7 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2007 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved Jim's reaction to Kelly's question. This was great!
And yeah, like MO said, consider a spoiler warning or just cut that bit out.
Date: April 10, 2007 10:25 am Title: Chapter 2
Nice Karen exit. I am so glad you retold what happened Sunday night, to leave us guessing would have been too cruel
Date: April 10, 2007 08:24 am Title: Chapter 1
I am really enjoying the story, nice job!
You may want to put a spoiler warning in your Summary, as you do reference some upcoming episode plot points...
Date: April 10, 2007 07:48 am Title: Chapter 2
She *should* go for it. Unless the Marketing position is at corporate or something. In which case she should go for the other position--Jim's girlfriend. :)
Date: April 10, 2007 07:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww. I'm really enjoying this. And I love your name.
Date: April 09, 2007 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well that was some ending of a chapter. More please since I can't wait to see Karen's expression.
10 [Report This]Date: April 09, 2007 11:20 am Title: Chapter 1
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOAH! I was sooooo not expecting that!
Date: April 09, 2007 04:15 am Title: Chapter 1
You know what I love about this? It's exactly how it would (should) unfold on the actual show. 'Cause as much as we want to follow them home and watch them make out, it probably not going to happen. Since the viewers are supposed to be kind of "flies on the wall" of the office, it's realistic that we would be able to witness the conversation during the challenge, but then nothing again until Monday morning, when both are acting strangely and we think we know why, but then it turns out to be something different. Awesome idea, especially since most fics tend to take the documentary conceit out of it.
I hope you're planning to continue!
Date: April 09, 2007 12:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Awesome twist, way to stand out, keep it up.
Date: April 08, 2007 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the twist! I'm not muth of what I call a "typing-writer" I tend to write a lot of stuff long hand which means I never post it because I'm to lazy to type it up...anyway I have this fic that is about Jim having to confess to Karen that he's slept with Pam...the set-up is very similiar to this...so I'm super happy that you're doing this! I can't wait to see where you go with this! So keep going I love it!!!
Date: April 08, 2007 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked it. I hope there is more explaining what was missed on Sunday though.
9 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2007 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh man! Love title (so dirty), Survival Day and Jim's confession! I must have more.
Date: April 08, 2007 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooh! A surprise ending! I love it.
I've had this same general pole-standing idea. I hope it happens, because it would almost be like being stuck in an elevator. Very likely that chatting would occur. And lots of giggling (/Jim, The Alliance).
May I say again how much I loved your ending? There's more, right? More? (Hope so.)
Date: April 08, 2007 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting twist at the end! I can't wait to see where this goes next! -CH
Date: April 08, 2007 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whaaaat? Did they, or is he just saying that to make the breakup stick? Gaaaah! Update soon or I will dieeeeee! :)