Pam's discovered the world of internet chat rooms. Jim can't resist the chance to be near her in cyberspace. Spoilers up to Cocktails. This chapter ending put a huge smile across my face. Awesome thing to find right before I go to sleep - hopefully will produce fabulously cute Jammy dreams.
The chat room reaction should be great. Can't wait! More more more!
Best line: "WalkingDisaster> Wouldn't you like something to happen here though, Squirrel? I mean, have I been misinterpreting our friendship?"
i was like OH YEAH PAM! that was a total slap in the face to Jim (in a good way) I loved this chapter - Probably the best yet. I hope you address when she found out - I love it! Awesome!
Michael decides to take his sales dream team on a little trip and pulls Pam along for the ride. Spoilers through Cocktails.
10 I would like you to know that I signed up for an MTT account specifically to comment on this fic. I love it. I love everything about it. Seriously. Awesome.
It has also made me realize that as much of a JAMshipper as I am, I think I am moreso a pamshipper - I just want her to be happy, and if Ryan is the one to get her there so be it! What are we calling them? pryan?
Holy crap! *DEEP BREATHS DEEP BREATHS* It was so not expected! I love it! I love Manipulative!Pam and SlightlyVindictiveHornyDrunken!Pam. moremoremore! gah!
Author's Response: Hee! Oh Pam, she could totally pull something like this and I'd still think she was sweet and adorable :)
this story is awesome Dnkn - my only comment about this particular chapter is that I feel like the pacing of the story changed. It was like - ok, all of a sudden it was time to leave to boat, and then they were off the boat and then they were back at the office. On the way into the cruise, there was a lot more description of what happened, and it seemed that you may have skipped a great opportunity to flesh out those scenes for awkwardness. I don't mean to be so critical, because I could never write like this, but That just really jumped out at me in this chapter.
This story is still awesome and I can't wait to see where you go!
Oh I love Kelly! my favorite quote:
"our favorite songs from Dreamgirls" - hahaha...so is Ken gay? Now THAT would be an awesome twist! I wonder if Pam would ever tell Jim about Ryan at her apartment. I can't wait for the saga to continue!
Awesome...just...awesome. I love this dynamic you have really created between the fantasy life of the boat, and the reality of the office and how a seemingly insignificant drunken-office-outing weekend can really change Pam's outlook. And the evolution of Pam? Love it. This chapter is particularly dawesome.
After a fire destroys her apartment, Pam moves in with Jim and Karen. Everyone has to find out how they define "friendship". Not for those who prefer their Jim to be wholesome.
This is going to be good - looking forward to an update!
“I need someplace to stay.” She said this so softly he had to strain to hear her in the stillness of the evening, leaning toward her slightly. Something inside of him suddenly wanted to protect her.
Heffing hotness. I am really lazy about reviews, and I read a bunch of fanfic, but I had to log in and comment on this one. Wow.
And Ilove the sweatshirt stuff, which is so realistic and true. In fact I stole my husbands sweatshirt the other day (obviously more out of necessity than anything, but it is still nice to have boy smell on an oversized sweatshirt)
I love this story so much. And It is amazing how you can turn a touch or a simple kiss into an extremely hot moment. You are a great fic writer!
50 Squee-ing! I love Squirrel - Now I need to go back and read the original again.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, archychick - and enjoy the re-read on the original!