8 [Report This]Date: November 06, 2009 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
don't get me wrong, i love love love this, but a little "factual" critique for the last little vignette: while babies, on average, start to say "mama" or "dada" at around 8 months old, and can say one or two words at 1 year, the average child doesn't start stringing words together in sentences until around 18 months.
Date: September 27, 2009 10:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh the fluff. The sweetness! I think I got a cavity! I like the progression from content, to longing, to a slight pining, to satisfaction, and finally bliss. Or at least, that sort of saw each morning. Very lovely to read. Everyone seems to be a fan of flower names for Pam and Jim’s children!
10 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2009 07:29 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm just reading this now (new to The Office) But this was really good, I especially like the Karen one. And I bet you really enjoyed saying I Told You So, when it turned out the Pam was there first :P
Date: October 20, 2008 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, I also happen to believe that Pam worked at Dunder Mifflin first. So does Greg Daniels, according to one interview, so as far as I'm concerned, you've got it right. This was a really sweet story. The fluffiest of JAM fluff. I especially liked the part where Jim compares Pam's name to that of a character on a British sitcom, and wonders if she'll change his life. Great job!
10 [Report This]Date: July 28, 2008 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG I love this story it's beautiful in so many ways!
Date: July 07, 2008 01:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw, that was really sweet.
Oh, btw. Actually, Pam has been there longer than Jim. 'Cause she showed him to his desk on his first day. 'cause she warned him about Dwight. So you were right about that
10 [Report This]Date: December 16, 2007 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
i REALLY liked it :)
Date: June 06, 2007 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Totally unigue and well-written. Found one thing that bothered me though. Jim never said I love you to Karen. And I don't think he slept with Katy. But still... beautiful story!
Author's Response: Thanks! But since we don't really know much about his relationships with Katy and Karen outside what happened in and around the office and the camera people, those two stories were completely fictionalised. I mean, Jim's a grown man, and he was with Katy for a while, so I'd assume he slept with her at least once. And he was with Karen for six months and never said "I love you"? If I were Karen, I'd have dumped him for that, LOL. So yeah, just what I figured would have happened between them.
Date: March 15, 2007 08:03 am Title: Chapter 1
simply great. of course, mornings four and five were the best, because they involve happy jam
Date: March 13, 2007 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVED this! Exactly what I wanted to read tonight! My heart did a cartwheel over this.
Date: March 13, 2007 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is gloriously, ridiculously, fabulously sentimental. And I love it. What's happened to me as a person when I rejoice at Karen's pain. I suck. But you rock. can't wait for your next one.
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2007 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cutest story ever!
Date: March 13, 2007 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww yay I love five things, especially ones that end in fantastic fluff
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2007 07:54 am Title: Chapter 1
THANK YOU FOR THE FLUFF!! This is better than 3 cups of coffee to get my morning started!
and as for those chapter end notes: THAT'S WHAT SHE SAID!!!!! ^_^
Date: March 13, 2007 06:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. I like the progression, too.
Date: March 13, 2007 06:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Although morning number 4 is my favorite, you've made Pam an integral part of all of Jim's mornings. Which is exactly what Jim-in-love would do! And you're right, her name does sound like it's from a Britcom.