10 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2007 12:57 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?
I LOVE YOU MOXIE!!!!! AWESOME, AWESOME, fic.. was thinking of listing my favorite lines, but, that would be pretty much every sentence, so..
my only teeny tiny beef is that no nurse or tech would take a blood presssure on the same arm that has an IV, cuz that's a surefire way to lose that line. and that's just me being anal... of course, if i were jim/john's nurse, i'd probably do it anyways just to give me an excuse to closely inspect his arms again... ^_^
Back on topic, you frickin' rock.
Author's Response: Yeah, I meant to put the disclaimer that I have only my own ER/hospital visits as reference, and where I was they *did* actually take the bp in the IV arm. But I had IV's in both arms at the time, so what could they do? :-) Anyway, glad you could look past that blunder to still enjoy the story!!
10 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2007 12:56 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?
Oooohhhh... eee! I love this! With Pam taking care of him before the ambulance got there, and the leaning their foreheads together, and this: “Give me your hand then,” he said softly. “I want to be sure I have a hold on you.” *swoon* And Pam telling the doctors and nurses that she was Jim's wife, and signing his release forms with "Pam Halpert", and their kisses, and her telling him that she likes his forearms... squeeeee.
Author's Response: thanks for all the lovely comments - I'm glad you liked it so much!!
Date: February 09, 2007 12:44 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?
Oh Moxie. I just love ya.
That is all. :)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! *huggy*hugs* :-)
Date: February 09, 2007 12:36 pm Title: Shirtsleeves: up or down?
"My shrine to your forearms is sacred ground.”
That's for sure my favorite line. This is such a great idea for a series and just reading about the forearms makes me giggle like a schoolgirl. Love it!
Author's Response:
I think pam probably does have a secret shrine -but she'll go to her grave before admitting it! ;-)
thanks for the comments!