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Reviewer: StarShine Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 08:48 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

I. LOVE. and you're stressing me out. does pam know? if she doesn't, why is she flirting with mc[pants!!!! gah.. this girl is frustrating me!!!

and that pic? yeah, it's being saved...

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 08:40 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Oh, gosh, I don't much like Jim's idea about not telling her the truth and just letting Squirrel disappear. I'm if she doesn't know already, she'll be pissed when he tells her, but that's gotta be better than her finding out some other way...

And, whoo, Pam, getting flirty! How's he going to handle this picture thing, I wonder?

Cutest squirrel photo ever!!! 

Reviewer: sharky Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 07:56 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Send her the yearbook picture!

Oh, I love this! But they have to get together already. Mox, you're holding out on us like Greg Daniels or something. ;) 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 07:39 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Oh. My. God.  First of all, happy dance for the new chapter!!  And poor Jim cannot do anything right.  Tries to be nice to Karen and Pam and both of them wish he could have done so earlier.  Can't say I blame either of them, though.

And bold Pam, making a move on Squirrel/Matthew! Hmm, what photo should Jim send?  Maybe he should just put his cards on the table and send this one: http://johnkrasinski.fan-sites.org/coppermine/displayimage.php?album=53&pos=10

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 07:28 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Oh Jim.  What have you gotten yourself into???? 

How insane is it that I'm nervous for him?  Another person's fictional version of a fictional character???  LOL!

Anyway...loving it as usual.  Get these two crazy kids together soon will you?  They're killing me.

PS - the book Dooflegna refers to that I used in Fates is an actual book.  Sold on Amazon.  If you want Dwight to mention it to Jim to freak him out you have my blessing. 

Then again - I don't care what you do as long as you keep writing. :)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 07:13 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

This is excellent; another great chapter!!!

If I were Jim, I would have showed up at Pam's house to watch Wedding Singer, and confessed ALL, including "I was only dating Karen because I thought you only wanted friendship and it was killing me."  But... where's the drama in that, right?

Does Pam know it's Jim?  Is she messing with him?  I thought the favorite color thing was a pretty big clue; it's hard to believe she doesn't suspect....?

Of course, I adore the whole Kelly subplot.  I was glad you updated us on how things are with Karen; I was wondering how that was going!

I like how you snuck in "the Roy thing".

Happily awaiting more, when you get to it.  Ummm... "I'm squirrelly for Squirrel".

Reviewer: lama Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 07:01 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Wowie wow wow!  My heart was racing right along with Jim's.  Part of me wants him to send Pam a real picture of him- GAH!  How cute are those squirrels?!  Oh, and this line:

He shook his head slightly, wondering what sort a person he was becoming if he was finding solace in a stick of colored wax.

Possibly one of my favorite lines from anything I've ever read. 

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 06:07 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Oh! Using "The Wedding Singer"? Great minds think alike, Moxie. Or maybe we're too nostalgic for 1985 or something. Anyway, please keep things moving along you evil genius, you!

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 06:05 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Jim, Jim, Jim. *sigh* This story is so well done, you've got ME guessing. Does Pam know or not know? Does Vexin know and has she told Pam? What the heck is Jim gonna do for a photo?  (I keep picturing him using the fake-photo that comes when you buy a picture frame, LOL, but I could see him using a picture of one of his cousins or something.) And is Pam pushing for one because she wants to see how far Jim will take his lie?

Oh man. This story continues to be awesome, but it's starting to make me really nervous. The tension!

And how many of us looked up the words to the Adam Sandler song? I bet that link got a ton of hits from this chapter! (I looked!) 

One small thing: I'm sure someone else has told you that your link to the Lisahoo images isn't a complete web address, so we can't link to it.

More, please! 

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 06:04 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Holy sasquatch, does Pam know what she's doing? Does Jim know what they're doing? JUST HOW MUCH OF A GENIUS IS VEXIN!?

and why do you want to agonise us so?!?

Unbelievable. I'm loving where this is going. I can't wait to see what photo he sends her, to see whether he asks Vexin anything, and, more long-term, see just how long Jim is going to stay like that before he tells her. So much longer by now, at least, I'm sure. 

Also, can I say how much I love that Pam is crushing on McPants, clearly Jim, because it shows how much she loves Jim? Oh, true love. *feels cheesy*

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 05:14 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

yay! new squirrel. i knew it was a good sign when i saw a squirrel outside my window (ignore the fact that there are more squirrels than people on my campus and there is always a squirrel outside my window).
and darnit, i just had to accept the fact i would be spoiled for the wedding singer, since i hadn't seen it. oh well. if that is what it takes :P
when i read the line about meeting up, this is the closest to what was coming out of my mouth -"gibit dit nitty blhit!" and my hands were waving. stoped waving like mad only enough to write this.
"You can't beat yourself up for what you didn't know at the time." um, yes you can. i do it all the time :)
"[God, Beesly, you are such a dork. Such a dork.]" and that is so jim
if i email squirrel.mcpants@gmail.com would i get jim!? haha. pam is really flirting with squirrel
you know what i decided. i decided you aren't allowed to have any life. you just need to sit in front of a computer, and type squirrel for us all day long. if you are nice, i may let you sleep.

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 04:47 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

It's nice to see Pam speaking honestly about her fears concerning Jim, regardless of who she is sharing them with.  Once again, an amazing chapter.  You never disappoint :)

Reviewer: thedominantmalekitty Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 04:30 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

I think I screamed out loud when I saw this posted before I left for school.  Yay!  I love flirty Pam!

Reviewer: The Library Clerk Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 02:46 am Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

I just have to say . . . I'm new to this site, and I can't get the words Squirrel McPants out of my head!  I just want to respond to every question I get with that.  

 Looking beyond that brilliance, though, your story is genuinely interesting and really well-executed.  I've always loves stories with chat-ness involved, and your story has me checking just a little too often for updates. :-)  Fantastic job! 

Reviewer: Dooflegna Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2007 10:40 pm Title: Streets that follow like a tedious argument

I was just rereading The Fates Are Laughing and I came across the title of a book that would be a perfect inclusion sometime during this story: Outwitting Squirrels: 101 Cunning Stratagems to Reduce Dramatically the Egregious Misappropriation of Seed from Your Birdfeeder by Squirrels.  So you should use that somewhere down the line.  Because that'd be awesome.

Reviewer: classybroad Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2007 06:17 pm Title: Streets that follow like a tedious argument

I literally check to see if you updated at least 20x a day... Especially when I'm procrastinating like now... Your writing is lovely and you are able to capture the characters so well! The last line really made me smile. I'm going to be devastated when you wrap this up so please never stop. ♥ Sorry for the rambling!

Reviewer: angiesmith Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 24, 2007 06:39 am Title: Streets that follow like a tedious argument

Awesome!  I normally don't read fic, but this story is just great.  It makes me want to go back and read your other stories.  :)  Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: WeAreBorgg Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 09:11 pm Title: Streets that follow like a tedious argument

I've got a scratch.  I don't know what it is ... but it itches.  Oh, I know, I'm itchin' for an update!  I love this story and I check at least twice a day to see if it's updated.  No wonder it's the top favorited story of all time.  Keep up the great writing!

You're adoring fan <3,

We Are Borgg 

Reviewer: Office O Holic Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 05:03 pm Title: Streets that follow like a tedious argument

I love it!! Keep em coming Mox!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 04:47 pm Title: Streets that follow like a tedious argument

Poor Pam...I hope we soon find out what's wrong with her. Is she realy sick, or is she just avoiding Jim (and Karen?).

I really like where Vixen is going with her inquiries. If anyone can blow the whole conspiracy open, it's her!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 04:26 pm Title: Streets that follow like a tedious argument

oh, you're killing me Mox. so many close calls! who is this vexin?!?!  i'm DYING to know! and poor jim, he's gotta be all sorts of confused. and pam, what's wrong?!?!?! i wanna know what's wrong with pam!!  don't take too long to update! ^_^

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 02:19 pm Title: Streets that follow like a tedious argument

= AW. He needs to go see her!! Rating a 10, like usual, great work moxie!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 02:03 pm Title: Streets that follow like a tedious argument

Aw, distant!Pam is making me sad... I hope we find out what's wrong (and Jim fixes it) soon!

Reviewer: kitesflyhigher Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 12:16 pm Title: Streets that follow like a tedious argument

What's wrong with Pam?  Ah, update soon please.  I'm in love with this story.  I want to marry it.

Reviewer: gwgal Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23, 2007 09:57 am Title: Streets that follow like a tedious argument

This is such an addictive story - please update very soon!  I'm curious to know who Vexin is, and of course what will happen.  I thought maybe Vexin was Kelly (who's kind of a Vixen off-line) but I think Vexin's been on the chat for a while and Kelly only recently learned about it.  I'm all out of theories.  Great job!

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