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Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2024 12:56 am Title: I think when I like someone again, I'll just kinda know.

I really cant find the words other than my last review so yeah. This story has messed up my heart in such a good way. It's gonna stay with me for such a long long time. THANK YOU.

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2024 12:55 am Title: I think when I like someone again, I'll just kinda know.

I feel like this story rewired my brain holy shit?

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2024 12:40 am Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

my heart is just in agony, it's gotten SO TWISTED but damn the way you described Jim having to need a safety net? Just DAMN

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2024 12:31 am Title: It's been a really rough couple of days... this helps a little.

this is breaking my heart omg the absolute TWIST!?!? damn 😭

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2024 12:24 am Title: Well I heard they made out... and had sex.

i feel like my stomach bottomed out omg? Okay he wasnt a douche but ..sigh yeah. Truly just having fun on the boat. Also. Ilove how this kinda mirrors what Ryan said about him being different bec of the environment of the office. Amazing foreshadowing(?) is that correct? But yeah just amazing writing all around.

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2024 12:16 am Title: I did not do that. That sounds disgusting.

JESUS. CHRIST. okay first of all WOW second of all HOLY SHIT third of all...i am actually incredibly glad about the end...see i was worried cuz I dont exactly love Karen becoming collateral in this way :( this is such a thrilling side of Pam but at the same time :(((( Besides that, it's incredible how youve written Ryan here. Im kinda glad she said his name instead.

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2024 12:04 am Title: Sparkling cider is very good.

Not done reading but once again, literally this story has it all. Angela being herslef but also softer to Pam is making my heart break. I loved how it's almost similar to how Dwight was soft to Pam during his concussion. And the way you write Angela and Dwight!! I can see why Pam would feel jealous 🥲 the way you baked the angst into this is splendid

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2024 11:59 pm Title: I just don't want it to be weird... you know?

At this point I'm just hoping HOPING ryan doesnt become a douche PLEASE IM BEGGING

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2024 11:50 pm Title: I love girl talk

Okay finally done reading the entire chapter. You balance the tense moments between them and such cute banter SO WELL. It's almost like I'm also Pam, interspersed with moments of glee and then anxiety and angst. The pacing is exceptional. And that little question during the drinking game about cheating tumbled me out of my seat

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2024 11:44 pm Title: I love girl talk

NOT DONE READING BUT I HAVE TO COMMENT ON DWIGHT AND PAM HIGH FIVING it's like you looked directly into my brain for this fic it literally has EVERYTHING. I love Pam's boldness here and how she gets along with everyone. I needed that for her in canon. And jim being jealous over someone who isnt a total moron (sorry roy) THANK YOU

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2024 11:35 pm Title: I think you're thinking of the Hunt for Red October

You write Ryan and Pam's dynamic in a way that has me rooting for them im so sorry? At this point I'm just hoping they remain good friends instead if they cant be endgame 🥺

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2024 11:20 pm Title: The suspense is just so exciting, isn't it?

The banter is just SO ADORABLE 😭😭😭 oh Jim...get your head on straight before I get Dwight's right hand to do it for you tsk tsk

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2024 11:09 pm Title: Anybody making out in here? Not yet, give it time.

Im here for the drama both in the reviews and in the story AHAHAHAH this is entertaining 😭 kinda rooting for Ryan cuz him and Pam are my crackship and this is SO CUTE im sorry. And once again it's satisfying for me how absolutely in shambles Jim is 🤣 highkey never rlly got over how ...douchey he was when she was trying to apologize for Roy in canon so sorry bro im rooting for Ryan for a bit 🤭

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2024 10:55 pm Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic

There's a deleted scene in The Job where Ryan actually jokes with Pam and it was SO. CUTE. I can totally see early season Ryan getting along somewhat with Pam, before he turns into a douche 😭 i absolutely adore how you e written the interactions here and with Karen too 🥺 they rlly would have been such a great friends. And jealous Jim is just the icing on the cake for me 🫶

Reviewer: beanchimjin Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2024 10:30 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Sorry not done reading but the fact that michael and dwight were so worried abt pam after Roy's outburst brought tears to my eyes; i love their bizarre friendship so much

Reviewer: grc73 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2023 01:30 am Title: I think when I like someone again, I'll just kinda know.

I know this was written some years ago, but thought deserved a review. On the one hand this was brilliantly written and very absorbing, but I also wasted over an hour of my life for Pam and RYAN?! That’s should have had a warning! Absolutely abhorrent as an end for me I’m afraid (I should have seen it coming) Congrats on the excellent writing though. JAM FOREVER!

Reviewer: MaryESP Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2021 01:51 pm Title: I think when I like someone again, I'll just kinda know.

Wow, this was not where I thought (or wanted) the story to go, but you did a great job.

Reviewer: MaryESP Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2021 11:25 am Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic

Ok, I hate Ryan but, I'm living this so much. 😆😆

Reviewer: pretzel_day Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2020 01:31 pm Title: I love girl talk

I read this a long time ago, and I still come back to it. It's a fun ride all the way through, and the final two chapters hit especially hard. There are so many lines that I've quoted to myself.

I love your attention to detail in this story. You manage so many little throwbacks, like the stamps that don't say "love" on them and Ryan asking Jim to send a postcard from Australia. Your use of quotes as chapter titles is honestly inspired.

The characterization is amazing. You use real issues from the show that undermine Jim/Pam (e.g. Pam being friends with Dwight, Pam being friends with Karen, Pam wanting something more than Dunder-Mifflin, Jim always holding onto the railing) to make Pam want more. And Jim is so recognizable as he leads Karen on and tries to start a relationship with Pam without really putting himself out there.

I ship Ryan/Pam, but I appreciate how this fic really transcends shipping. At its heart, this story is a love letter to Pam, and I'm very proud of her every time that she realizes that she needs to do something for herself.

Thank you for a wonderful story! 

Reviewer: Identitytheftisntajokejim Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2019 06:43 pm Title: Anybody making out in here? Not yet, give it time.

GO RYAN! Sorry if I'm late to this site but I kind of dig stories like this and I'm so glad I found this!!!!

Reviewer: cbcgirl1 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2019 04:04 am Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

I'm going to be honest, when I started reading this I had actually no idea it was Ryan/Pam, I came here looking for Jim/Pam and just wasn't paying attention. But I have to say you completely SOLD me on Ryan/Pam! This was such a gorgeous story! The relationship grew so naturally, and you really made Jim and Pam not work in a way that seemed believable and in character! You are so talented, thanks for writing this!

Reviewer: Dark_Pandora Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2017 04:17 pm Title: I think when I like someone again, I'll just kinda know.

Awesome ! Ryan and Pam is the best- please more of them. Also when you said she went tober to his place you never said it was Ryan's place so you might have wanted to state a name .

Reviewer: Boysenberry Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2016 07:01 pm Title: I think when I like someone again, I'll just kinda know.

Ugh. This was sad.

Reviewer: drodrey Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2011 09:44 am Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

So I know this was written agessss ago. But it's such a different fic that I just need to vent, even if you probably won't read this.

I like Jim in this. I think you've portrayed him fairly spot-on, in a broody, angsty way. One of the things I think everyone loves about Jim is that he's always just been so in love with Pam. Even when he was with Karen, even when he was in Stamford, even when she shut him down, he loved her. And I like that you've portrayed that in this.

Pam in this is... too much I think. I appreciate what you're trying to do with her but i just don't see it. I mean, this was prior even to the fancy new beesly we have now. She was still wearing her hair up (ultimate symbolism), she hadn't had her coal walk, she hadn't done, or been through any of the things that make her the stronger character we see in the series now. The thought of her jumping into a relationship with Ryan, at this point in the series, seems just off. At first, I thought she was just using him to bait Jim, which I can imagine a bit, but yeah, not to this extent.

And Ryan. I like that you justified his douchieness. I'd probably be a bitch if i had to work with michael scott too. And in S1-3 he was half way normal. It took my brain a while to work its way around the dynamic they have now in the series - where Ryan and Pam seem to hate each other - to where you're portraying them to be. But yeah, all I could think about when I was reading this at the start, was Ryan's continuous rejection of Pam when Jim left. Like Pam's smiles at him in the conference room and him being like "what". I don't know. It just didn't sit right.

But honestly, it was fantastically well written. I'm a die hard JAM fan, so I was never going to fall in love with this. So you did pretty well in trying to convince a lost cause.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2010 03:32 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Okay, how have I NOT rea this before?

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