9 [Report This]Date: April 02, 2010 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Romantic and passionate and what should have happened if this relationship hadn't been so excrutiatingly slow.
Date: February 25, 2007 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this was lovely. I love the style of it - how it's quite dreamlike, so like Pam, we're not quite sure it was real when she wakes up.
Date: February 23, 2007 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Sexy and adorable!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: February 22, 2007 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really beautiful work. The emotions and images are all right there. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2007 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
SOOOO sweet! beautifully written, heartbreaking, sweet, funny, everything! great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Date: February 22, 2007 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
This has that perfect Jim/Pam ache about it - full of emotion and erotic without being overly explicit. I love that her art work of him is bold and showing it to him becomes a metaphor for finally expressing what she feels. Also, him saying he had to pee - the humor of that balancing the intensity...also very Jim/Pam. Really, really lovely.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much!
"Jim/Pam ache"- I love it!
9 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2007 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gorgeous - just gorgeous. This may sound odd, but reading this was like looking at a painting - does that make sense? You really create some beautiful images here, particularly in the middle. (And no, I am not just talking about Jim with no shirt.:oP)
Really wonderful --
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! Saying that reading it was like looking at a painting is such a huge compliment, because that's what I was trying to accomplish with this!
10 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2007 11:11 am Title: Chapter 1
That was really, really good - I wish I was as skilled at leaving more to the imagination like this is.
Great job!
Author's Response: Thank so much!
Date: February 22, 2007 11:06 am Title: Chapter 1
ahh! I love it. You totally had me going when Pam woke up and he wasn't here, I gasped and was like no!! But you made up for it ;) lovely
It reminded me a little bit of my story "Do i have to fall asleep with roses in my hand?" Lovely job!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!