1 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2019 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masterpiece
I love that last line, and I love that your Pam gets her shit together enough to get the words out before that. You go Pam!
1 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2019 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1: Artforms
I mean, this is well after you did it (and you did go on) but I do feel compelled to say yes, I do like, and I'm so glad you chose to explore it further.
9 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2011 12:25 am Title: Chapter 5: Masterpiece
This story was so terrific. I loved how pissed Jim was at Karen for tearing down the art show flyer. And ,y favorite line of all was: “Nothing is stopping you if I’m what you really want. There’s no Roy, no Karen if you chose, and no obstacles. I’m here.” You can't be anymore plain spoken than that. And it worked.
10 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2007 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masterpiece
Don't make it the end! I want more, more, more, more! Let's continue with what happens when Pam comes home from her art class. Please!
Date: February 22, 2007 07:54 am Title: Chapter 5: Masterpiece
Loved it! You have their banter down perfectly.
Date: February 22, 2007 06:47 am Title: Chapter 5: Masterpiece
Yeah, I'm going to need that smutty epilogue... like when she gets home from art class and finds him sitting on her steps or in front of her door!
10 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2007 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masterpiece
Tooo toooo gooooddd blahhh! I love how the relationship came out . Ii was just perfect!
10 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2007 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masterpiece
Oh...you are soooooooo not done!!
8 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2007 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masterpiece
"They would always be two people circling the brink of something that they could never grasp." - What a great line. I was afraid this might happen when Jim seemed so conflicted and torn. But yay for your happy ending.
Date: February 21, 2007 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masterpiece
Very sweet, I really liked it. I could feel the passion, well done.
10 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2007 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masterpiece
Ooo!! I really, want an epilouge. This was so good. Amazing. Perfect 10 hands down
Date: February 21, 2007 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masterpiece
i loved it. so loved it. damn the writers not giving us this in real (tv) life. damn them. but thank you for at leastgiving it to me so i can act like this is what really happened until tomorrow night when i ave to face the (fictional) reality that they aren't together (yet)
Date: February 21, 2007 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 5: Masterpiece
OOOOH, what a great ending -- you managed to redeem the PLoD from it's former shame! Great job. Thanks for the story!
Author's Response:
LOL! Thanks. That parking lot was evil but it turned out to be a blessing in the end!
Date: February 21, 2007 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 4: Lines
Aw jeez, you are killing me with the cliffhangers! Love this part: She had something real and something fantasy. So his declaration drew a line. It was no longer unspoken. It was real.
10 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2007 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 4: Lines
OHMYYGODD!!! Pleaaaaaase get it up NOOWW!!! GREAT!!! =)
Author's Response:
I'm working on it! LOL. BTW...I really like your story as well! (See I did read it), I'll leave a review for you!
Date: February 21, 2007 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 4: Lines
okay, so my first thought reading the first sentence was well yes, breast milk is holocrine secretion and that means the whole cell and then this is what the gland looks like.... and then i had to bang my head against my desk because i realized what a nerd i am for knowing that. but in my defense it was in my biology class. i can also tell you way to much about all the glands and secretions in the body. and about how all the tissues in the body are organized. but even I don't realy find it interesting, it is just taking up space in my head.
okay, now you need to write the last chapter fast because i can't wait very long because i am just like, i want to knowwhat happens. i promise i won'tbore youanymore with my useless knowledge of biology (well, hopefully its useful to me since it is my major)
Author's Response:
Oddly enough... this truly happened to one of my co workers. =-( It was so weird she didn't even want to file for sexual harrassment.
The last chapter is being reviewed. I'm fickle and like to change things around alot...lol.
Date: February 20, 2007 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 3: Colors
Oooh
I love this. The idea that Karen tore down the flyer...I could totally see that. And the convo between Jim and Pam on the roof felt really in character for me, for how things are in canon at the moment.
Yay for strong(er) Pam! Let the staredowns continue!
Author's Response: Karen has intense eyes. But Pam has stamina! =-D
Date: February 20, 2007 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 3: Colors
uhhhhhh. all the air just sort of left me. my coworker got kinda worried when i forgot to inhale again. yeesh. seriously need to know what happens next. i may literally die of curiosity. :0)
Author's Response:
Don't do that! LOL.
I'll get it up as quickly as I can.
Date: February 19, 2007 09:10 am Title: Chapter 3: Colors
Go ON - go ON!!!! Please :)
8 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2007 08:16 am Title: Chapter 3: Colors
lol more please!!!N rating = 8
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2007 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 3: Colors
I cannot wait to see what Jim does next! I absolutely LOVE Pam and Karen fighting, and i also love that Pam is winning! Great chapter!
Date: February 18, 2007 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 3: Colors
oh ho, this is so good. can't wait to see what is next.
seriously.
can't wait.
update, like, now!
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2007 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1: Artforms
I'm loving this so far! I would really like to see something like this happen on the show. I'm hoping that Oscar's comment will propel Pam to re-evaluate her life. Please give us some more!
Date: February 18, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 3: Colors
Oh Gosh, hurry up and post the next chapter. This was very good.
Date: February 18, 2007 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 3: Colors
Yay for Fancy New Beesly! She needs to take a stand like this and just not let Karen stand in her way! I love this, more please!