Date: March 26, 2007 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh this is so real and so them. All those little details (Flip flops & lean pockets?? Rushmore & the big screen TV? Fantastic.) really made me feel this.
And that moment at the end was perfect. There's always that moment with Pam where she could spill out everything she's holding inside, yet it always tips slightly the other way and she says something like "I should go." Really well done--loved the complete non-drama of this.
Date: March 26, 2007 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Pam!!! Perfect opportunity to say... something. Anything! I hope Jim does have a "well, I was expecting that" kind of attitude instead of being angry at Pam. I guess we'll see what happens...
More would be great.
Date: March 26, 2007 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1
interesting post cocktails. it isn't really much, but, its simple. and realistic (although i think i say that about most of these, i can see all of them happening). but i like how simple it is. it isn't a huge fight, it isn't a big romance. its shopping and a movie. and, yeah.really cool
9 [Report This]Date: March 26, 2007 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1
"She laughs in all the right places and it hurts, like something’s pushing against the bottom of her heart, pressing it up to her throat and she’s choking."
Amazing. It captures exactly how "right" their connection is and how toxic it is because they aren't together. I love what you did here- exactly what the show does. You showed us aftermath with absolutely no drama or forward motion. Big things happen but nothing changes. It's maddening, but you've captured it beautifully.
Date: March 25, 2007 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
hmmm....this is interesting actually. It's full of information and avoidance and moments full of so many unidentifiable things.
Thanks for much.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 25, 2007 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
So you should definitely do one for every day of the week. That would be fun.
Date: March 25, 2007 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
yeah, you should continue it. please.
8 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like your style of writing. Please continue!
Date: March 25, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
please continue....there's still a loong time before the next new episode...so i'm eating up these post cocktail fics :o)