10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2007 10:31 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
Mox, sweetie, I do hope that you're doing well. :D I just can't wait to see so more Squirrel. BTW, did you notice Leslie's tie at the Upfronts? Quite similiar to McPants' tie, eh? :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 11, 2007 06:53 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
I'm loving this SO much. I'm sorry it's over! My heart stopped beating, practically when Pam was like "your REAL name". Great work. :)
Date: May 11, 2007 04:22 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
Waiting is not my strong point. But I shall untill the all might Squirel returns... Is he back yet? How about now? Now?........ I think I need to consult Dr. McPants about this obsession of mine.
Date: May 08, 2007 06:09 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
I'm starting to get a little jittery waiting for my Squirrel fix. This sucks, I'm like a junkie or something. :)
Date: May 07, 2007 09:32 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
I was up all night reading this.
One of the Best out there
10 [Report This]Date: May 07, 2007 08:24 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
Please tell me there's a real forum like this.
This is my favorite story on here. Not even joking.
10 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2007 09:40 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
Yes, I have to have a Colin Firth as Mr. Darcy fix every once in a while too. But, I will have to choose Jim Halpert over Fitzwilliam Darcy. Excellent chapter! I really loved the banter between Jim and Pam. You're building some great tension.
Date: May 03, 2007 05:02 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
"Karen's here," Pam said when she came back to their table.
"Damn," Jim joked, "I guess this means you'll have to share the guacamole."
"That's fine," Pam replied. "At least I won't have to share anything else after today."
Touche, Ms. Beesly!
Loved the accounting boys betting on JAREN, ha! Angela, of course, wouldn't miss a trick. And Phyllis is happy too, awww...
Of course, I love Sexy!Confident!Pam...I think Jim will be happily surprised by events to come.
Ok, it's 8pm here, 40 minutes until Women's Appreciation. Time to take a break and prepare myself, i.e. put laundry away, get another beer, etc.
If you end up short on reviews, I'll be glad to write up on the chapters I missed (reviewing, not reading)
Date: May 02, 2007 10:19 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
Who does Pam think she's fooling? There's no way she's not going to dinner with him! I think at this point the punishments are more for the fun of it than real anger :)
Author's Response:
I think at this point the punishments are more for the fun of it than real anger :)
You are very, very wise. ;-)
Date: May 02, 2007 12:15 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
I love this story more than anything in the entire world. I kid you not. I can't believe there's only going to be one more chapter...that sucks!
Author's Response: Fear Not. There will be a Squirrel sequel. :-)
Date: May 02, 2007 10:48 am Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
What a way to go indeed! Can't wait for the final reveal to the chat friends. I love Teasing!Pam! She's awesome. And of course the entire office was rooting for them. Nice details in each of their reveals to Jim.
10 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2007 09:40 am Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
oh, i loved it, of course... but i'm so sad to see it's ending! can't we just make it go on and on forever? please? i had to hold back the tears when i reached the end!
and that's right, fondle is so much better than grope. ^_^
Date: May 02, 2007 12:25 am Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
Wow. Perfection. I think this may be my favoite chapter (okay, I love them all) because of how perfectly you've written all of the characters.
The conversation between Oscar and Kevin, and how Jim is only slightly paying attention, and then responds... it is just so perfectly them. So funny. And you really captured the relationship between Oscar and Kev that we keep getting more glimpses of on the show.
And Angela!? Loved her here. You made her be concise with her words, biting and observant. Perfectly Angela.
And how could Jim and Pam banter be any more perfect? With all the sex talk, so playful, and confident, but still new and timid at the same time. Amazing.
So much of this chapter could be taken right from an episode. But at the same time, Moxie, your mark is all over it.
You've really created a great story here.
Date: May 01, 2007 10:28 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
Sooo, I felt sorta bad reviewing this story, because I thought, Yikes! Moxie is going to have a lot of reviews to reply to! But now that I know a tattoo is on the line, well, here I am, telling you that you've written another awesome chapter! I loved how no one was surprised by Jim and Pam getting together.
Date: May 01, 2007 09:49 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
Loved this for so many reasons, but I wanted to take a moment to point out how AWESOME your dialogue between Jim/Oscar/Kevin was! Man, just SO right on and I can soooo see them betting on something like how long Jim/Karen would last. It totally read like canon. I can't wait to see what happens on Jim and Pam's date!
Date: May 01, 2007 08:00 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
Colin Firth's Mr. Darcy is the one fictional man I would actually chose above Jim Halpert. Hands down, no contest. I totally see Pam's dilemma!
Date: May 01, 2007 07:18 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
omg - and an appearance by colin firth's darcy??? you're killing me! i love it. hahahaha!
Date: May 01, 2007 07:15 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
Hey time4moxie. I know you have many admirers, but I'm just going to add myself to the pile. I have loved every minute of this story, and this chapter was no exception! I love that you kept the online aspect going in this chapter with IMs...once Squirrel's true identity was revealed, I got afraid that the story was going to end. I'm glad you're keeping it going! You write great JAM banter.
Date: May 01, 2007 07:07 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
One of my favourite chapters! The interaction between Jim and Phyllis was a highlight for me. Still not sure how this 12 labors are going to go over, but I'm patient, and you've proven yourself more than capable 17x over so far. Great stuff! Keep it up!
Date: May 01, 2007 06:53 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
As a dork fondler from way back, I applaud Pam's actions. Good show, Pam! However, talking to Jim about her period? Eep! I seriously said to myself, "Oh no, she did NOT just do that." Oh well. I guess every couple has to have the BC discussion at some point, so why not just get it out of the way in the break room?
This was fab:
"I guess this means you'll have to share the guacamole."
"That's fine," Pam replied. "At least I won't have to share anything else after today."
Nice one, Pam!
I really enjoyed their banter in this chapter. I loved Oscar and Kevin betting on Jim & Karen's relationship, and I further loved Phyllis giving Jim the "way to go" speech. So sweet.
Date: May 01, 2007 06:45 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
I just wanted that party to be over so we could get back to Jim and Pam being alone together. If only the real office followed your lead.
9 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2007 06:13 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
Ooh - I think I have a cavity from the Jammy goodness of it all! This was a great chapter. I just love playful Jim and Pam!
Date: May 01, 2007 05:01 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
Absolutely wonderful. I love how adorable they are now that they are quasi together. (And loved the Harry Potter reference) Who knew Pam could be so bold about sex with Jim? Haha...I love Jim's reactions to her in those moment. Do we get to see Jim confessing in the chat room next chapter??? (Please say yes).
Date: May 01, 2007 04:34 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
Moxie, I absolutely love the mention of P&P. I am 100% in love with the book, the movie (despite it being so long), and of course Colin Firth as Mr. Darcy, and I can totally agree with Pam about spending a night enjoying the sexiness that is Darcy.
Date: May 01, 2007 04:33 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse
Love the ending of this chapter... Mox you are awesome at "cliffhangers" :)
Here's to working towards 10,000 reviews!