I was angry at Jim, but I also am angry at Pam (on the show, cause yeah, she caused some of it herself) and then Pam said it. And I was like, whoa. And so yeah.

Hopefully Karen really didn't lokc her out. 

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I can't wait to see what happens in this talk.  I also love the idea of Karen and Pam at war.....as long as Pam wins.

AAAH!  Love that you included Karen ripping down Pam's flyer!  

And this: Honestly Pam, do you always give up so easily?   Such a great metaphor for Pam.

I was angry at Karen for that deleted scene. I am guessing you saw the deleted scene, or you are in sync with the writers.
Anyways, it is going good. Go Pam, keep up that courage.

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"She wanted her treasure back." - beautiful line.  I loved this peek into Pam's thoughts. You really captured her myriad of feelings - anger, frustration, sadness and then hope and determination at the end.  Can't wait to read the next chapter.

wonderful exploration of pam's character. i look forward to more.

this is an awsome start. someone else mentioned the deleted scene...yea, you should check it out. but i would definitely keep reading!!!

And sometimes, one man's motel art....is another man's treasure.

That was such a great line! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

loooove it! hey have you seen the deleted scene yet? i suggest watching it, there is a great deal of inspiration i think you will find

if you continue, ill read 

damn, my heart was breaking for pam during this episode, and this writing just made it break even more. i felt sosorry for her. i was so excited like, oh wow and art show that is going to be awesome, but it was anything but.

write more :) 

Ooh very nice, and enticing!!!  Anxiously awaiting the next chapter(s) :)

I love Pam's POV on her art show. I'm glad she's starting to realize if she wants something in life, she has to go for it. I can't wait to see where you're going with this! Please continue!