Date: October 22, 2022 07:24 pm Title: Six Weeks
I love this story! You have the language between Jim and Pam down well. I love that Pam said she called 'dibs' on being the first to hold Cece when they picked her up.
1 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2022 01:39 pm Title: Six Weeks
What a great ending line to a great story!
1 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2021 10:32 am Title: Six Weeks
This is a lovely picture of new parenthood and young love.
1 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2021 10:23 am Title: Six Weeks
This feels like a very real sense of what Pam might have been going through at this particular moment. I love getting this slice of their life outside the office.
10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2011 10:00 am Title: Two
I loved this chapter and the previous one.
In the last chapter there was the romantic hope that she was pregnant, the sadness that "Paris" wasn't quite so tangible anymore (not that you mentioned it, but my mind inferred it), that there relationship was too new.
And then in this chapter, I thought their reactions were so realistic. The "oh shit" feeling (again, those are my words, not yours) when the test was positive. The scared out of their minds, the doubts, the love, the nervousness, the knowing they always had each other to get through this, it was great.
Now, on to Chapter 5!
9 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2011 07:59 am Title: Nine to Five
yanana! i've been meaning to get on reviewing this - i've been in love with this little piece ever since i read it last week. Jim and Pam are sooooo un-vanilla and so is this lovely story! it's about as chocolate as they come. :) just all-around perfect smut and the writing is wonderfully delicious, per usual. thank youuu!
Date: February 20, 2011 05:32 pm Title: Nine to Five
Fantastic work. I was also shamelessly trolling this site for some post PDA fics. Yours did not disappoint. It is perfectly sexy, funny and smutty. It's sefunty. Nice work!
Date: February 15, 2011 10:09 am Title: Nine to Five
Wow, I just read this at work...and now, I'm even walking around with a certain kind of "sex-person" smirk on my face...whew!
Date: February 14, 2011 10:38 pm Title: Nine to Five
THIS. WAS. AWESOME!!! Haha wow. Perfect mix of sexy/cute/funny/realistic and I loved every sentence. This is exactly how I hope it happened, oh and I love that you mixed unseen footage with stuff the camera caught - really made it easy to follow the linear path of the story. Great job!
9 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2011 11:04 am Title: Nine to Five
Kate to the rescue! Happy Valentine's Day, honey! This was a delectable treat. You are so dang good at this frenzied sex thing ;) Oh and the thought of them contemplating the possibility of another baby?! Love. It. Stick around, won't you? Pretty please?
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2011 09:28 am Title: Nine to Five
YAY! i was hoping someone would jump on the smutwagon, because try as i might, i sure as hell can't.
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2011 07:00 am Title: Nine to Five
Hope you're back for good! This is great. Im happy someone did this. You still 'got it' I love so many things about it. :)
9 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2011 06:15 am Title: Nine to Five
Yay! I'm so glad someone finally did this! Very nicely done, I loved it!
Date: February 14, 2011 06:01 am Title: Nine to Five
Yay for the follow up!! Loved it! I was really hoping someone would jump on it! And I'm glad it was you! Awesome!
Date: February 14, 2011 05:47 am Title: Nine to Five
I especially like your "drunk!Pam" voice And this made me laugh outloud because it is so very in character I could really hear Pam saying it: I'm grunting now, like some kind of sex... person Let's hear it for unvanilla.
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2011 05:12 am Title: Nine to Five
I love you. This is JUST what I needed. That was all kind of hots and delicious. Drunk Jim and Pam ROCK (and you work good on booze too ;))
Date: February 14, 2011 04:16 am Title: Nine to Five
LOVED this! Normally I don't read smutty-smut but this was really tasteful, and this line had me laughing hysterically:
like some kind of sex... person
so good to see you're writing again!
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2010 10:16 pm Title: Two
GREAT story! Can't wait for the next chapter, but I'm kinda dreading it too. It sorta sounded at the end of this chapter like Pam was maybe headed towards breaking up with Jim and if she does that I think I may just lose faith in Pam here. I mean, I have said to many people that I think Pam often gets painted unfairly and she often takes a total beating for the events of Casino Night, people seem to forget the HUGE price she paid for that night and she went into it blindly while Jim went into it with an excape plan all ready. When her world shattered because of that night she seemed like she lost more than Jim did, IMO of course. Anyhow, my point is that I tend to go easy on Pam, especially since so many are hard on her but here she knows the whole story... Jim was in love with her and waited for her for years in fact doing SO many of the things Roy should have been doing. Like I mentioned, he laid out his love for her AND I think that by not only doing that but by also leaving it forced her to see how meaningless and void of love her relationship with Roy had become and that it was only tolerable because Jim was there to take care of her, listen to her, fix things and fill so many of her needs, emotional and otherwise. He DID leave a relationship he had been building, on the spot, making himself look awful not to mention giving up the chance at a prime position in the company only because he wanted her. He was basicaly a dream boyfrien from the start, I mean telling her like that that he wanted to take her on a major trip, I've been with my husband 23 yrs and, well, yeah,,, not happening here. He REALLY wants to be the person she talks to and leans on in tough times. When she became pregnant so soon after they began their relationship, he was there 100% from the start. Through the miscarriage he is totally just wanting to take care of her and her needs, emotional and otherwise. I'm eally happy he is like this but it also made me sad because reading I had to wonder through the miscariage, Jim was in a lot of emotional pain and it seemed there was no one to meet his needs. ANYHOW, if after all that, Pam throws it away this time, if losing him for a year after Casino Night didn't teach her a lesson and she throws them away, well, I guess she'll deserve what she gets. Oh and BTW, I know Jim wasn't perfect, there was the fight but I swear, I was feeling his frustration. It has to hurt to feel you are paying for the mistakes the last guy made! Anyhow, GREAT job, actually had me happy and also brought tears which these stories don't often do. Can't wait for more!
Date: August 08, 2010 05:21 pm Title: Two
I'm soo glad to see this one back! I can't wait to see where you're going to take this! :)
Date: August 08, 2010 08:51 am Title: Two
Poor Jim and Pam. I love how fragile they feel right now. I do hope this won't break them apart, but also that it won't not make things difficult, for a while. I'd really like to see them endure the struggle together, even if they are struggling with each other.
And I would really love to see Jim telling his parents, because he needs them. Or them telling his parents together and Pam being afraid that they'd hate her for it and his mom being motherly toward Pam and... okay, I'm just babbling and shoving my ideas down your throat now. Sorry! Anyway, point being I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens and I hope to see more updates soon.
Date: August 07, 2010 07:32 am Title: Two
I am in a hurry so can't leave a long review. But ... Wow, I cannot wait to see what those closing paragraphs portend! And I love how you describe Jim & Pam's isolation in this loss, how they only have each other since it was too early in their relationship to admit the situation to their families.
Gotta run!
Date: August 06, 2010 01:31 pm Title: Two
Kate Kate Kate, low quality? Are you insane? That was so beathtakingly beautiful, and heartbreaking and just... reading this gave me that lump in my throat, you know?
How I've missed you!
10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2010 07:31 am Title: Two
This whole thing just breaks my heart (but in such a beautifully good way!). A situation like that is the kind of thing that makes or breaks a relationship and it's painful to think that someone as strong as Jim and Pam could crumble and drift apart because of it. I doubt that's where you're going but it's those moments when they don't know how to just be with each other that are the most painful. I have a feeling I know where you're going with this but I can't wait to see what does happen. I'm so happy you're still continuing with this!
Date: August 06, 2010 05:43 am Title: Two
Kate, my friend! How happy I am to have you around! Transition--yes, but low-quality? Most definitely not. It was so full of emotion. I re-read the prior chap first to get me in the right frame of mind, and this transition worked well. I hope you've got the writing bug again, because I would love to read some more of this...or anything else...
10 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2010 10:32 pm Title: Six Weeks
Ahhhh I'm so sorry I've been slow on reviews and it's taken me until now to profess my love for this. But as always yanana, you write beautifully yet realistically with the emotion of the characters always seeping through to immerse the reader in the little world you've formed. And more than anything, you create a thoroughly entertaining and adorable fic that I can read over and over again. Thank you for all the things you choose to be. :)