Reviewer: Lavenderia Signed 8
Date: November 11, 2007
Title: Chapter 1: Keep Breathing
Oh, beautiful!! I haven't heard the Ingrid Michaelson song, but this actually reminds me of that song Electrical Storm by U2. Although that's about a relationship falling apart...so not really.
Maybe I'm just thinking of that line 'the night it is aching/two lovers lie with no sheets on their bed'. So sonically I had the gorgeous xylophone chimes and the pulsing swell of the storm from that song going through my head while I was reading.
Not really sure if that made sense. Anyway, the point is I loved it :) Very sweet.
Author's Response: Oh, I don't think I've ever heard that song...but it sounds like it would fit perfectly for this fic, huh? Thank you very much for reading and taking the time out to review. I appreciate it all!