1 [Report This]Date: December 22, 2020 01:20 am Title: We Just Can't Escape The Madness
Poor Jim. HORRIBLE flashbacks.
1 [Report This]Date: December 22, 2020 01:19 am Title: We Just Can't Escape The Madness
Absolutely the sort of thing Jim would live to regret his kids inheriting from him.
1 [Report This]Date: December 22, 2020 12:05 am Title: Panic
Much as I love the end of Company Picnic, it always struck me as a trifle unrealistic that Jim and Pam would be so excited about what is clearly an unintended pregnancy, and especially Pam given her canonical nervousness about children. I'm glad you chose to explore her reaction a little more deeply.
1 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2018 06:34 pm Title: "It's Too Soon"
I've read this before, more than once, yet I'm still here with tears streaming down my face! That is so clearly the sign of an amazing storyteller. To bring out that type of emotion, when one knows basically what's going to happen, and with fictional characters... you are just really awesome at telling this. I find that there are some fics out there in the medical genere, that really have far too much medical jargon in them. I bow to an author for really wanting to keep it accurate but it gets cold. Also when you read too many terms you are unfamiliar with your eyes kinda glaze a bit and I know I'll find myself starting to skim which leads to me missing important or cute moments I wouldn't have wanted to miss. On top of that to tell a very real story, keeping it relatable yet keeping the heart in the story, well, let's just say I'm ashamed I didn't review this years ago when I first read it. I don't know if you said somewhere in here that this is based on an experience of your own or if it's just something I've taken for granted but assumuing I'm right about this then I really want to applaud you. The thing is, there are some really great writers, ones that are well loved that put too much of themselves into the stories. For example, they start giving Jim or Pam so many of their own or their spouse's qualities that pretty soon they've kinda lost me because that person has pretty much become someone else. Or if it's a younger person for instance and they are writing about Jim and Pam's kids, often Jim and Pam as parent's stop being the people from the show and instead are just stand ins for that writer's parents I don't know if I'm making any sense. I just know that through the nearly decade I've been on these boards those stories that authors put too much of themselves into have really kinda lost favor with me. I think maybe my idea of who Jim and Pam are is now so strong from rewatches etc that I know when it just seems off. SO... sorry I got caught up in too much explaination (not that you'll read this anyhow as this story is quite old) I just wanted to say that I really admire how you really did a balancing act of experience/medical knowledge/general Jim/Pam. I'm going to reread your other stuff next. I remember a couple fondly, one where Jim and or Pam write letters to the kids and another where the kids kinda mirror the DM staff a bit too much. I've decided I want to try harder to review fics I'm rereading as I know that I often will read reviews first, especially if I'm on the fence about a story. This one honestly is just far too good to pass up. I'm so grateful that you shared your talent with us.
10 [Report This]Date: September 08, 2011 10:46 pm Title: "It's Too Soon"
I know pam's going to make it; she's got Carol and Abby working on her. Sigh, but no George Clooney...
Author's Response: haha this comment made my day
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2010 09:32 pm Title: We Just Can't Escape The Madness
oh my gosh, this happened at work????? where do you work? this is awesome. Kevin *grins stupidly* lol. I really do love your sense of humor. Keep going, and yeah, this is from 1066, but who cares!
P.S. I just love how Nan Reg's bday prompted all of these old and new authors to show their faces and come out to join the party. And then everyone else started posting again! I think it's really May... I can't wait to read every one's fic's this summer!
Author's Response: i work at babies r us. some 10-year-old boys were giggling at all the breastfeeding stuff. they were saying, "look, this says breast too!"
9 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2010 09:30 pm Title: We Just Can't Escape The Madness
lol. so sweet. sorry i forgot about this one, i've always loved it from the start! i just love your sense of humor throughout all of this, flonkerton champ!
10 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2010 09:55 pm Title: We Just Can't Escape The Madness
LMAO nipples, oh J.D :)
Date: February 21, 2010 11:29 pm Title: The Name Game
u have used those name before right, they ring a bell.
im guessing u'r the same flonkertonchamp who leaves comments at officetally, if not, someone is usurping u.xd
Author's Response: yes, same flonkertonchamp from OT... and yes i've used the names before, they're in my other fics
Date: February 21, 2010 02:36 pm Title: The Name Game
Awwww, cute! Sucks for Mollie, though.
You really like writing these baby, children fics, doncha?
Author's Response: yes. yes i do.
10 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2010 02:19 am Title: The Name Game
That is too freaking cute for words. I
Date: February 19, 2010 11:51 pm Title: Labor Of Love
ohh i can totally imagine this on march 4th ..well without jd.
10 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2010 08:56 pm Title: The Name Game
Aww, that was so sweet! 'No fair, I just have a plain name!' - adorable. I'm adding this to my favorites just because of it's adorable-ness. So there.
P.S. There are SEVEN promos now??? I thought there were only 6 so far. I'm going to go check now!!!
Date: February 19, 2010 08:49 pm Title: The Name Game
Oh, I feel Mollie's pain. I also have a "plain old already short" name and I always wished for a name with options.
Very cute!
Author's Response: i also wish my name had more options... i could go by "tori" or "vicky", but i hate the name vicky, and i went by tori when i was little, so it makes me feel like a little kid. like how pam feels when someone calls her "pammy".
10 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2010 09:20 am Title: Labor Of Love
SO cuteeeeeeee!!!
Date: February 18, 2010 09:46 pm Title: Labor Of Love
Aww, this is so cute! Have I read this chapter already, it seems so familiar? Did you have to repost it? Anyways, this was great! Nice job!
Author's Response: i had to re-post it. i tried to make some edits to it, but when i hit "preview", it deleted it :o(
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2010 06:55 pm Title: Labor Of Love
Pam looked up at Jim and smiled.
“Thank you,” she whispered.
“For what?”
She looked down at Mollie, and then back up to Jim.
“Everything.” Just the perfect line right there, everything really does sum it up.
I loved the peek into how Mollie made her way into the world, and I love how much they adore their kids, how great Jim's mom is in this, and just everything about it. Very well done, great addition to "It's too soon" which is one of my favorite stories.
Date: January 31, 2010 11:50 pm Title: We Just Can't Escape The Madness
These are very funny (and scary) scenarios. The idea of Jim and Pam's children channeling their co-workers....*shudder* But I guess that's karma for all the pranks Jim and Pam used to pull on their officemates.
8 [Report This]Date: January 12, 2010 09:18 pm Title: In His Hands
Short and sweet! Very cute!
Date: January 07, 2010 12:16 am Title: We Just Can't Escape The Madness
haha. Fact: This one is my favorite so far!
Poor, poor Jim and Pam...they just can NOT get away from those people!
10 [Report This]Date: January 06, 2010 10:32 pm Title: We Just Can't Escape The Madness
gotta agree with you on your little end note there - i'm so excited! if only he was directing the birth episode, that would be awesome. anyway, i love jim's reaction in this one, 'soooooooooooooooo cute!!!'
Date: January 06, 2010 09:11 am Title: We Just Can't Escape The Madness
Hahaha... You're so funny! That was great! =)
Date: December 21, 2009 11:36 pm Title: Labor Of Love
oww =( dont even remind me of the "producers cut" i havent been able to watch i cuz' im outside the us and nbc.com and hulu dont allow me to watch it..im sooo angry...
...anyway i like the story xD
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2009 01:45 pm Title: In His Hands
That is SO cute!!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: December 21, 2009 01:41 pm Title: Labor Of Love
I LOVE the name Mollie. I hope you continue this. I want to get to know Mollie, and see how J.D copes being a big brother, and how Jim and Pam cope with a little girl. Love it :)
Author's Response: i sort of did, with my story "we just can't escape the madness"