Date: March 24, 2007 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. My favourite line was "and it's like they're competing for who can hide the most and who can say the least." It's so true and angsty and everything they are about. Great work!
9 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2007 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sigh...you captures so much pain and heartbreak and so little words. Amazing.
Date: March 22, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
ooh i like the song. now i have it stuck in my head but a good story.poor jim, he has a rough life hearing about roy.
10 [Report This]Date: March 19, 2007 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Insightful, and such elegant writing, packing so much into so few words.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was kind of funny to me how short this ended up, because I feel like it took me forever to write. I guess it was pretty emotional.
Date: March 19, 2007 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I miss season 2 JAM, and this captured our poor Jim so perfectly, really. I love that its such a short glimpse into what he's thinking, yet very very powerful. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so happy that I was able to get S2 Jim since it's been SO long since we've seen him (happy OR sad).
Date: March 19, 2007 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
He gets nervous again, and it's like they're competing for who can hide the most and who can say the least.
He knows he's winning.
This is EXACTLY what Jim/Pam was all about in season 2. And it's the same now, only in reverse.
I love the insights that you presented here.
Thanks so much. (I'm gonna stalk you on LJ too, btw)
cheers.
--Lex
Author's Response: Well, thank YOU so much! :) Stalk away, because I enjoy it!
Date: March 19, 2007 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh. this is really, really good. the words just ooze that terrible clenched feeling in the most fitting of ways, and the last line is just perfect. wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I personally was unsure about the last line because it was something that just came to me and I threw it, and I'm so glad to know you think it's good!
Date: March 19, 2007 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh so excellent. I *love* the idea of the silent battle between Pam and Jim over who can hide their thoughts/feelings the best- it ties in so well with their season 2/3 dance. Great job, as always.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy that you liked this!
Date: March 19, 2007 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this, becasue I like sad stuff and it fits the prompt really well.
Good Job
(This review doesn't really make sense, sorry :P)
Author's Response: Yeah I guess this is very sad, and I'm happy you liked it! Thanks!
Date: March 19, 2007 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. "And he keeps waiting for you told me you were over it so that he can strike back with I had to lie because." That is really powerful. Thanks for this.
By the way, I love your name, and the scene it comes from.
Author's Response: Hahaha I love that scene too. It's one of my favorite Jim/Pam moments. Actually it's when Pam asks Jim if he uses fabric softener, and he says, "yeah, don't you?" but I couldn't come up with a name out of that. :( Thanks for reading!