Penname: Semby Real name:
Member Since: August 10, 2006

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Summary: Past Featured StoryJim receives a gift the day after Christmas. And then another one the next day. And again for the 10 days after. Is it a joke, or has his True Love come forward?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Holiday, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 66510 Read Count: 94147 ePub Downloads: 38
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2006 Updated: January 20, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 7
Date: December 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: On The Fifth Day of Christmas

Oh, I'm loving this story and now seriously looking forward to Kevin's New Years party!

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Date: January 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: On The Sixth Day of Christmas

Oh, this chapter just hit all the right buttons. I love the couch cuddling and the drunken kissing that goes just a little farther than he would have expected. And sleeping over. I'm a big fan of sleepovers. :)

Reviewer: Semby Signed 8
Date: January 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: On The Eighth Day of Christmas

Hee! Way to grab my attention with the first sentence. And I love how they both made a little more effort (or less in Jim's case) on their appearance for each other. And the stairwell scene. And the makeout at the end. Whew! Great stuff.

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Date: January 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: On The Eleventh Day of Christmas

When you start with fun times in the shower, you know it's gonna be a good slumber party! And OMG one day until the reveal!

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Date: January 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: On The Twelfth Day of Christmas

And it was all revealed just as it ought to have been! Very sweet ending :)

Vignettes II by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 41] 13
Summary:

A few light bits and pieces I'd accumulated (have written enough angst lately, thanks.) Since they were just languishing, I figured I'd resurrect Vignettes and send them out into the world. Each is a stand-alone, NOT a chapter in a work-in-progress, so feel free to jump in and out. (I'm thinking there will be 3-5 pieces, but will have to see how the mood strikes me.)

If I owned these characters, would I be writing this stuff? Seriously. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Steamy, Weekend, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3971 Read Count: 10740 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2006 Updated: January 02, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 9
Date: December 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Rebound

Oh, these were delicious. So glad to be getting more vignettes from you!


Author's Response: Thanks, Semby!  I seem to accumulate these scenes...glad you enjoy them!

Reviewer: Semby Signed 9
Date: January 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Engagement Party

Ooh, now that's the way to celebrate an engagement! I love the little mention of the one exception of the horizontal activities: "That was vertical." Hee! And, gotta love the pancakes.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the pancakes and the, ahem, vertical activity...after all, they have to mix it up a little, right? Thanks, Semby!

Summary: Past Featured StoryA love triangle, from a different perspective.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Karen
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3826 Read Count: 10412 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2006 Updated: January 16, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 7
Date: December 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, my God, I was cringing the whole way through this by how totally far off Karen was and how it's going to be such a sucker punch to her when she finds out the truth. Very interested to see where this will go!

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Date: January 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

And the pieces are beginning to come together... Karen's SO close to knowing and understanding the truth. I can't wait to see how she reacts.

Summary: The revelation of the truth makes things far less easy to understand. Set during "The Secret"

Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1405 Read Count: 1957 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2006 Updated: December 30, 2006
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Date: January 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah! It kind of kills me how in denial she is. Or even how close she is to admitting the truth, but then still thinking it doesn't matter because Roy gives her stability. And her question in the elevator is such a tease, but was very enjoyable to read.

Summary: Jim and Pam discuss baby names. A companion piece to my alternate universe series (Labor Relations, DVD Saturday, Mixed Messages, Indecent Proposal)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Married, Romance
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: Baby Talk
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1939 Read Count: 5092 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 31, 2006 Updated: December 31, 2006
Reviewer: Semby Signed 9
Date: January 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Kicking Around Names

Hee! Could this get any cuter! I love how they make it into a game, even getting competitive about it. “Oh-ho! Two kicks! Two!” Pam exclaimed, holding up two fingers. She pushed herself to a sitting position. “Beat that Halpert!” Ha!


Author's Response: thanks! I love the idea of them being competitive with each other!

Summary: Mixed messages, strawberry lip gloss and covert operations.
Categories: Other, Episode Related
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Kelly, Ryan
Genres: Humor, Oneshot, Slash
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1438 Read Count: 3339 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2007 Updated: January 01, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 8
Date: January 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Lord, what fools these mortals be...

HA! This was too fun. What a wonderful twist on the classic story. I love Kelly's reaction to Angela's kiss. And Dwight trying to cover up the reason for his mistake. And this: there’s not enough sugarless gum in the world to wash the taste of sin from her mouth.

Author's Response:

Thank you!!  I just kept trying to think of how I could possibly pull this off.  The idea of Angela put in this situation was just good to pass up.

So glad you enjoyed it!

Boys' Night Out by Bennie Rated: T [Reviews - 9] 5
Summary: Past Featured Story

Darryl convinces Roy to come out with him and get over Pam. Spoilers through A Benihana Christmas. Kind of a follow-up to my Darryl fic Yamaha.

 


Categories: Other, Present, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Darryl, Pam, Pam/Roy, Roy
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4853 Read Count: 2258 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 01, 2007 Updated: January 01, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 9
Date: January 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Boys' Night Out

Oh, this was so good, and so sad. I love your take on how completely into her he was right away in high school, and the proposal story and how they twisted it - and how you just jump from there to the break up, because we kind of know already how it went downhill from there. And this:  “You think.”  He felt helpless.  He wanted to convince her that he was happy, she was happy, THEY could be happy, but he felt blindsided, and he realized with a wave of nausea that that she hadn’t drawn him from memory in years.

So, so sad. But I really love Darryl's pep talk. He's so rational, and so right that they've both been doing better since the breakup. It's good to see Roy starting to realize that.

Teeny thing: The only way he knew for sure that she was there is the glass of orange juice sitting on the nightstand. I think the "is" should be past tense. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I was worried about the big time jump in flashback, but I figured that as far as Roy was concerned, there was no real problems until she ended it.  Poor sad bearded Roy.

 

Oh, and thank you for pointing out the tense problem - I originally had the story structured a bit differently, and all of the flashbacks were in present tense - I was convinced I missed something, but you can only stare at the screen for so long.  I went backand fixed it.  Sometimes all you need is another pair of eyes. :) 

Push by Pixel Rated: M [Reviews - 11] 12
Summary: Jim's got one last chance to change Pam's mind.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Pam
Genres: Romance, Steamy, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5731 Read Count: 8818 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2007 Updated: January 02, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 7
Date: January 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ooh! I know I've read this before, but I can't remember where or when or if I left a review the first time, but anyway, I really, really love it. It's got all the really satisfying aspects: Jim asking her to take a chance, her considering her options and TAKING a chance, and a happy ending. And Jim in his underwear. :D

Summary:

The parallels between Jim and Pam.  A series of drabbles.  Spoilers through Traveling Salesmen


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Inner Monologue, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1231 Read Count: 15651 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2007 Updated: January 16, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 8
Date: January 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: The Persuasion

Ooh, these are all such interesting parallels, and you show that so well. It'll be interesting to see more of these, if more little comparable moments come out throughout the season, which I'm sure they will.

The Beginning by LadyLuck Rated: T [Reviews - 5]
Summary: JAM! Yet another account of the epic meeting of Jim and Pam. My first Office fanfic, please please please review!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Michael
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4667 Read Count: 6658 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2007 Updated: January 08, 2007
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Date: January 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Just a Receptionist?

This is really cute so far :)

Summary: Karen's more of a replacement than she knows. No spoilers unless you don't know who Karen is.
Categories: Present, Other
Characters: Angela, Jim, Karen, Michael, Pam, Stanley
Genres: Angst, Drabble, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 576 Read Count: 2615 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2007 Updated: January 04, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 8
Date: January 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh, this was really clever. And I totally think this could really happen on the show.

Pick Up Lines by LoveFool Rated: T [Reviews - 20] 8
Summary: Past Featured StoryThis is a companion piece to my alternate universe series. Instant Message format like Mixed Messages (only its set before they're married. They are dating/engaged in this one). Enjoy!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Steamy, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: Baby Talk
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2143 Read Count: 5546 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2007 Updated: January 04, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 10
Date: January 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Pick Up Lines

Oh, my God, I love this so much. I was giggling the whole way through. The panties. Pam jumping up in front of her computer to hide it from her mom. "Guess what? I love you." So sweet! I love how fun they are. I could read it again and again.

Summary: Started out as a mildly fluffy ficlet featuring Pam and her hair. Then it turned into a Five Things. Each one is based around a simple, everyday object that changes things (however slightly) for the better.
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1909 Read Count: 6031 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2007 Updated: January 12, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 8
Date: January 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Shampoo

Oooh, that was just ridiculously yummy.

Summary: The shortest distance between point A and point B is a straight line, but he's never been very good at geometry.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Past, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Oneshot
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2026 Read Count: 4907 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2007 Updated: January 05, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 9
Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, Jim. Such a dreamer. The last one, the last sentence, was devastating. I actually think I like the pre-Pam ones the most. I like seeing young, naive Jim. And the baby-sitter one was adorable!

Summary:

A day at the zoo with the Halperts.


Categories: Future, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Other, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Married, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: Annie Halpert: Prankster-in-Training
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 540 Read Count: 3303 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2007 Updated: January 05, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 8
Date: January 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: At the Zoo

This was so cute! I love Pam and Annie's twin responses of "ridiculous!"

And, this might be me being totally dense, but I felt like I missed something: What was the questioning look/mouthed-"fine" in reference to? 



Author's Response:

Good catch, Semby -- I left that a little ambiguous on purpose.  In my mind, Pam was a little tired while walking around with Jim and Annie and had to take a break.  Why?  I suppose that's open to interpretation. :)

Thank you so much for your feedback! :)

In The Dust by Paper Jam Rated: M [Reviews - 18] 5
Summary: Six characters, trying to figure things out.
Categories: Other, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Inner Monologue
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1070 Read Count: 1537 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 08, 2007 Updated: January 08, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 8
Date: January 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: In The Dust

These were all awesome and so in tune with the characters, but I really, really love the Michael and Jan ones.


Author's Response: Oh, thank you! Jan came first, then Michael; I think that's why they're stronger. The rest just butted their heads in!

Summary: Past Featured StoryWhat if it wasn't Dwight who found her? Spoilers for Back from Vacation.
Categories: Episode Related, Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Pam
Genres: Angst, Humor, Oneshot
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2267 Read Count: 22588 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 08, 2007 Updated: January 08, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 9
Date: January 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Tears and Rain

Ooh, this was awesome. The Andy and Kelly ones tickled my funny bone, the Toby one was very sweet, and ohhh, that last one. Poor Pam. My heart's aching for her. I can't wait for the new episode so I can see for sure that she's ok again!

Author's Response: Thank you!  Hopefully now that she got that out of her system, newepisode!Pam will be determined to get Jim....or at least not help his relationship with Karen again.  

Summary: An intimate moment between Jim and Pam
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 781 Read Count: 3605 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2007 Updated: January 09, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 7
Date: January 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww! I love them being all cute and happy and playful. This was a delight!


Author's Response: Thank you!

Summary: The fourth in a series of themed fics (Language Barrier, Color Wheel and Weather Patterns)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: Elements
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4862 Read Count: 21540 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2007 Updated: January 10, 2007
Reviewer: Semby Signed 9
Date: January 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Venus

Mmm, this was lovely. I think "Mars" may be my favorite even though it's the most painful, because the emotions just feel so vivid in that one. I love him telling her, "I just really want you to be happy." Aw. But I do love them being all playful and together and happy in the last two as well. That's a real treat. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Semby! Yeah, I have to say, Mars was my favourite to write. I got totally sucked into Jim, despairing in his shut up apartment and willing to move on, as long as she was happy. And you know there had to be a happy ending!