1 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2019 07:52 pm Title: Warning
I like the detail that Karen noticed, both because she noticed and because you had Jim do it. Well told story.
Date: February 26, 2017 11:13 pm Title: Warning
WOW! That ending, with Jim and Karen, totally made my heart drop. Such a beautifully simple way of showing Jim's true emotions peeking through!
10 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2009 01:15 pm Title: Warning
Wow, you are really good at this stuff! I'm officially in love with your brain and the fact that your mind writes the stuff I want to read without me even begging.
Great job, and this was perfect!
Date: October 29, 2007 10:33 pm Title: Warning
Really loved this..it says not completed..works great as a one shot but I do so hope for more!
10 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2007 06:24 pm Title: Warning
Oh, would he just tell her to shut the frack up? (Karen, I mean!) Tell me he drops Karen off and shows up at Pam's door - because that's what I'm going to believe....
Great phone conversation!!
10 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2007 05:05 pm Title: Warning
AHH!! maybe it's karen jim should be worried about!! great read!
Date: February 26, 2007 03:37 pm Title: Warning
I loved the closeness beetween Jim and Pam in that conversation. It really stands out in your story, in fact way more than in other pst-Coctail fics, intelligent and insightful as some of them are. Thanks actually, I really needed to see that connection and familiarity between them again.
Date: February 26, 2007 01:31 pm Title: Warning
awwwwww. cute!!! i hate stupid karen. she ruins everything. i loved when jim got really concered about roy possibly hurting her. this was truly adorable. good work!
10 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2007 01:21 pm Title: Warning
This is soooo true in tone to the show and the charaters. I love it, but even more than that I'm envious of it because you inhabit them so well. Gorgeous.
Date: February 24, 2007 09:24 pm Title: Warning
I could just see it playing out this way on the show with Karen getting more and more p.o.'d as she listened. I do hope you'll continue, you are off to a great start!
Date: February 24, 2007 08:21 pm Title: Warning
I was really hoping we'd get to see the aftermath of the evening through fanfic. That was great. I can't wait to read what follows between Jim and Karen.
Date: February 24, 2007 01:24 pm Title: Warning
Loved the conversation. Want more of it and maybe a Karen breakup too?
Date: February 24, 2007 09:18 am Title: Warning
I kind of want Karen to ask more about what he was talking about. I know I kept paying attention to Jim's part of the conversation, trying to imagine how Karen would be piecing it together. I think you should add a little more here --- wouldn't she want to know about Roy? What does she know about Pam & Roy and how Jim relates to it? Why should Jim be scared of Roy? What was it all about?
And Pam ---- calling Jim in the CAR while he's with Karen. WOW. Go FNB. ;)
Author's Response: Hi GreenFish! Yeah, the whole Jim/Karen conversation is in part two that I'm working on right now. I certainly didn't mean to indicate that that was the end of their conversation--Karen is the last person to think "it's none of my business" and I think Jim's side of the conversation would drive her nuts! Thanks for the review!
8 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2007 08:09 am Title: Warning
I very much like this...the sigh at the end just made the whole thing perfect.
Date: February 23, 2007 09:30 pm Title: Warning
Really nice. I love how the end foreshadows a number of late nights talking with Karen...
Date: February 23, 2007 03:58 pm Title: Warning
Very nice work! I can definitely see it all happening this way. I hope you continue!
Date: February 23, 2007 02:32 pm Title: Warning
Ya these are the things that keep circling my head...god, we have to wait 6 weeks for a new episode i hear....
9 [Report This]Date: February 23, 2007 01:32 pm Title: Warning
Yippee! Thank you for this! I can totally see this having happened in just this way. Very realistic, and very squee-worthy. I want a chapter 2!
10 [Report This]Date: February 23, 2007 12:21 pm Title: Warning
This is EXACTLY the story I've been hoping to read ever since I saw the episode last night. Thank you so much for writing it! Seriously--it was perfect. Pam's embarassment, Jim's curiousity, both of their reactions, the conversation about Michael and Dwight, Karen getting mad because Jim called her Beesley--all of it was spot on. If you continued it I would be ever so grateful--I'm dying to know what happens next! Please continue! :) Thanks so much for writing!
Date: February 23, 2007 11:54 am Title: Warning
Love this: "He knew he was getting sucked back in, but at the moment he really, really didn’t care." I think that really captures what Jim has been doing this season.
YAY! Cannot WAIT to see how/if Pam warns Jim and/or tells him about her conversation with Roy. Especially the "I had feelings for him too" part.
Date: February 23, 2007 11:38 am Title: Warning
That was perfect. I'm just going to imagine this actually happened, while we're stuck waiting for six long weeks.
9 [Report This]Date: February 23, 2007 11:25 am Title: Warning
I adored this. Great job on their voices and emotions.
Date: February 23, 2007 11:19 am Title: Warning
At the risk of sounding like Kelly, omigod, this was soooooooooooooooo good!
Very, very realistic, and I love the end between Jim and Karen. LOVE it.
Date: February 23, 2007 11:18 am Title: Warning
This is great Carrie! When I saw that you posted something I had to READ it! Well done. I have been thinking about what happens to Jim alot and this is a really good way to start off with. Great job!
Date: February 23, 2007 11:06 am Title: Warning
I like it. So, glad you shared. I am so totally worried for Jim... seriously, Roy scares me