1 [Report This]Date: December 22, 2020 11:34 pm Title: Nothing, nothing without a woman
This is a lovely combination of sexy and sweet. It really captures exactly what insecurities Night Out would trigger for Jim, and lets Pam's love for him just shine through so powerfully.
1 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2018 05:01 am Title: Nothing, nothing without a woman
Oh, this was beautiful! You perfectly captured Jim’s self-doubt. Excellent work!
1 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2018 09:59 pm Title: The walls start shaking, the earth was quaking
Excellent addition to one of my favorite episodes! So hot!!
1 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2018 09:35 pm Title: Make 'em go "oh! oh! oh!"
Whew! That was a good one! It almost (just almost) makes me want to go for a run! Very nice.
1 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2018 03:49 pm Title: Nothing, nothing without a woman
"He feels warm and caramel colored."
Damn, I can FEEL that!
Beautiful story!
Date: May 30, 2017 07:38 pm Title: Lushes, lookin' luscious
This is so well written! Thank you :)
7 [Report This]Date: March 18, 2016 07:49 pm Title: Nothing, nothing without a woman
This was very good. It's nice to see Pam comfort Jim for a change.
"Who makes people work late and then forgets to tell the security guard so we’re not locked out?" - Who sees a parking lot full of cars and thinks it's okay to lock the gate without calling up to see if people are going to want to leave work later?
9 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2016 01:45 am Title: Why wait any longer for the world to begin
Somehow, this was just adorable.
9 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2011 08:28 am Title: Why wait any longer for the world to begin
Terrific! I'm going to have to read the whole series now! :)
I loved how you were able to work in both their POV's, and how similar they were. And that he hasn't called her "girlfriend" to her face yet. And that the sex was spontaneous. (Though I fought with myself not to worry about the spilled paint!) Great story!
Date: March 04, 2011 11:11 am Title: Nothing, nothing without a woman
That has GOT to be one of the most beautiful closing sentences of all time! No time for a long review. Heading up to the hospital in Jersey ... Still love this, though!
10 [Report This]Date: March 03, 2011 07:30 pm Title: Nothing, nothing without a woman
Pammaking it better = awesome. Jim needs looking after every now and then :)
9 [Report This]Date: March 03, 2011 07:44 am Title: The walls start shaking, the earth was quaking
what a naughty little treat, andtheivy. :) i absolutely loved "you dirty little monster!" great story.
10 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2011 01:02 am Title: When she wakes me, she takes me back home
The fact that you can write something this awesome without dialouge just shows how freaking amazing you are as a writer. I loved it.
10 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2011 01:00 am Title: The walls start shaking, the earth was quaking
Eeeeeeeee, I love it when Pam gets dirty :)
Date: March 01, 2011 07:02 pm Title: When she wakes me, she takes me back home
Such a contrast in your writing. Each piece is just perfectly written. Thank you.
Date: March 01, 2011 07:01 pm Title: The walls start shaking, the earth was quaking
WOW, I had to take awhile to recover from this one. I loved that Pam has an aggresive side.
10 [Report This]Date: March 01, 2011 04:30 pm Title: The walls start shaking, the earth was quaking
Loved that there is a tigress living within Little Miss Cardigan. Really I think I just love the "Little Miss Cardigan" name.
Date: March 01, 2011 10:42 am Title: When she wakes me, she takes me back home
Well, that certainly hit the spot on my lunch hour at work. Nice...very nice!
9 [Report This]Date: March 01, 2011 05:48 am Title: When she wakes me, she takes me back home
So romantic <3
9 [Report This]Date: March 01, 2011 05:38 am Title: The walls start shaking, the earth was quaking
Hot lovin' at the beet farm! Just what this Tuesday morning needs :D
Date: February 26, 2011 02:41 pm Title: Make 'em go "oh! oh! oh!"
Makes me want to go running! Nice back story to the shower comment from the episode.
The Chateau Marmont and Pam's irritation at the beginning had me chuckling. The rest was just ... Hot! Hot! Hot! ... said to the rhythm of the Oh! Oh! Oh! of the song ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: February 23, 2011 06:26 pm Title: Make 'em go "oh! oh! oh!"
I just love this story so much. :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 23, 2011 08:16 am Title: Why wait any longer for the world to begin
Such a pleasure to read this again and add it to my favorites :)
8 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2011 12:06 pm Title: Why wait any longer for the world to begin
Formatting huh? Didn't notice any issues.
Loved how you made the first so spontaneous and playful and yet still intense.
Date: February 22, 2011 10:39 am Title: Lushes, lookin' luscious
Lots of fun revisiting this one :) Since I know you appreciate honesty, one thing that takes me out of the story a little (although it's at the beginning, so I got right back in) is the amount of alcohol they consumed. Seems a bit excessive. Maybe that's just me, though.
He sucks on the spot just below her ear, the spot he knows is her weakness, and she is gone. He follows her and they press their mouths against each other’s shoulders, leaving damp circles on cotton shirts, to stifle the sounds of their groans. Hot the first time I read it and still hot now.