Date: March 27, 2007 05:51 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
okay, consider me sucked in. :-)
More please!
Author's Response: If it means I get more Squirrel, which is like an addiction at this point, I will do anything you like!
Date: March 27, 2007 05:41 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Ooh really good, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I look forward to hearing from you again ;)
Date: March 27, 2007 05:29 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Love it. Write more. Now please?
Author's Response: Your wish is my command ;) Hope you like the next chapter!
Date: March 27, 2007 05:14 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Favoriting this, DF. Sounds like the start of a great story. And who is Jim to act all jealous with Karen on his shoulder? Honestly.
Author's Response: I totally agree about Jim having no room to complain, hehe, but I also imagine him acting like a total brat if Pam was getting flirty with someone new right in front of him.
Date: March 27, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Oh boy! Is Jim JEALOUS???
I LOVE IT! Ok, I'm here for the long-haul. Post more please! :)
Snarkland
Author's Response: Oh, you better believe it! :) Glad your on for the ride, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Date: March 27, 2007 04:32 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
very much likey yes. Your writing is just wonderful. Update soon Mkay?
Author's Response: Hehe, consider it done! Off to update...
Date: March 27, 2007 04:23 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
This is great! Please continue. I don't know how you did it... but I actually liked Ryan in this story. And Jim? You are cold, sir. Can we say bitter? Or maybe he was just asking why Pam was there because this is something he expects Karen to want him to say... Continue, please!
Author's Response: Hehe thank you! I'm glad you liked Ryan in this (even if you usually don't) and yes, Jim is acting like a brat and will probably continue to do so for a little while :)
Date: March 27, 2007 03:53 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Well of course I love this - because you wrote it. You never disappoint. That aside, this has so many ways to go I am so looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Aaw, thank you for the compliment! I'm glad you are looking forward to more, and you will certainly receive it!
Date: March 27, 2007 03:50 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Lookin' good, Dink! I can't wait to see where this is going. Hopefully it will end better than "Booze Cruise" did! ;)
Can't wait for more. -CH
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the start, because there is plenty more to come ;)
Date: March 27, 2007 03:42 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
I really really love this idea. Continue on. Please. Its lovely. There are so many excellent ways this could go.
Author's Response: Thank you! There will be more up soon so stay tuned!
Date: March 27, 2007 03:40 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Ooh, reading the back of Jim's neck...I like it. And I'm intrigued...please make more soon. (And Bayonne?? Who'd of thunk it.)
Author's Response: There will be more up very soon (if not today then tomorrow morning). And, I'm such a dork that I actually looked up where in New Jersey that cruises could depart from and Bayonne was what I came up with :) Stay tuned!
Date: March 27, 2007 03:35 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Oooh, Jim's angry because Pam fell asleep on Ryan's shoulder! Jealous!
I just adore this. The Vance Refrigeration van and your description of it, the "fifth circle of hell", Jim trying to hear the conversation, just lots of great stuff.
I actually don't think Jim is going to be really angry with Pam, nor do I think he has a leg to stand on if he is. But: a) we'll see, and 2) (hahaha, I crack myself up) I suspend my disbelief for this story.
It's sweet that Michael and Dwight are trying to protect Pam.
I look forward to more!
Author's Response: There is definitely going to be quite a bit of jealously tossed around in this fic (hence the name), and I'm talking about from every which way, hehe :) Glad you like it so far!
10 [Report This]Date: March 27, 2007 03:35 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
okay so i'm definitely already a fan of this fic. can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! There will be more very very soon :)
Date: March 27, 2007 03:32 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Love it already! I'd be happy to beta, if you're still interested.
Author's Response: I am definitely definitely interested! In fact, I just emailed you the next chapter :)
8 [Report This]Date: March 27, 2007 03:30 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one
Starts out great! When do we get to the explicit part?
Author's Response: Oh don't you worry ;) It'll be along down the road a bit... I've got the whole thing pretty mapped out. Glad you like it so far!