1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2019 07:29 pm Title: Fields of Gold
I do feel bad for Karen here. But you do a great job of getting into potential Pam's head. Especially her fears.
10 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2012 09:46 am Title: Fields of Gold
Terrific! Pam seemed to have done everything right. She stopped herself from hiding and crying in the bathroom. She made a hugely flirtatious move on Jim on the dance floor (playing with his waistband). Invited him over. And was honest immediately; none of the tongue-tied crap. And Jim's hesitance during the making-out made the readers hesitant too: Well, author, are we gonna get sex tonight or not? :) and thankfully you delivered.
Date: February 10, 2007 08:24 pm Title: Fields of Gold
Mox, this was so much better than what really happened in this episode. Thanks, I needed it!
Date: February 09, 2007 06:02 am Title: Fields of Gold
I was yelling at the computer screen when I watched this episode finally, and this was a very good [/Jim] tonic. I particularly loved imagining Pam slipping her hands into his jacket, a little into his trousers. Very mmm.
I'm saving this as a page on my cell phone so I can come back to it when the Jam!angst hits me again. Your stories have always had the most amazing way of making me grin at the end. Thank you so very much for writing this!
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks! I'm glad if it helps get you through this - it certainly helps me to write it! I think I am incapable of writing Jam fanfic without having a proper happy ending - I just can't keep them apart. It's not natural!!!!
Date: February 08, 2007 10:29 pm Title: Fields of Gold
I love, love, love the image of Pam slipping her hand inside Jim's jacket. So sexy! And yeah, I think I like this ending better. Nice!
10 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2007 02:49 pm Title: Fields of Gold
This started so sad for Pam ("She already felt inferior enough to Karen without giving Jim just one more reason to see why he'd made the better choice.") but ended so wonderfully smoochily steamy and hot for both of them. I just may move into MTT-ville and read this story over and over if we don't see something Jammy sooner rather than later!
Date: February 08, 2007 02:11 pm Title: Fields of Gold
Oh, I wish, wish, wish it would happen like that... Good story.
Date: February 08, 2007 01:00 pm Title: Fields of Gold
You are such a starry eyed dreamer - this was such a happy read! What can I say Moxie you do the MA thing with unusual flair. This was another treat - even if I am cyber-blushing (what, you don't believe me?!?!)
Author's Response: I do the best I can, anyway. Thanks for the glowing review!
Date: February 08, 2007 12:37 pm Title: Fields of Gold
You know, some pure, unadulterated smut is just what I needed since I'm sure tonight is going to kick me in the gut!
Date: February 08, 2007 12:37 pm Title: Fields of Gold
oh moxie. why do i always finish reading your stories with a huge grin on my face? like i told you - always perfect. and this time, very saucy as well. whew! that was a lot for a thursday afternoon. damn, girll! loved it, as always. maybe this part of the story will be up online as the "producers cut" - right??? hahaha....if wishes were pennies we could all buy back our avatars for OTchat and buy the office, too, and make pam and jim our personal toys. ah, dreams...
Date: February 08, 2007 11:07 am Title: Fields of Gold
I don't know who Tori is, but I am glad she gave you this idea! Thanks for writing this!
Author's Response: Oh, Tori's just one of my muses. :-) I'm really glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2007 10:50 am Title: Fields of Gold
So sweet!
Date: February 08, 2007 10:46 am Title: Fields of Gold
That was incredible. Really really well written. i always look forward to reading your stories!!! I hope the episode tonight goes ilke that!! Can't wait!
Author's Response: thanks for your review - you're so sweet! I can't wait for tonight, either!
Date: February 08, 2007 10:40 am Title: Fields of Gold
so adorable and hot and just great. yet again amazing!
Author's Response: thanks, hon! Happy Thursday!
Date: February 08, 2007 09:51 am Title: Fields of Gold
Ah, if only! When I saw the title of this fic, I was afraid I'd be reliving the great Luke and Lorelai breakup of 2005...during Wedding Bell Blues!
I will in fact be comparing your version of events to what will happen tonight.
Author's Response: hee hee - Oh, I hope my version is somehow true. If there's any way it looks like Pam and Jim are leaving around the same time, we'll know what really happened!!
10 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2007 09:47 am Title: Fields of Gold
A flight of fancy, indeed! I like your version better but I suspect the episode will go in a different direction. Prove me wrong, universe! Nice smuff, Mox!
Author's Response: Yeah, I know - nobody listens to me, and that's why the world is going to hell. I do what I can!