9 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2007 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
Loved the ending! So sensual and hot. I'd love to see you continue this - to see what happens in the office the next day.
Date: February 19, 2007 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
Very beautiful.
Date: February 18, 2007 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm thankful that your muse struck twice, but...would it be greedy to ask for another? There are just so many places to explore with this, and I want to see them all!
I love that Pam decided to stay, and doesn't go the morally-correct route. Sure, we'd all love to take the high road, but how many of us actually do? As the show has made painfully clear this season, Pam is only human. Lovely story.
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2007 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yay Pam! This is a great story! Please continue so we can see what happens when they go into work and have to break the news to Roy and Karen.
Date: February 18, 2007 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
ok, well, now we know that a third chapter is in order. oh mox....i loved it. and yes, you did get them just right. you did them justice and made them say all the things they ought to...now, if we can just get them to do that on the show dammit. there is so much i liked here...
1. the feeling i got when i read the part where jim just asks her to be there waiting for him after they have to talk to karen and roy. i'vbe been in this position and it is this weird mix of dread and excitement. i think you cpatured that really well. or at least, invoked it well.
2.pam deciding she couldn't just leave. oh yeah. oh YEAH! you go girl.
3. just their banter and they way it already feels initimate between them even tho this is their first time. i just love that. i had this with my husband actually because we were such good friends before we got together and it is just an amazing feeling. so, nice job on capturing that too
you knew i'd love it. and you were right.
8 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2007 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love any story that finally brings JIm & Pam together in a realistic way (like this). Wonderful job.
Date: February 18, 2007 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
Thanks so much for Ch. 2, Moxie. How sweet and hot and romantic...That's how it be for them, I'm sure.
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2007 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
This story is too good to be true ! The details made it even more awesome, you are a great writerr! JAM . Blahhh they are too cutee. = ) I'm rating you a 10 .
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2007 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, so good. I love this. So deliciously slow and tender, as I imagine they woud be together. Good job.
Date: February 18, 2007 11:20 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh my is it hot in here or is it just me? I loved every minute and I'm glad you decided to write another chapter. I love the way you made them talk to each other during sex, it seemed very Pam and Jim
Date: February 18, 2007 09:57 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh moxie, this was like finding a little bonus prize - an oasis of Jammy hotness in the midst of all the show-related angst. I'll bet she had no idea what he was worried about...but how sweet that he was. Thanks for this!
Author's Response: oh, I'm so happy you liked it!! I just couldn't get the images out of my head - now if only it were true!
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2007 06:13 am Title: Chapter 2
Out of the park, Moxie! This is a beautiful thing. I agree with the consensus that you should be writing for the show for the sake of our wee hearts!
Date: February 17, 2007 11:47 am Title: Chapter 1
I think I'm going to have to pretend that this really happened. More please.
9 [Report This]Date: February 17, 2007 06:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Yes, this would be a perfect end for the Jam-disaster that was Business School. I loved the way you wrote Roy out of there (and the observation that he was kind of rubbing his "change" in her face). And the long-awaited "fight" between Jim and Pam was well-written and to the point.
Date: February 16, 2007 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Why do I always feel so good after Pam and Jim yell at each other? Thank you for clearing the air. I like that they're both to blame, and that you have them admitting the ways that they screwed up. Good work!
Date: February 16, 2007 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think you are bringing a lot of people out of the gutter with this one, and by gutter I mean the deep dark hole of despair where we all choose to sulk after this last episode.
Great job!
Date: February 16, 2007 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Moxie,
I was bouncing in my seat reading this. I want to fly you to VanNuys (sp?) immediately, and have you present this to the writers for the season finale. We will brook no resistance...THIS is how Season 3 must end!
Date: February 16, 2007 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this! This is exactly what I needed to read after last night's ep :)
Author's Response: oh thanks, hon!! Glad it helped!
Date: February 16, 2007 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for this lovely story, and for taking me out of the funk I've been in since 9:01 last night!
10 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2007 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this so much I would marry it if I could. This was very realistic and what we need to see, and soon!
10 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2007 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
*bows down to moxie* I am not worthy! i am not worthy... to write fanfic on the same topic as you! when i read you were writing fic about last night's episode, i was like, "yep, she's gonna blow mine right out the water"... and you did! loved it, from begining to end. you are the queen of fanfic.
Author's Response: Oh hush, you! I loved your story!!!
7 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2007 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
You got to run away and start fresh, and I had to stay here and pick up the broken pieces.
Well that's an angle I had not considered before. Good point.
I was afraid to be alone.
Simple, sincere, honest. Good self-insight from Jim. A more mature Jim than season 2. Wish we could see that onscreen.
Thanks, Moxie. Balm for a wounded heart.
Date: February 16, 2007 10:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Yup, that works for me! Now tell me again why they can't just give us a dang break and have this happen on the show? Don't they realize I am out of pain meds and they are just being MEAN!?!
I really like this angle: after tonight, she knew she has absolutely nothing to lose anymore. That actually makes me hopeful that this Pam/Roy reconciliation is going to be short-lived and actually kick Pam in the butt.
Now to go and make a sacrifice on my altar to the TO writers and hope they look on it with favor....
Date: February 16, 2007 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1
She decide to start where it hurt the most.
“Did you even think of coming tonight?"
This was spot on. You could see it written all over her face and you captured it perfectly. Once again, fabulous job.
Date: February 16, 2007 09:32 am Title: Chapter 1
can we stage a coup so you can go write for the show. because i just can't handle any more of the drama between the two!
Author's Response: I hear you! I just don't see how it's needed any longer!