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Reviewer: rainy01 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 08:32 pm Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic

I am excited to see where you're going to take this and I am loving the Ryan and Pam interaction. I think the part about the office doing weird things to Ryan is totally plausible since you so see fun Ryan every once in awhile like when he was on the sales call with Dwight or at the bar during Cocktails.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you said that!  People seem to peg Ryan as an ass sometimes, but I just think he hates his job, haha.  I think if we saw him out of the office more it'd be different.  Glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: Bennie Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 08:30 pm Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic

You know what would be a delicious reward for me personally?  Ryan and Pam ending up together.  Which reminds me that I am way behind on reviewing your stuff.  

So, you know, think about it. ;)  This is good so far, I can't wait to see where it goes.  Yay for you! 



Author's Response: Oh God, you've figured out my Ryan/Pam weakness... I wish there were a thousand Ryan/Pam fics :) I feel like I would have stones thrown at me, hehe, but don't worry.. I think maybe you'll enjoy what happens too *evil grin*

Reviewer: maryuc Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 08:26 pm Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic

this is really good - i appreciate your authors note at the end because seriously ... ryan and pam - yuck!  brin on the jam!!!

Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it!  I love the JAM, but sometimes it fun to experiment just a little, isn't it? ;)

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 08:10 pm Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic

I love cranky!Jim.  I hope his facade breaks soon!

And yeah, there's Squirrel coming...... ;-)

Good stuff, Dinkin! 



Author's Response: Yay Squirrel!  And I'm glad you're enjoying so far :)  I love being able to entertain someone who provides me with so much entertainment!

Reviewer: fasterthansnakes Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 08:08 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

I love your stuff, but something about this story just fills me with dread. I don't think I can bear to watch Jim's heart broken for like the 3981st time as he watches Pam and Ryan. I actually LIKE Ryan and I don't want to have him fall under the Pam spell (ryan and kelley 4 eva) only to have his heart broken. Or conversely, I don't know if I could take it he and Pam end up together either...sigh...but I know I'll still be reading, that's why I'm still watching too...we're all masochists

Author's Response: Haha, well I hope I didn't scare you away too much.  I don't plan on making it super angsty if that helps at all, but I don't want to give away too much ;)

Author's Response: Oh, and I am also all about Ryan and Kelly 4 eva!  I love those two so so much.

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 08:08 pm Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic

Awesome so far - and fast too.  Maybe you should spread it out a bit so we have time to bask in the glory before moving on to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Haha, asking for slower updates?? Blasphemy :) Just kidding, actually I'm going to try and go for a chapter a day (or every other day) so we'll see how that goes.  Glad you like it so far!

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 08:07 pm Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic

Haha.  Looks like someone (*cough* Jim) is a bit jealous.  I love where this is going.  

Author's Response: Glad you like it!  Jealous indeed...

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 08:05 pm Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic

Why do I get pissed when Jim puts his arm around Karen?

Why am I strangly fascinated by a Ryan/Pam "whatever".

I do not know these answers.  I do know that I am hooked on this story!!  And my Kelly question was answered! 



Author's Response: Hehe, I definitely have to agree with your first two questions... as they both plague me as well.  Glad that you're hooked!

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 07:59 pm Title: They were very important in the movie Titanic

Pam & Ryan? Interesting...

I like this story. It's always nice to see what authors do when they take the characters out of the office, and you're doing a great job with it so far. Keep it up!! --CH



Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping that the Pam/Ryan possibilities weren't going to scare the JAM fans away from the story... trust me, jammers should stick around ;)

Reviewer: Emmypie Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 07:34 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

I like it. But your stuff is always great. Keep going please!

Author's Response: Thank you!  Hope you keep reading :)

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 06:48 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Oh sorry, I forgot, how on earth did Ryan manage to Not take Kelly? 

Author's Response: Kelly is in customer relations and only the sales department (and Pam) went on the trip... convenient, no?

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 06:47 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Ohhhh, hurry and update.  This is so good!

Author's Response: Thank you, I will!

Reviewer: Angryhaiku Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 06:46 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Hurrah! This is a really fun premise, and I hope you're telling the truth about more soon. ^^

I'm kind of in love with your treatment of Pam's impression of Ryan, especially (okay, well, she sort of doesn’t),  It feels really true to the characters on The Office, and also the apathetic pettiness of an actual office.

Also, I'm happy to beta for you (if only because I want to read more, sooner!) if you still need one.



Author's Response: I would love a second beta if you're willing!  In fact, I'll e-mail you the third chapter sometime this evening :) Thank you!!

Reviewer: Spookster831 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 06:09 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Haha this sounds like a fun idea.  So wait, is Jan on the cruise?  As Michael's 'spouse'? 

Author's Response: Hmm, I guess I didn't clarify that, but Jan is coming with them as a "corporate representative"... that happens to be sharing a room with Michael ;)

Reviewer: chicagolights Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 06:01 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

I'm definitely getting into it. You absolutely must update soon!!

Author's Response: Done and done :) Let me know what you think!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 05:51 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

okay, consider me sucked in.  :-)

More please! 



Author's Response: If it means I get more Squirrel, which is like an addiction at this point, I will do anything you like!

Reviewer: quietdecember Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 05:41 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Ooh really good, looking forward to more.

 



Author's Response: Thank you!  I look forward to hearing from you again ;)

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 05:29 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Love it. Write more. Now please?

Author's Response: Your wish is my command ;) Hope you like the next chapter!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 05:14 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Favoriting this, DF.  Sounds like the start of a great story.  And who is Jim to act all jealous with Karen on his shoulder?  Honestly.

Author's Response: I totally agree about Jim having no room to complain, hehe, but I also imagine him acting like a total brat if Pam was getting flirty with someone new right in front of him. 

Reviewer: Snarkland Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 04:36 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Oh boy!  Is Jim JEALOUS??? 

I LOVE IT!  Ok, I'm here for the long-haul.  Post more please!  :)

Snarkland



Author's Response: Oh, you better believe it! :) Glad your on for the ride, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

Reviewer: collardgreens Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 04:32 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

very much likey yes. Your  writing is just wonderful. Update soon Mkay?

Author's Response: Hehe, consider it done! Off to update...

Reviewer: Team_Pam Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 04:23 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

This is great! Please continue. I don't know how you did it... but I actually liked Ryan in this story. And Jim? You are cold, sir. Can we say bitter? Or maybe he was just asking why Pam was there because this is something he expects Karen to want him to say... Continue, please!

Author's Response: Hehe thank you!  I'm glad you liked Ryan in this (even if you usually don't) and yes, Jim is acting like a brat and will probably continue to do so for a little while :)

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 03:53 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Well of course I love this - because you wrote it.  You never disappoint. That aside, this has so many ways to go I am so looking forward to reading more!  

Author's Response: Aaw, thank you for the compliment!  I'm glad you are looking forward to more, and you will certainly receive it!

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 03:50 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Lookin' good, Dink! I can't wait to see where this is going. Hopefully it will end better than "Booze Cruise" did!  ;)

Can't wait for more.   -CH



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the start, because there is plenty more to come ;)

Reviewer: oypoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 03:42 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

I really really love this idea. Continue on. Please. Its lovely. There are so many excellent ways this could go.

Author's Response: Thank you! There will be more up soon so stay tuned!

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