs?" She leaned in towards him for even more emphasis. She grinned widely at him before sitting back in her chair. [Spoilers up to and including Drug Testing for part one. Part two and beyond set in an AU-version of season 4.]What a coincidence. I just watched this episode last night. I think this has a lot of potential. Can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
This is hilarious. I loved how Dwights language became more miltaristic as they got closer to playing. I also loved jim knowing exaclty what angle to play in order to get Dwight to put the game back. Jim looking for a camera was also perfect. Great job.
Author's Response: As a salesman, I figured Jim would be able to manipulate Dwight in any way he wanted to. That continues into Chapter 2 as well. Dwight is very excited to play RISK, and of course, beat Jim at something. Thank you for your review, I appreciate it!
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