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Reviewer: speedbumpsal Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 02:48 am Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

yay!!!!!!

well, i want the show to end differently.... but this fic was perfect!

Reviewer: aurorasmile Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 01:32 am Title: I think when I like someone again, I'll just kinda know.

I absolutely loved this ending!!!!!  Plus I'm listening to "The luckiest" by Ben Folds  it was PERFECT!! i could almost cry

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 01:27 am Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Awwww! Well, I hope your Pam's happy. I do mean that because they seem really good together. Too bad, Jim! You just had to bring Karen along to Scranton!

I really enjoyed this fic! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: serialcrimper Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 01:27 am Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

I'm de-lurking just to tell you how much I've enjoyed this story. I SERIOUSLY check MTT more than twice a day, just to see if you've updated. Now that the story's over, I kind of don't know what I'm going to do with myself anymore (haha). 

Just like most of the people who've commented, I'm a die-hard JAM fan. I never expected to be on board with Pam/Ryan, but by the last two or three chapters, I really wanted them to end up together. You wrote such a satisfying ending that you made the Ryan and Pam hook-up totally believable, while still giving JAM some sort of closure (on Pam's side, at least).

Fabulous, fabulous job. I abso-fucking-lutely love this fic. ;) 

Reviewer: aaliokulta Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 01:23 am Title: I think when I like someone again, I'll just kinda know.

Yes!!!! Oh, god, I'm so ridiculously freaking happy you went the Ryan route.... gah! I am quite literally shaking with happiness. I wish I could be more coherent right now, but that's totally not possible. I teared up at so many places during Pam's goodbyes... Kelly and Angela and Michael. And freaking Dwight. Oh geez. And Ryan and Ryan and Ryan... I love him. Seriously. If he were real, my boyfriend would be in trouble. Nevermind that I'd be waiting in line with everyone else you've converted.

I'm just going to stop my rambling now, and read this story all over again. Thank you ever so. :)

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 01:20 am Title: I think when I like someone again, I'll just kinda know.

Though I am very unhappy with the way you ended this, I did enjoy reading it

I hope no one eggs your house.... :) 

Reviewer: HauntedLaundry Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 01:13 am Title: I think when I like someone again, I'll just kinda know.

i love this story. 

perhaps my giant crush on bj novak plays a part??

 

no but seriously. i've been following this story since yo started & i love it. 

Reviewer: speedbumpsal Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 02:14 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

ooooo! i keep checking for more and it's driving me insane! What have you done to me?

Reviewer: Cate the Great Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 12:08 pm Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

*whispers* ....pick Ben.....pick Ben........

Three words: fantastic, Stupendous, Amazing...... Excellent.....wonderful.....

Reviewer: Pam Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2007 10:31 pm Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

I'm liking this more and more everytime that I read another chapter.  I've just had to separate my feelings about the show from it.  I love Ryan and Kelly together, and of course, I'm such a Jam fan.  But, you've written Ryan so well.  I really liked it that he said, "I’m not Jim [...] Which means that I’m not moving to another state, and I’m not going to go out and find some replacement girlfriend."  And, Pam really is trying to do things for herself now.  It really takes a lot to get my mind off of Jam, and for the moment, you've captured it with this fic. 

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2007 03:50 pm Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

Wow that was a really good chapter. So much to digest.

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2007 02:52 pm Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

Oh, wow, I was disappointed in how Jim handled that situation even before it was revealed that he hadn't dumped Karen yet. There was just something very off-putting and wrong how he just took her out to lunch and made his move and didn't really account for some of his actions and that was just... it. Feeling so bad for Ryan for his obvious feelings for Pam and what he must have had to put up with from Kelly's talk!

Reviewer: Team_Pam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2007 02:00 pm Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

I must say... despite being a JAM'er... I LOVE where this is going. Ryan is just... SUCH the better guy in this story. And I'm glad someone finally pointed out how mean Jim and Pam's pranks were! You have done a really good job pointing out Jim's flaws. Sad to say it but... I am not loving Jim's character right now. Great writing! Please update before the weekend!! :)

Reviewer: thedominantmalekitty Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2007 10:43 pm Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

One more chapter??? No!!!!!!!!!! What will I do with myself???

I don't know how you have managed to make me root for Ryan but you have. Well done!

Have I mentioned that I love this??

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2007 08:32 pm Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

Holy crap!!!  I gasped at this line of Ryan's:

“Which means that I’m not moving to another state, and I’m not going to go out and find some replacement girlfriend,” he says simply. “I’m not giving up on this. I just wanted you to know that so that if you decide to stop running from it you’ll know that the door is open.”

 Holy crap!!  I didn't realize he was into her like that!  Wow...you never cease to amaze me with this story.

 And Jim keeping Karen until he knew about Pam's feelings!  Double (or is this triple now?) holy crap!  Just...wow.

 

Reviewer: Klankie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2007 07:35 pm Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

uurrrggghh.  I am so torn.  I don't want her to abandon Ryan because I have kind of fallen in love with the Ryan that you write.  But at the same time I think I am hard wired to root for Jim and Pam being together.  I guess I just have to constantly check for updates to see which side will win and which will lose.

Oh yeah, awesome job as usual.

Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2007 06:20 pm Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

My first response to your END NOTES is "NOOOO...." This cannot end...

Ryan is so sad in the breakroom. It felt like he wanted to just grab and take her away from if all. And Jim... I did not even recognize him... He crushed Pam's heart when the returned to the office. (Is this Jim I love???)

I want Ryan to run after Pam as she leaving for NY...

On the show I would for Pam to start something w/ someone in the office... Maybe the writers will run w/ your ideas....

Reviewer: skjbean Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2007 05:53 pm Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

So good!

Reviewer: quietdecember Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2007 05:15 pm Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

GO PAM!!!!!!!

Woo! that was awesome, 

jrekt gaoifjkso[fdjg Ryan can always be my boyfriend... 

"I must be really hard to get over" oh Kelly 

Okay I love everything about this chapter, Pam doing what she wants, Jim being Jima nd not getting it, Ryan...

:D Totally amazing

 ...And Pam now has what -three cute guys into her (life is no fair)

Reviewer: 69 cups of noodles Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2007 03:45 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Oh, this is such an excellent chapter!  It adds a lot of reasoning as to why Jim's being the way he is, and I like that Pam is just as frustrated with him as he was towards her in B&G.  I like her taking a hold of her life and making her own decisions and not relying on him for happiness.  I love that she was honest with him about not wanting him to break up with Karen for her, because really...who would hear someone say that and be like, "yeah okay sure!"  So you've gotten her so realistically and I'm just really, really loving this.

Which means that I’m not moving to another state, and I’m not going to go out and find some replacement girlfriend,” he says simply. “I’m not giving up on this. I just wanted you to know that so that if you decide to stop running from it you’ll know that the door is open.”

sljasdfjasf.  WHY IS THIS SO PERFECT?  I love Ryan for saying this because it's EXACTLY the kind of thing Pam needs to hear from someone.  She knows how Jim is, she's made it clear that she's aware he's still holding on to Karen for safety, and Ryan wants her to know that HE IS NOT THAT GUY.  SO, SO, AWESOME.

One last thing...I love the way Kelly totally thinks Ryan was trying to check up on her.  That's just so something Kelly would do and it was so adorable.  I can't wait for the next chapter, even if it's the last one :(

Reviewer: Weetzie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2007 02:47 pm Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

Only one?! How will I live without updates to "Hey Jealousy"? Well, it's been amazing. I especially loved this chapter and your characterization of Jim. He is so unattractive in this story. And Ryan's little part about not being Jim was perfect. I almost wish he were like this on the show, in love with Pam and all.

Reviewer: fireworkfiasco Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2007 02:44 pm Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

okay, i've had this sitting open in my browswer for close to forever because i was trying to think of something suave and cool to say about your freaking awesomeness. unfortunately, you've so blown me away that i'm just going to nod and beg for more, okay? i mean - YES. everything pam is thinking right now makes such perfect sense because jim HAS NOT matured in any way shape or form. he's basically a really tall high school junior who's going to fail english if he doesn't start paying attention to the teacher. :X  and ryan's declaration that he's not going anywhere made me SO happy because that's EXACTLY what pam needs - she needs that stability and not the pouting retreat that everyone and their mother sympathizes with. oh, ryan. oh, pam. more smexy love?

and NO, one more chapter is NOT okay with me. heads will ROLL or something. i demand more. only in a nice way filled with kittens and puppies and lolliepops and roller skates. seriously. ;D

Reviewer: slpchic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2007 02:19 pm Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

So jam is kinda dissappointing....i never thought i would ever say that

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2007 01:55 pm Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

Gosh!!! 

You've made Jim into a pretty big jerk (still dating Karen, but going to lunch with Pam and kissing her at lunch and in the kitchen?)  I couldn't even believe it when you revealed that!  "He’s not a newer version of himself, he’s still holding onto the railing like he always has." And after she had been thinking he was New Jim, who could talk about his feelings without a safety net!  (Wow, not so New Jim is a slimeball!)

You've made Ryan totally cool with his "I'm not going anywhere" attitude.  His little speech was totally dawesome.

And then, Jim wanted Pam to do the DM internship instead of a real graphic design school!  Maybe he wants her "to be a receptionist here, forever".  And then they kissed in the kitchen and Pam was not into it!  

DinkinFlicka, you've slowly and painfully worn me down, like Andy does with "the lady-folk".  With your particular flavors of Jim, Ryan, and Pam, I declare that Ryan and Pam are the new 'ship on which to sail. 

Congratulations, universe.  You win. 

(This is where you get to do the 'Rocky' dance, Flicka.  We can probably save the dojo for another time.) 

Huggy Hugs. (/Dwight)

Reviewer: Lulabella Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2007 01:46 pm Title: It's impractical, I'm not going to try to get a house like that.

Oh God- Ryan makes me feel sad... I'm still in awe over the fact that I'm rooting for Pam/Ryan in this story... and I'm hardcore rooting for them. This story's written in such a believable way that I can actually see it happening!

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