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Reviewer: Duchess Cupcake Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2018 05:33 am Title: Kevin

This is really great! I’m a big Karen fan (just not for Jim), and I agree 100% that she’s not as genuinely confident as she’s sometimes depicted. Not as an insult; it’s just part of her journey. And spot-on that Kevin is equal parts apathetic and intuitive. Great take on that! (I’m a Kevin fan, too. I have a soft spot for that big guy! 🙂) Well done!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 06:45 pm Title: Kevin

I love that this was from Kevin's POV - it's fun to read different views.  And this line was awesome - "It would be better for Karen too-- she had no idea that she was going to have a house dropped on her fragile psyche eventually, and it may as well be now".

Reviewer: injoy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 12:48 pm Title: Kevin

good stuff, here.  like someone else said, i dig it when the minor characters get a little fleshing out.  you did that well with Kevin, here.  

 they say you're either lucky with cards or at love.  i'd get my ass kicked by kev, but it'd be a battle, not a massacre, that's for sure.  

respect. 

Reviewer: Maybe Once Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 10:26 am Title: Kevin

Awesome.   I love all the hidden stuff about Kevin, who is kind of a cross between James Bond and the Pillsbury Doughboy...You really explored it well.....Great job!

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 08:31 am Title: Kevin

I KNEW there was always more to Kevin. What with all his knowledge of Naval history and all that. He KNOWS strategy.

And yes, someone needs to kick Jim's ass. In a good, friendly way. Not in a Roy's gonna kill you way.

Although Kevin kicking Roy's ass is just making me all kinds of giggly.

Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex

Reviewer: Jamster Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 03:45 am Title: Kevin

I really loved how you represented Kevin in this. We rarely get to see his side of the story. The one aspect I miss, in regards to this story, is one of my favorite quotes, "Niiiiice."

I could definitely see Kevin saving Jam. He's definitely not the chump that most people seem to pass him off as.

Author's Response: You are so right! -- thanks for the feedback.  I just had to edit the story to add his signature line (describing the view during Karen's song)

Reviewer: Rowena666 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13, 2007 03:22 am Title: Kevin

I love stories like this, that flesh out the more minor characters.

"Jim was blinded by uncertainty, but he could be stirred to action with a bit of a friendly asskicking."

Oh, for the love of M&Ms, administer some asskicking on the show, Kevin.

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