Date: June 14, 2007 02:30 pm Title: This is not a toy
I don't know if you'll ever revisit this, but since things tend to go all AU wonky anyways during the summer...
I wish you would.
Please!!! this is fun.
Date: April 15, 2007 06:25 pm Title: This is not a toy
Great job. Keep them coming (no pun intended;)
9 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2007 09:16 pm Title: Toby's not totally useless...
what? completed? I hope not! There are 8 hours in a work day!
Author's Response:
unfortunately it is complete...for now.
If I come up with another "break" that involves no speaking of Karen or feelings or any of that ridiculousness then I will definately add on.
thanks for reading!! :)
Date: April 13, 2007 06:38 pm Title: This is not a toy
Haaaaa! "This is not a toy." "Actually, it is a toy." LOL!
That was fabulous. I thought it was just going to be the one chapter for some reason, but I'm pleasantly surprised to get another one. And how much do we love the moon bounce?
Author's Response: I thought it would only be one too, but like Jim said I couldn't let that bounce house go to waste!!
Date: April 13, 2007 02:01 pm Title: Toby's not totally useless...
Who would have known a bouncy castle could be so incredibly sexy?? My kids keep asking me what I'm smiling about. :) Loved this!
Date: April 13, 2007 01:50 pm Title: This is not a toy
Brain broken. Again. I suppose they'll need another 10 minutes to "take care of Jim", no?
The bouncy castle is the new supply closet! Yay!
Date: April 13, 2007 11:39 am Title: Toby's not totally useless...
talking is totally overrated! I love forceful!Jim. And I didn't think it was dubious consent at all, if she had hesitated even a little I don't think he would have gone for it. I'm also all for him cheating on Karen. Like 100% behind it, for some reason Pam cheating on Roy seemed wrong but in my mind Karen is the one that Jim is having an affair with since his heart so obviously belongs to Pam. If you couldn't tell, I loved this. Loved your descriptions of his face especially, awesome.
Author's Response: oh thank you fasterthansnakes, that was the best review in all of history. I knew someone would get where I was going! you rock my face :)
Date: April 13, 2007 10:02 am Title: Toby's not totally useless...
Hm, I'm not sure how I feel about this. Don't get me wrong, you've done a great job (congrats on your first foray into smut! well done!), but for me, this borders on "dubious consent." Jim cheating on Karen and taking Pam almost by force, with no knowledge of his motives or feelings, seems OOC to me. Maybe if there was more of a set up? Anyway, nice smutting :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, I appreciate your honesty.
I realize it's cheating and a little forceful, but I knew if I were to mention any of that it would turn into the same "what about Karen?" "why did you leave me?" "boo hoo hoo" story that I've read a thousand times. I just needed for my own soul to write something that avoided that all together...
besides, talking is totally overrated
thanks for reading anyway :/
Date: April 13, 2007 09:09 am Title: Toby's not totally useless...
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I have been inspired to write another...
give it a few hours ;)
Date: April 13, 2007 07:55 am Title: Toby's not totally useless...
That's a hell of a lot better than a brisk walk around the block. No wonder Jim got that promotion. He's always looking out for the welfare of the team.
Author's Response:
of course he is! He's a brilliant man
:)
10 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2007 07:04 am Title: Toby's not totally useless...
Hell Yea..... Way to go Jim......."He leaves her with one lingering kiss and a simple I miss you" How sweet is that :) Good stuff !!
Date: April 13, 2007 05:58 am Title: Toby's not totally useless...
Good stuff all around, but special kudos for the do it again in an hour line....that was a nice, nice touch. You should have been very pleased with yourself when you thought of that one.
Author's Response:
To be honest, I was. It was one of the first things I came up with when writing, Jim's original greeting and the end...the middle came later.
thanks so much for reading! :)
Date: April 13, 2007 04:12 am Title: Toby's not totally useless...
LOL! Yay I loved that story! =)
Date: April 13, 2007 02:53 am Title: Toby's not totally useless...
Hey, this was great. Loved it that Jim took Toby's advice to heart. Hee. And he'll need another break in an hour. Yeah. How many more hours left till 5? "not a bad day" indeed.
Date: April 13, 2007 01:59 am Title: Toby's not totally useless...
..
I'm a puddle.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it!
my best friend in middle school had an sn that included the phrase "aggiegurl" craaaazy