Reviews For There Goes My Heart
Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 08:43 am Title: How Many Hearts Will Die Tonight?
Date: April 01, 2007 08:43 am Title: How Many Hearts Will Die Tonight?
its great, its like... horrible, but its great.
i have been toying around with doing something similar (well, not too similar, just similar in the fact that pam and jim aren't together in it).
but this was wonderful. you ... i like it all.
Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 10:03 pm Title: How Many Hearts Will Die Tonight?
Date: March 30, 2007 10:03 pm Title: How Many Hearts Will Die Tonight?
Holy Formatting, Batman!!
Darlin, I think that the story is great. You might just want to go back and make sure it doesn't all look like one big run on sentence.
Thanks!
cheers.
--Lex