10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2011 10:45 pm Title: Epilogue- Risks and Rewards
Oh how this story made me cry! The shouting in the car. the horrible, awful words said. His panic when he couldn't find her.
Then the really hot (yet quick) sex. And then deciding "fuck this waiting crap where one of us might chicken out of the relationship" and getting married in Vegas that very night.
Wow. What did Karen say when she found out they were married?!?
Great, great, great story.
9 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2008 04:09 pm Title: Letting Go
I love Jim again, WORK IT OUT GUYS!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2008 04:05 pm Title: Getting What You Wish For
OMG god, my reviews are all so lame but wtffff will happen lol.
9 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2008 04:01 pm Title: Trying to Say Goodbye
OMG my heart actually BROKE!!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2008 03:57 pm Title: Destroying Lives
OMG, I want to throttle them both lol.
Date: August 16, 2008 02:01 pm Title: Letting Go
The hot chocolate is a perfectly Jim thing to do- we all know that Pam Loves Tea is canon, but hot chocolate is the perfect wintry comfort drink and I loved you put it in there :)
9 [Report This]Date: February 10, 2008 05:21 pm Title: Epilogue- Risks and Rewards
Devastating, angsty, intense, real, and different.
I loved the entire thing. It was amazing. I especially liked the angsty beginning. I'm all for a little heartbroken JAM.
Date: August 06, 2007 03:50 pm Title: Epilogue- Risks and Rewards
Great story! I thoroughly enjoyed the anger and the happiness. (You do anger really well! A lot of "angry Jim & Pam" stories just end up sounding really stilted."
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2007 07:41 pm Title: Epilogue- Risks and Rewards
What a great ending!! I just loved that Jim booked the tickets to Vegas before telling Pam and also before breaking up with Karen! And I also loved how you wove the future paragraphs in with the present. Thanks for the happy ending which for a while I was wondering if we would see...
Date: April 02, 2007 11:47 am Title: Epilogue- Risks and Rewards
this last one is my favorite...i like how it bounces back & forth between the present & future...
Date: April 01, 2007 04:48 pm Title: Epilogue- Risks and Rewards
I loved all the flashbacks mixed in with their doubts. Knowing Jim & Pam will be happy for many many years makes me happy. Wonderful end to the story. And Jim calling her Halpert at the end was a great touch.
Date: April 01, 2007 03:07 pm Title: Epilogue- Risks and Rewards
aww, I loved it!
Date: April 01, 2007 01:32 pm Title: Epilogue- Risks and Rewards
You should write more fluff, this was lovely. I think it was smart to use the flash forward to show them through the years, and I perosnally loved seeing how uncertain they were contrasted with their happy life together. Also, him calling her Halpert instead of Beesly, can i tell you that I got the biggest happiest goofy grin on that!!! Great story, very emotional, very unexpected, but altogether wonderful.
Date: April 01, 2007 10:35 am Title: Epilogue- Risks and Rewards
This was the most perfect, sweetest ending to your fic. I don't know what you're talking about - your fluff was beautifully written! I really, really loved this whole story.
Date: April 01, 2007 09:57 am Title: Epilogue- Risks and Rewards
I respectfully disagree with your chapter notes. Based on this epilogue, you write amazingly good fluff. This is wonderful. I love the current mixed with the future, what you've written and how you've written it, everything.
Thanks so much for this story.
Author's Response: I can't begin to thank you enough for all of your kind reviews, not only for this story but for my others as well. The lines you pointed out in the last chapter were my favorites too (just the idea of Jim thinking of Pam while having sex with Karen is just so hot). I really think the eloping idea was a tad cliche but somehow dysfunctional enough to be perfectly appropriate for these two. You're the bestest!
Date: April 01, 2007 09:50 am Title: Pam Isn't Coming In Tomorrow.....
Wow. Eloping to Vegas. I did not expect that. (/Pam) I just love the way he goes to the computer and does that, then is unsure when explaining it. I do think sometimes that just getting married is the way to go. Not in most cases, but for these two? Oh, yeah. What a great way to relieve the angst and uncertainty.
But... I loved it. Regarding your chapter end notes, I also think that once they are together, they will be "together" pretty quickly. Jim's paragraph about how he'd like to get over her but can't is really amazing. For a woman to hear “I wish that when I’m inside Karen that I don’t have to pretend it’s you to come,” that's like Game Over - he is mine. Amazing. I also liked: “I put a whole fucking human and three states between us.” What a succinct way to put what Jim has been doing.
fasterthansnakes, your "Jim and Pam get together and plan to elope to Vegas" story is the prettiest "Jim and Pam get together and plan to elope to Vegas" story of all the "Jim and Pam get together and plan to elope to Vegas" stories. And I looked at all of them. (/Roy)
And I see you must have written the epilogue, so off I go to see!
Date: April 01, 2007 09:08 am Title: Pam Isn't Coming In Tomorrow.....
i LOVE this chapter
Date: April 01, 2007 09:03 am Title: Destroying Lives
This is great. I love how you couple the moments of "risks" and the moments of "rewards". The whole story was nicely done. I really enjoyed it all equally - both e angst and fluff.
Date: April 01, 2007 08:56 am Title: Epilogue- Risks and Rewards
Well dont - i really enjoyed reading this story and was always excited to see a new chapter up. i really like the ending - a mix of last chapter and epilogue - very clever! Write another story soon!!!
10 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2007 08:52 am Title: Epilogue- Risks and Rewards
You're better at writing fluff than you think - nice job!!
:-)
Date: April 01, 2007 08:13 am Title: Epilogue- Risks and Rewards
AAwww soo cute! I loved the nervousness on both their parts and the little glimpses into the future (chocolate bunny was my favorite)---please keep churning out great angsty/fluffy fics!
9 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2007 07:29 am Title: Epilogue- Risks and Rewards
Aww...sweet. You totally lied when you said you were awful at writing fluff! Those little glimpses into the future were great!
Date: March 31, 2007 09:15 pm Title: Pam Isn't Coming In Tomorrow.....
No more will be wonderful Epilogue please
10 [Report This]Date: March 31, 2007 07:22 pm Title: Pam Isn't Coming In Tomorrow.....
Wow...angry Jim was really making me sad...but then the reconciling and smut...totally made up for it. Jim's thoughts in ch. 4 about Karen not being Pam...perfect.
Date: March 31, 2007 01:16 pm Title: Pam Isn't Coming In Tomorrow.....
I would personally love and epilogue.