Date: March 02, 2007 04:45 pm Title: You'll see
I'm going to pretend that this utterly romantic, sweet story is a shout out to me. Canada? Niagara Falls? Love it! And for the first time I actually know exactly what locations someone is referring to in their stories! LOL Very sweet ending (even if I am a traditionalist) ;-)
Date: February 05, 2007 11:06 am Title: You'll see
Egad! So sweet, so lovely, so....what happened to your fic writing strike? To come back with such a vengeance! 7000+ words! Romantic, getting them together permanently, ending Pam's indecision... all hitting perfect notes. Awesome! (I also wish I wrote this poem - it's just wonderful!)
Date: February 05, 2007 06:41 am Title: You'll see
A huge difference. I loved the story and the idea that it was all Pam's doing.
Date: February 04, 2007 11:56 pm Title: You'll see
oh moxie...you evil little smack dealer. my hubby and i have our own (if a bit odd) niagra falls memory. so this was sweet to see. and, as always, beautuflly written. btw - i love that they have phone sex(a recurring theme i see). niiiiiiiiice.
Date: February 04, 2007 09:07 pm Title: You'll see
Oh how beautiful! I just loved how you covered everything in this. I feel completely satisfied...getting to see them at the beginning of their relationship. Getting to see them come to terms with what happened in the past and then having them make new memories and think about the future! And I don't think I've ever read a fic where Pam proposed to Jim!!! What a great story!
Date: February 04, 2007 09:02 pm Title: You'll see
Thanks, Moxie. Yeah, we all needed this. So great that they wore the same outfits, now under happier circumstances. And I just KNEW that FNB was gonna propose, so WOOOOOO!! On a side note, glad the leaning, the forearms and the shirtless were all included as well..
Author's Response: Well, there are certain elements of a good Jam story that MUST always be included!! :-D
Date: February 04, 2007 08:13 pm Title: You'll see
Oooh. So sweet. So...*sigh* Yay.
8 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2007 08:09 pm Title: You'll see
Ah fluff -- how I love it! And to have Pam propose to Jim was such a cool little twist.
Date: February 04, 2007 07:53 pm Title: You'll see
WOW! I was totally hoping that Pam was going to propose. That is so awesome. My sister got engaged at Niagara Falls, so I was very excited when I got to that part, I was so very happy. Hee, I'm such a sap. Yay.
Date: February 04, 2007 03:48 pm Title: You'll see
Well, I can see you got your inspiration back. So sweet and romantic. And she proposes to him. How much would I love it to work out that way? Your Pam is certainly a pro at pulling off surprises for Jim...lovely, Moxie! Thanks for this much needed bit o' fluff (and for reminding me of Marge Piercy, who I hadn't thought about in way too long.)
Date: February 04, 2007 02:56 pm Title: You'll see
As always, a really enjoyable story! Love that Pam put in so much effort, and always love such a happy ending!
Date: February 04, 2007 02:50 pm Title: You'll see
I'm not exactly sure why you hesitate to write things. All of your work is great, including this.
9 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2007 02:31 pm Title: You'll see
Very nice. I must admit, as soon as I knew they were heading for Niagara Falls, I knew some sort of engagement-marriage thing would be happening (Niagara Falls being the Vegas of Canada), but I found the way you expanded on the story very touching. Jim's lingering insecurities also added a realistic touch to the story.
10 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2007 02:21 pm Title: You'll see
Lovely fluffiness - just what we need at the moment! A lovely warm story, I love it very much :-)
Date: February 04, 2007 02:04 pm Title: You'll see
gotta love it. and i do...no marriage pun intended. but if pam did this for me, how could i say no? great work, its a fun read
Date: February 04, 2007 11:50 am Title: You'll see
Awe. Yay for total fluff! :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm going crazy over all this current angst.