How would things have turned out if Pam read the card that came with her teapot?
10 I love the note that Jim left her. If it were actually in the show, I would have died.
Love this line:
"She might kind of love him too.
Crap."
10 Lame metaphors are fun. :D
And hooray! Fluff makes the world go round, as I like to say.
Author's Response: Haha, they are! And it really does. I mean, we would we all be without the happiness fluff brings? Haha! I'm glad you are enjoying this! Thanks for the review!
10 Oh my God! This was so scary, and at the same time, extremely well-written... I'm going to keep reading!
I never thought I could hate Roy more, and yet, here I am.
Oh my goodness, Pam. Break Jim's heart, why don't you?
*sigh*
Oh, and you may want to watch your grammar/spelling in a couple places. No biggie, though.
10 Holy shit.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your reviews! They're all so nice and fun to read! You're awesome! I'll hopefully have another chapter up soon!
10 Agh! I don't want a scene with Roy in it! xP
Keep writing. Pleeease?
Author's Response: It'll be the last of him, I can assure you that! And I will - I feel a major writing surge burst through me right now. You're in luck : )
10 Woah. Jim is a love machine. xD
That was kind of an awkward one, lol, with the whole Pam explanation and everything. I'm guessing the visit to Roy is going to be even worse! Can't wait to read it though, awkwardness is what makes The Office The Office!
Author's Response: I figured that in all of the fluff there had to be some awkwardness considering the beginning of the story was dark and everything. It was such a big change from blood to fluff! Haha! But I agree, it's what makes it so funny! And the actors play it so well! Anywho, I'm glad to know that you're enjoying this! Thanks for the review!
10 Okay, that firt chapter was pretty much the saddest thing I have ever read. Will it get happier? I'm going to see...:D
Author's Response: Keep reading!! You\'ll be happy!!
8 I like the story. It's really sweet. I'm pretty sure I just used about half of my life reading it, though. xD
10 Oh my goodness. This is an insanely amazing piece of writing. Seriously, it's like there's a vice squeezing my heart apart. Reading on...
10 This writing just made me cry. I need the happy part!
Author's Response: Keep reading! It gets there!!
10 Ahhh!
You're killing me!
8 This chapter was cold and upsetting.
But in a good way. ;)
I noticed a couple of spelling errors in here. If you ever need a beta for your stories, I'm available.
10 Oh, dear. I might just stop reading now.
But even I know I'm too curious to do that. Here goes...
*grits teeth and plunges into next chapter*
Oh, this was very well written, by the way. :D
The Dunder Mifflin Company is vacationing on a Caribbean cruise. Jim and Pam are hoping for a romantic vacation but will Michael's outrageousness and some jealousy get in their way?
Takes place in Season 4 and is mostly focused on Jim/Pam.
8 There were a few errors in the story, but I'm definitely interested.
If Karen screws up this trip for Jim and Pam I will be very angry!
I love the Mentos game. So Jam. :D
10 Awww.
So is this the end?
Because this is adorable.
Jim and Pam conversations are love.
Author's Response: The sequel is in the works right now, but there is a mini chapter to end this one. I havent finished editing that one yet. Stay tuned!
10 Oh my God. If this ever happened I would die.
Jim's been acting a little strange these days.10 “You forgot the beet farm.”
“Only after weeks of therapy."
^One of the best fanfic quotes ever. You have totally captured J&P. Can't wait until the ass-kicking! Write write write!
Author's Response: Thanks :D It\'s so hard to do justice to their brand of banter but it sure is fun trying. hard at work on the end of this little journey...maybe i\'ll get it finished by tomorrow night??
10 Ahhh that end part with Mr. Langely was so funny. I'm loving this! Reading on...
P.S., Author responses are loved as much by readers as reviews are loved by the authors. ;)
9 Awww, I love it. My favorite is the summer one with the yellow shirt...
9 Very cute. I wish that there could've been more talk about the "borderless heart" thing, though. But what can I say, I'm a sap. =D
9 The end line is love.
The end line is poetry.
The end line is lovely poetry.
8 JAM fluff is always okay and always will be. :D
10 Oh my God.
All I can give that story is a big fat "Awww."
The language you used was magnificent and it was all just...
AWWWWW!
Author's Response: \"Awww\" is truly the best compliment for the kind of stuff I like to write -- stuff that tugs at your heart a little bit. Love it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, JamFan4.
10 This was amazing to the ninth power. If this is how they play out the proposal on the actual show, I will be a happy woman.
Also, when J&P get married, they both have to say "Absolutely I do."