Date: February 12, 2007 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww! I love a happy ending. And this dialogue was a great way to sum up her horrific but amusing week!
Author's Response: Thanks Semby! I love a happy ending too. You hear me Greg Daniels and co.????
Date: February 11, 2007 08:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. So romantic and I sure wish this would actually happen. Sigh.
Naked Creed! Gah!
Author's Response:
Thanks belsum! Nakes Creed just cracks me up.
Date: February 08, 2007 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this so very very much.
Author's Response: Thank you shan!
Date: February 08, 2007 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Because I'm just taking some notes for myself on what a perfect date should consist of and..."
Aw, he always knows how to make her smile. Now if he would just stop making her cry, we'd be all set. Well done! Happy thoughts!
Author's Response: Thanks Paper Jam! And amen to what you said about him making her cry!
10 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2007 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
And that, my friends, is how Jim and Pam should've gotten together over this past week! LOL I seriously loved every moment of this. Your characterization was spot-on. There were so many moments where I could actually hear Jim or Pam speaking the dialogue, so fantastic job with that! I love it when authors grasp the characters so well that it's like you can actually hear Jenna Fischer or John Krasinski's voices speaking the lines. The part about "new start, new day" was a brilliant way to summarize the entire story. For some reason, I'm absolutely enamored by the idea of Jim and Pam "moving together in the darkness of her living room." That just gave me goosebumps with the imagery of such a scene. How romantic. And dancing in the dark just makes it all the more romantic. Lovely, lovely, lovely!
So now that this review is a 3 miles long, I'll just wrap it by telling you again how wonderful this story was. After watching "Phyllis' Wedding," I needed an uplifting story. :) Thank you for sharing this!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks threeholepunch! Glad you thought this worked. Dialogue can be difficult when most of the Jim/Pam conversations on the show right now are unspoken. But sometimes not speaking can be lovely too!
Date: February 08, 2007 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
After tonight's episode, I really needed this. I wish you wrote for the show!
Author's Response:
Me too! I'd get those crazy kids together in 2 seconds. And then the show would be cancelled... ;-)
Thanks lisahoo!
8 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2007 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow...loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2007 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this and I love you and I love Moxie for helping you get to the awesome happy ending I crave. Great story. Right into my favorites!
Author's Response: Thanks kaystar! I wanted to be dark and introspective but Moxie gave me a needed kick in the pants!
Date: February 08, 2007 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
yeah yeah yeah!!!!oh if only it were true. awesome story. i am grinning like an idiot.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Maybe someday it will some true!
Date: February 08, 2007 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Damn, Pam's week did suck.
But hooray for the weekend! Gosh, I wish all our weekends could end dancing with Jim Halpert. ^_~
thanks so much for this.
cheers.
--Lex
Author's Response: You're welcome lex! And thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2007 10:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww, so sweet!!
Author's Response: Thanks Puff!
Date: February 08, 2007 09:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Now, you know I'm a big fan - but I think this may be my favorite yet. Such a well constructed story, so full of THEM, great dialogue, lots o' squee...and NEKKID CREED to boot! Something for everyone!
I love that he was in the office looking out for her. Very Jim and very, very sweet. So many great lines, but here's one that made me giggle: Ka-ching! You're a double threat there, Pam!
And the ending - well, be still my heart (...that he was really, truly in love with her..) Really and truly - this one really hit the spot.
Author's Response: I'm laughing too because I'm wondering if there is indeed something for everyone, who is nekkid Creed for? My favorite funny line was also "ka-ching...", of course! And the ending is happy thanks to Moxie. I was going in a whole melancholy painful direction but she convinced me otherwise. Thanks much my dear!
10 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2007 09:38 am Title: Chapter 1
yay, yay, yay!!!!!!!!!!
I think this is one of favourite stories now! :-)
Author's Response: And not just because you forced me to make it all happy and shiny at the end??? I was ready to just wallow in the misery so thanks for pulling me out of the mire! You rock.
7 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2007 09:26 am Title: Chapter 1
I liked the free-form way you did the five things. Nice job taking that risk -- it worked out!
Author's Response: Glad you thought it worked. Thanks sharky!
9 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2007 09:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, yay, it came back.
I really like the detail in this one, although I have to admit that my brain came to a screeching halt and almost refused to keep reading when I got to the part about naked Creed ;)
Author's Response:
Hee! I have a terrible memory (or maybe I'm also blocking out the vision of naked Creed) but I think more than one other fic has mentioned Creed showing up as a model for Pam's art class! Horrifying and hilarious all at once.
Thanks Pseudonym!
Date: February 08, 2007 09:07 am Title: Chapter 1
this is just so great. I love just the subtleness of it and their inner thoughts too. Awesome job
Author's Response: Thanks WildBerryJam! It's fun to make it all end the way you want it to...