Date: February 12, 2007 05:32 pm Title: Roses
oh, meredith! :( this was beautiful and made me cry. amazing. i loved how she kept repeating that people seldom listen to her. that was heartbreaking.
Author's Response: Thanks! I notice on the show that most people don't seem to listen to her; Creed doesn't even know her name!
10 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2007 04:51 pm Title: Roses
Definitely no problem with pronouns. You really captured Meredith's sadness, as well as how Jim and Pam must look to the people who see them every day.
Author's Response: Getting that perspective on Jim and Pam "from the outside" is difficult, but I'm trying to get there. Thanks for the encouragement!
Date: February 12, 2007 04:48 pm Title: Roses
Oh my gosh. This was absolutely brilliant. Meredith- wow. I am so impressed with this story, how you make her such a round, complex character- not just another bitter alcoholic. Excellent job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I do get tired of Meredith being presented as a one-dimensional character, so I was hoping to give at least a reason for her turning to booze.
Date: February 12, 2007 04:19 pm Title: Roses
Gorgeous. Really beautiful.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I appreciate you taking the time to read.
Date: February 12, 2007 04:05 pm Title: Roses
One word: WOW!
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: February 12, 2007 03:56 pm Title: Roses
Awww! I want Meredith to say something now!
Author's Response: Well, if she hasn't said anything under the influence of liquor now, will she ever? :D
Date: February 12, 2007 03:45 pm Title: Roses
Wow, oh, wow. I love this story you've developed for Meredith. So sad and telling and seems so fitting. I thought the pronouns worked fine, not confusing at all.
Author's Response:
Glad to know the pronouns worked. They can be tricky little devils. Thanks for reading!
Date: February 12, 2007 03:34 pm Title: Roses
So sad but a wonderful look into Meredith's past.
Author's Response: Thanks! She is constantly made into a buffoon on the show, but in RL I think "buffoons" often have a sad past.
Date: February 12, 2007 03:24 pm Title: Roses
this was incredible. I love when "background" characters are brought into the light because they have so much to bring! amazing amazing job
Author's Response: Thanks. I am trying to concentrate more on "background" characters recently, so it's nice to know they "bring it". Thanks for reading!